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It is a good Fic but is This Dropped? Please Continue this I liked it, great HP fic the first one was especially on this site. So many stories with potential just dropped after a few chapters its sad.
I have enjoyed this book so far. Although I agree with some that the MC seems to be nerfed severely, if you look at the long run he could be very op. My only problem is that nothing has been posted for 5 months. Please let us know what is going on and we hope everything is okay for you.
dude the whole point of a jump chain is to retain some form of ability when jumping into another world. there's no point in doing so if you nerf the f out of him.
A good story in general. the only things I don't like are the slow updates and the MC's nerf. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
One of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading and certainly for those who complain to go and write their own story.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is what happens when a beta MC tries to act Chad like and it flops so hard he has to go on a hiatus and fight every inch to justify himself. Chad-beta-san please don't come back :)
Most Nerfed jumpchain ever, completely defeating the purpose. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing.
The thing is the so called chad is not a chad but the simp slave of ROB no need to lie about it his subservient foot licker act at end of harry potter proved it A Real Man would preferred eternal death over slavery but the simp he is accepted slavery there is no simp slaves called chads that's not a chad but a stupid simp
loved dark lord dumb-as-door! This book has also started out nicely! Are you going to post more chapters soon because it's been like 2 weeks now...
interesting story. Good concept. Excited for more. Just hope you don't bring real life politics in this story like you did on harry potter fic.
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Easy read, grammar is good enough to easily be in the top 5 of this entire website. "New" concept by this app's standards, jumpchains have been rarely done, if they had ever been, here. This is a sequel to the previous fic "Dark Lord Dumbledore;" there, Chad became Harry Potter and took control of the entire magical world, or at least the majority of it.
A Jump Chain? Fantastic! these are pretty rare in this app, Hell,Many of them are plain badly Written,It's great to have one of the Good Writers Write one, Especially one as Good As you
I can't wait to see where this story goes. the first book “How Much For Your Soul?” written by this author was, while not being the best written, was a fun read and I'd easily give it 4.5 Stars. The second book “Dark Lord Dumbledore” while not as good as the first was still a fun light-hearted read and I'd easily give it 4.2 Stars. Just judging by the past history and the two chapters I've read so far, I'm giving this book four stars for now. I'm sure I'll update this review later. The only slight worry I have about this book going forward is that the author may have nerfed the MC too much as overcompensation for him being too OP in the previous book.
I’ve only read the synopsis and chapter 1, Harry Dresden fan here love that series Ive never found any fanfic or anything remotely close or good to the series exp exp exp exp exp exp exp "............" Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp expe exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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It is a good Fic but is This Dropped? Please Continue this I liked it, great HP fic the first one was especially on this site. So many stories with potential just dropped after a few chapters its sad.
I have enjoyed this book so far. Although I agree with some that the MC seems to be nerfed severely, if you look at the long run he could be very op. My only problem is that nothing has been posted for 5 months. Please let us know what is going on and we hope everything is okay for you.
dude the whole point of a jump chain is to retain some form of ability when jumping into another world. there's no point in doing so if you nerf the f out of him.
A good story in general. the only things I don't like are the slow updates and the MC's nerf. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
One of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading and certainly for those who complain to go and write their own story.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is what happens when a beta MC tries to act Chad like and it flops so hard he has to go on a hiatus and fight every inch to justify himself. Chad-beta-san please don't come back :)
Most Nerfed jumpchain ever, completely defeating the purpose. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing. Disappointing.
The thing is the so called chad is not a chad but the simp slave of ROB no need to lie about it his subservient foot licker act at end of harry potter proved it A Real Man would preferred eternal death over slavery but the simp he is accepted slavery there is no simp slaves called chads that's not a chad but a stupid simp
loved dark lord dumb-as-door! This book has also started out nicely! Are you going to post more chapters soon because it's been like 2 weeks now...
interesting story. Good concept. Excited for more. Just hope you don't bring real life politics in this story like you did on harry potter fic.
more chapters please ...........................................................................................................................
:( And... Dark lord Dumbledore?[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Easy read, grammar is good enough to easily be in the top 5 of this entire website. "New" concept by this app's standards, jumpchains have been rarely done, if they had ever been, here. This is a sequel to the previous fic "Dark Lord Dumbledore;" there, Chad became Harry Potter and took control of the entire magical world, or at least the majority of it.
A Jump Chain? Fantastic! these are pretty rare in this app, Hell,Many of them are plain badly Written,It's great to have one of the Good Writers Write one, Especially one as Good As you
I can't wait to see where this story goes. the first book “How Much For Your Soul?” written by this author was, while not being the best written, was a fun read and I'd easily give it 4.5 Stars. The second book “Dark Lord Dumbledore” while not as good as the first was still a fun light-hearted read and I'd easily give it 4.2 Stars. Just judging by the past history and the two chapters I've read so far, I'm giving this book four stars for now. I'm sure I'll update this review later. The only slight worry I have about this book going forward is that the author may have nerfed the MC too much as overcompensation for him being too OP in the previous book.
I’ve only read the synopsis and chapter 1, Harry Dresden fan here love that series Ive never found any fanfic or anything remotely close or good to the series exp exp exp exp exp exp exp "............" Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp expe exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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