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Terrible, many people said it was bad but I did not believe them and also because I was bored, I decided to read but my expectations went down the drain. Writing is okay but the plot is trash.
Such a good idea, but the execution is terrible. It isn’t even the writing quality like most stories, but every single idea the author makes.
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Very good idea, Bad storytelling, Far worse writing To author : If you're going to translate do it better, If it's a problem of capabilities then it's understandable but do try to get better. Good luck with future project. To readers: I don't recommend if you're avid reader of FF and looking for a good story. If you just want to waste some time go ahead
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gave this novel a chance and this novel is interesting but has a lot of leaps In logic that do not make sense ending up being true and I don't like that so I like this but certain parts of it I do not like it
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I do not understand why so many people complain that this novel is garbage, if it is not the best and it is a total cliche of a Chinese novel but that is what it is, the author makes an effort to buy it and translate it since it is not easy get this raw novel, the novel is not the best but it has its moments.
I figured it couldn’t be that bad, but oh boy it’s terrible. Not even worth reading as a joke.
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I like your story although some in parts I think it goes very fast, but this is my opinion , Your story has a lot of future so do your best [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
If I could give it a rate of -5, I would do so in a heartbeat!! This novel is so trashy I feel sorry for the author for having such an imagination. Even for a Chinese fanfiction, it takes the cake for mediocrity.
This novel has all the flaws that Chinese novels usually have, and more. Much more. It's written in a ridiculous way and is very unrealistic, full of little inconsistencies that would frustrate you. Yet even after all that I gave it 5 stars. Because it's funny. Really, it's so ridiculous that it's hilarious. As for the racists jokes and such, you just gotta ignore those. Look past them and you'll find something fun to read. This author has a wild imagination. The only thing that I'm worried about is what would happen after chapter 70 or so, because that's where the raws become unavailable, unless you're in China. Hopefully, the story won't just stop there.
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I just noticed that there were 68 power stones, and I just so happen to have an extra power stone... 69 nice
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This is just a Sad Fanfic........ The reasoning is jumbled..so many holes to fill, a kid wrote this story probably..i mean the 8-14 age group..or maybe a newbie.. its like they say to you to "Draw a straight line" even if the dotted figure is obviously a circle..
a great idea but done horribly...................... he is only thanks in name and look.because he only have 1% of strength. and I think he got mistique ability too.so the whole purpose of the story died right there. he don't have thanks level strength,but he won't be in struggle due to being in thanks body because he can change back to normal human. the next thing is author made it look like Natasha a easy women.i hate that.stupid fic
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Unable to read up to 3 chapters and only read 1/5, this is a kind of garbage fanfic that is even more rubbish than chinese fanfic. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
Reveal Spoiler Terrible, many people said it was bad but I did not believe them and also because I was bored, I decided to read but my expectations went down the drain. Writing is okay but the plot is trash.
Such a good idea, but the execution is terrible. It isn’t even the writing quality like most stories, but every single idea the author makes.
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Very good idea, Bad storytelling, Far worse writing To author : If you're going to translate do it better, If it's a problem of capabilities then it's understandable but do try to get better. Good luck with future project. To readers: I don't recommend if you're avid reader of FF and looking for a good story. If you just want to waste some time go ahead
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gave this novel a chance and this novel is interesting but has a lot of leaps In logic that do not make sense ending up being true and I don't like that so I like this but certain parts of it I do not like it
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I do not understand why so many people complain that this novel is garbage, if it is not the best and it is a total cliche of a Chinese novel but that is what it is, the author makes an effort to buy it and translate it since it is not easy get this raw novel, the novel is not the best but it has its moments.
I figured it couldn’t be that bad, but oh boy it’s terrible. Not even worth reading as a joke.
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I like your story although some in parts I think it goes very fast, but this is my opinion , Your story has a lot of future so do your best [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
If I could give it a rate of -5, I would do so in a heartbeat!! This novel is so trashy I feel sorry for the author for having such an imagination. Even for a Chinese fanfiction, it takes the cake for mediocrity.
This novel has all the flaws that Chinese novels usually have, and more. Much more. It's written in a ridiculous way and is very unrealistic, full of little inconsistencies that would frustrate you. Yet even after all that I gave it 5 stars. Because it's funny. Really, it's so ridiculous that it's hilarious. As for the racists jokes and such, you just gotta ignore those. Look past them and you'll find something fun to read. This author has a wild imagination. The only thing that I'm worried about is what would happen after chapter 70 or so, because that's where the raws become unavailable, unless you're in China. Hopefully, the story won't just stop there.
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I just noticed that there were 68 power stones, and I just so happen to have an extra power stone... 69 nice
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This is just a Sad Fanfic........ The reasoning is jumbled..so many holes to fill, a kid wrote this story probably..i mean the 8-14 age group..or maybe a newbie.. its like they say to you to "Draw a straight line" even if the dotted figure is obviously a circle..
a great idea but done horribly...................... he is only thanks in name and look.because he only have 1% of strength. and I think he got mistique ability too.so the whole purpose of the story died right there. he don't have thanks level strength,but he won't be in struggle due to being in thanks body because he can change back to normal human. the next thing is author made it look like Natasha a easy women.i hate that.stupid fic
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Unable to read up to 3 chapters and only read 1/5, this is a kind of garbage fanfic that is even more rubbish than chinese fanfic. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
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