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Tangerqueen

Writing Quality (5/5): Little to none grammatical mistakes. Perfect descriptions if anything, balanced to the point that it's descriptive but not overbearingly tooooo much Stability of Updates (5/5): Not much to say Story Development (5/5): Really good balance for pacing! There's attention to detail, but at the same time, I don't feel that anything is being dragged on. Character Design (5/5): Honestly honestly honestly. For once we have a princess (well I guess technically not anymore?) that actually acts like she fits the role and isn't just some spoiled whining little brat. I actually want to root for her! World Background (5/5): I love the attention to world building! There's a lot packed in there, but it never feels like an info dump at all! Good luck! And I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!

3yr
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Fantasy_1

love the story the way it's started both were weak character and I am glad they both were going to be strong ,step by step not some cliche story where only ml lead is powerful, I am gonna so loving this story I literally wanted to read this kind of story finally someone made it I hope in the future we can see more fl character magic and all can't wait for the romance, their hate is so intense I can see their love will burn pages

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juderosscardan

loved the book keep writing amazing books

7mth
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Magnexindra

It’s not complete. I find it odd that all the reviews are from 2yrs ago…. The story is good, though the writing gets a bit sloppy around chapter 215. It just needs to be edited a bit. If you don’t like reading stories that aren’t finished, then this isn’t for you. I’m a bit sad that I bought the entire book at once and it turned out that it literally stops in the middle of a scene. And it’s not like it was almost the end… too many story plots were left unresolved that it can’t be fixed with an additional few chapters. Maybe if we beg the author enough, then they will give us an ending. The story is genuinely good, until the king gets caught with his pants down. (There’s no cheating, he literally has no pants on). Once you get there, just don’t bother anymore.

9mth
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Pustulio

This story blew me away. It had me on my toes and I loved every sec of it. The ML is a jerk and I love that the FL is able to stand her ground against him. I wanted to point out that the slap scene was hilarious and so satisfying. Author, keep up the good work! So sad I was only able to read the free chapters 😢.

2yr
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gilttypleasure

wow what a great book inspite it's has less chapter now and slow update don't know what will happen in future but I know that it will be great and interesting the book is like a gem ,it's like I finally found a gem the character background the FL lead I can't wait to see what author has stored.

3yr
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Trini_Troste

Amoo mucho mucho mucho todo, los personajes aun que sobre el príncipe heredero todavía no entiendo si es bueno o malo,, igualmente la historia me está atrapando mucho y es muy interesante, de verdad me encanta !!!

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queenroper

the story has a good plot with an interesting twist...its refreshing to read of the ML being weak and vulnerable instead of the cliche strong ml waiting to support a fragile growing FL. In this case they are both weak and will ultimately have to rely on each other. Love it. Thumbs up

3yr
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Yaminoyosei

This book is really well written. Once I started I couldn't stop reading. I have to say it is very enjoyable and easy to read. I will definitely keep reading. Good job author! 👏

3yr
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Apple_Woods

wow! beautifully written with a strong FL! love love love how the author portrays her stuggles and imperfections. her passion may have gotten her on the wrong side at the beginning, but the end game actuall sounds promising! 5 stars to you dear author 💖💖💖

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Mary_Goodman_3498

this book is phenomenal! first few chaps rly brings u in and the author had done a great job in making us love the strong FL with her personality.. ML is promising too! 5 stars from me!

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Golda
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Words cannot describe how awesome this story is. The author describes every scene perfectly making us immerse in the experience of the story. If you want a strong FL you got her in our FL Princess Elys. Not only she is powerful, she is willing to suffer for her people. Awesome work author. I've become a fan.🥰

3yr
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bishop1275

An interesting read so far, although I need more. I am intrigued with this strong-willed heroine and her fate in the hands of the vampires. The plot and the characters are very engaging that I could not drop the book until I reached the end. I can't wait to read more, so update please, dear yu chan. 😀✍️💖

3yr
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miu_hozuki

The story is well written, with clean language that's neither too simple nor too grand. The characters are described just right, so is the scenery. The world building happens at the right pace. Excellent job! Try this story. You won't regret it.

3yr
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precious_pruddy

Expected from a talented author, your book is good and your writing skills are impressive. I am hooked and will keep on reading the novel. Keep up the good work.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
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xiaohai_23

The mc Elys is a fighter princess who lost a war and became a slave. She takes a series of decisions in order to survive, and all her steps bring her to marry the ml (last chapter for now). The book is well-written, the pace is just perfect: not too rushed nor slow. I'd like to know more about the ml, but his first appearance was rather interesting. He promises to be a good match for the princess :D

3yr
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Nekonigiri001

Woot woot! Author yu_chan is releasing another book that's worth reading!!! You got the royal (check), you got the vampire (check), you got the well-written story with great world-building (check), what's there not to like? Looking forward for more updates but no pressure, author 😻

3yr
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Parisian_Moon

This story had great potential and I am already invested after four chapters. Please more face-slapping scenes for the people who underestimated the princess! I love those scenes. The narration is witty (like the author) and the scenes are well written. It keeps the readers engaged. Good luck to author and I hope she wins in this WPC!

3yr
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LeeMaRi1999

Wow! I certainly can not believe this! Another work from a very talented author! This time, she's serving some a historical revenge novel! Can't wait for more!

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3yr
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Caramelsugar

Hello dear author!😀 Your writing is smooth and i really liked the story as well.🥰 Can’t wait to read more of your chapters🤎 Best wishes to you in your new journey!💗

3yr
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leoreview1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

3yr
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Tangerqueen

Writing Quality (5/5): Little to none grammatical mistakes. Perfect descriptions if anything, balanced to the point that it's descriptive but not overbearingly tooooo much Stability of Updates (5/5): Not much to say Story Development (5/5): Really good balance for pacing! There's attention to detail, but at the same time, I don't feel that anything is being dragged on. Character Design (5/5): Honestly honestly honestly. For once we have a princess (well I guess technically not anymore?) that actually acts like she fits the role and isn't just some spoiled whining little brat. I actually want to root for her! World Background (5/5): I love the attention to world building! There's a lot packed in there, but it never feels like an info dump at all! Good luck! And I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!

3yr
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Fantasy_1

love the story the way it's started both were weak character and I am glad they both were going to be strong ,step by step not some cliche story where only ml lead is powerful, I am gonna so loving this story I literally wanted to read this kind of story finally someone made it I hope in the future we can see more fl character magic and all can't wait for the romance, their hate is so intense I can see their love will burn pages

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3yr
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juderosscardan

loved the book keep writing amazing books

7mth
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Magnexindra

It’s not complete. I find it odd that all the reviews are from 2yrs ago…. The story is good, though the writing gets a bit sloppy around chapter 215. It just needs to be edited a bit. If you don’t like reading stories that aren’t finished, then this isn’t for you. I’m a bit sad that I bought the entire book at once and it turned out that it literally stops in the middle of a scene. And it’s not like it was almost the end… too many story plots were left unresolved that it can’t be fixed with an additional few chapters. Maybe if we beg the author enough, then they will give us an ending. The story is genuinely good, until the king gets caught with his pants down. (There’s no cheating, he literally has no pants on). Once you get there, just don’t bother anymore.

9mth
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Pustulio

This story blew me away. It had me on my toes and I loved every sec of it. The ML is a jerk and I love that the FL is able to stand her ground against him. I wanted to point out that the slap scene was hilarious and so satisfying. Author, keep up the good work! So sad I was only able to read the free chapters 😢.

2yr
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gilttypleasure

wow what a great book inspite it's has less chapter now and slow update don't know what will happen in future but I know that it will be great and interesting the book is like a gem ,it's like I finally found a gem the character background the FL lead I can't wait to see what author has stored.

3yr
View 1 Replies
Trini_Troste

Amoo mucho mucho mucho todo, los personajes aun que sobre el príncipe heredero todavía no entiendo si es bueno o malo,, igualmente la historia me está atrapando mucho y es muy interesante, de verdad me encanta !!!

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3yr
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queenroper

the story has a good plot with an interesting twist...its refreshing to read of the ML being weak and vulnerable instead of the cliche strong ml waiting to support a fragile growing FL. In this case they are both weak and will ultimately have to rely on each other. Love it. Thumbs up

3yr
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Yaminoyosei

This book is really well written. Once I started I couldn't stop reading. I have to say it is very enjoyable and easy to read. I will definitely keep reading. Good job author! 👏

3yr
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Apple_Woods

wow! beautifully written with a strong FL! love love love how the author portrays her stuggles and imperfections. her passion may have gotten her on the wrong side at the beginning, but the end game actuall sounds promising! 5 stars to you dear author 💖💖💖

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3yr
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Mary_Goodman_3498

this book is phenomenal! first few chaps rly brings u in and the author had done a great job in making us love the strong FL with her personality.. ML is promising too! 5 stars from me!

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3yr
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Golda
LV 6 Badge

Words cannot describe how awesome this story is. The author describes every scene perfectly making us immerse in the experience of the story. If you want a strong FL you got her in our FL Princess Elys. Not only she is powerful, she is willing to suffer for her people. Awesome work author. I've become a fan.🥰

3yr
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bishop1275

An interesting read so far, although I need more. I am intrigued with this strong-willed heroine and her fate in the hands of the vampires. The plot and the characters are very engaging that I could not drop the book until I reached the end. I can't wait to read more, so update please, dear yu chan. 😀✍️💖

3yr
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miu_hozuki

The story is well written, with clean language that's neither too simple nor too grand. The characters are described just right, so is the scenery. The world building happens at the right pace. Excellent job! Try this story. You won't regret it.

3yr
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precious_pruddy

Expected from a talented author, your book is good and your writing skills are impressive. I am hooked and will keep on reading the novel. Keep up the good work.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
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xiaohai_23

The mc Elys is a fighter princess who lost a war and became a slave. She takes a series of decisions in order to survive, and all her steps bring her to marry the ml (last chapter for now). The book is well-written, the pace is just perfect: not too rushed nor slow. I'd like to know more about the ml, but his first appearance was rather interesting. He promises to be a good match for the princess :D

3yr
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Nekonigiri001

Woot woot! Author yu_chan is releasing another book that's worth reading!!! You got the royal (check), you got the vampire (check), you got the well-written story with great world-building (check), what's there not to like? Looking forward for more updates but no pressure, author 😻

3yr
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Parisian_Moon

This story had great potential and I am already invested after four chapters. Please more face-slapping scenes for the people who underestimated the princess! I love those scenes. The narration is witty (like the author) and the scenes are well written. It keeps the readers engaged. Good luck to author and I hope she wins in this WPC!

3yr
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LeeMaRi1999

Wow! I certainly can not believe this! Another work from a very talented author! This time, she's serving some a historical revenge novel! Can't wait for more!

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3yr
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Caramelsugar

Hello dear author!😀 Your writing is smooth and i really liked the story as well.🥰 Can’t wait to read more of your chapters🤎 Best wishes to you in your new journey!💗

3yr
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leoreview1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

3yr
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