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This story is a pearl mistaken for a fishes eye, the grammar could use a bit of help but the story really takes the cake. Now if our dear author fed me more it would be even better. Sadly I'm not their employer so I can't get them to feed me anymore... but if author sama dropped this I guess I'll have to starve-
love this story, but the grammar drags u out of it. it's not confusing and only takes a second to reread it to piece it together properly. Worth the read
I really like this story but there are a lot of grammar mistakes and a lack of updating stability . I think it has a lot of potential though if it keeps going.
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This story is a pearl mistaken for a fishes eye, the grammar could use a bit of help but the story really takes the cake. Now if our dear author fed me more it would be even better. Sadly I'm not their employer so I can't get them to feed me anymore... but if author sama dropped this I guess I'll have to starve-
love this story, but the grammar drags u out of it. it's not confusing and only takes a second to reread it to piece it together properly. Worth the read
I really like this story but there are a lot of grammar mistakes and a lack of updating stability . I think it has a lot of potential though if it keeps going.
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