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Me encanta la historia ya a casi no hay historia de dragón balo con a harem sigue así casi no hay historia de dragón balo👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😌😌👍👍👍👍
was excited for this but honestly the mcs personality is just plain annoying, i couldn't handle it at all. the story had a nice theme, Goku being a gamer but honestly the author kind of ruins it with how he writes the characters
overall the story I want but it was done very poorly. qualiy was ok but it just the spacing and formatting just destroyed it for me it didn't make sense and difficult to diciper what the author meant. the story moves very quickly tooo quickly litteraly in the first few paragraphs the MC already met the god got all there powers and was sent to the other world not even any explanation on who the character was just the MC was there and that's it.updating is ok it's frequent enough that its better than like half of everyone else. no character design just "this is MC and he is wearing a shirt" next scene....this is litteraly how it is
it's dragon Ball but it's super cringe at times and gives me neckbeard vibes especially the part where he made everyone ware suites and fedoras, that made me have to drop it.
It's bad, in writing quality, story development, character design, the updating stability is pretty good, and the world background is basically dragonball.
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HEEELLLLLLL YEESSSSSS!!! Finally a DB fanfic with the gamer system, don't ever drop it author-san, .................................................................
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Harem really ruins it Im currently sick so i cant be bothered to explain better
harem again....... can you all get this out of your heads. nobody wants his/her wife/husband to be with someone else. let alone a dbz character. can you imagine someone in that world , being ok with it. or even our world plz don't do that to dragon ball z
its super good 10/10 ...............................................................................................i want more... .........
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
The story is really good right now and all the people complaining about there not being harem. just don’t care that the Mc isn’t seeking a harem but will have one later on. Also I’m curious how the data will work when we get to dragon ball super since I feel like that’s why most authors don’t use the gamer system in dragon ball.
this is my honest and biased review because of the author disguising his ff with wrong tags. to be honest this is very good story. some moments seem forced so yeah only two complains.
This is honestly my favorite webnovel on this platform👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My honest review is: A very good and singular book! I've never thought about such theme (Dragon Ball + The Gamer). You're doing a absolutely good job!
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Ya i agree tha fact you're doing it this way shows you want to do the story right the way you want. The fact you are setting it up seems more nature. Keep up the good work and tale.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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great writing quality and the stability of updates and development is great character design and world backround its dbz and dbz is my favorite anime also this story is unique ive never seen a goku gamer fanfic so in my opinion this fanfic has the potential to be one of the greatest dbz fanfics 5 stars for me and i highly reccomend this to any dbz fan.
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Never seen Goku being gamer. Let see how far this novel can go. I can't understand why mc need arc of Embodiment.🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐
Me encanta la historia ya a casi no hay historia de dragón balo con a harem sigue así casi no hay historia de dragón balo👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😌😌👍👍👍👍
was excited for this but honestly the mcs personality is just plain annoying, i couldn't handle it at all. the story had a nice theme, Goku being a gamer but honestly the author kind of ruins it with how he writes the characters
overall the story I want but it was done very poorly. qualiy was ok but it just the spacing and formatting just destroyed it for me it didn't make sense and difficult to diciper what the author meant. the story moves very quickly tooo quickly litteraly in the first few paragraphs the MC already met the god got all there powers and was sent to the other world not even any explanation on who the character was just the MC was there and that's it.updating is ok it's frequent enough that its better than like half of everyone else. no character design just "this is MC and he is wearing a shirt" next scene....this is litteraly how it is
it's dragon Ball but it's super cringe at times and gives me neckbeard vibes especially the part where he made everyone ware suites and fedoras, that made me have to drop it.
It's bad, in writing quality, story development, character design, the updating stability is pretty good, and the world background is basically dragonball.
HEEELLLLLL YESSSSSSS!!! HEEELLLLLL YESSSSSSS!!! HEEELLLLLL YESSSSSSS!!! HEEELLLLLL YESSSSSSS!!! HEEELLLLLL YESSSSSSS!!! HEEELLLLLL YESSSSSSS!!!
HEEELLLLLLL YEESSSSSS!!! Finally a DB fanfic with the gamer system, don't ever drop it author-san, .................................................................
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Harem really ruins it Im currently sick so i cant be bothered to explain better
harem again....... can you all get this out of your heads. nobody wants his/her wife/husband to be with someone else. let alone a dbz character. can you imagine someone in that world , being ok with it. or even our world plz don't do that to dragon ball z
its super good 10/10 ...............................................................................................i want more... .........
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
The story is really good right now and all the people complaining about there not being harem. just don’t care that the Mc isn’t seeking a harem but will have one later on. Also I’m curious how the data will work when we get to dragon ball super since I feel like that’s why most authors don’t use the gamer system in dragon ball.
this is my honest and biased review because of the author disguising his ff with wrong tags. to be honest this is very good story. some moments seem forced so yeah only two complains.
This is honestly my favorite webnovel on this platform👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My honest review is: A very good and singular book! I've never thought about such theme (Dragon Ball + The Gamer). You're doing a absolutely good job!
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Ya i agree tha fact you're doing it this way shows you want to do the story right the way you want. The fact you are setting it up seems more nature. Keep up the good work and tale.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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great writing quality and the stability of updates and development is great character design and world backround its dbz and dbz is my favorite anime also this story is unique ive never seen a goku gamer fanfic so in my opinion this fanfic has the potential to be one of the greatest dbz fanfics 5 stars for me and i highly reccomend this to any dbz fan.
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Never seen Goku being gamer. Let see how far this novel can go. I can't understand why mc need arc of Embodiment.🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟⭐
harem again