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I haven't read this book yet, but my god, these reviews are insane, one was just one dude screaming "HAREM!" for the entire thing, I am never getting this time back, but I give him 5 stars, and therefore by extension, this book 5 stars.
Hay author is there any way that u can lower the number of premium chapters that we have to buy??? like can u do just 2?? I am reading another book and they jave the premium chapters set at 2 chapters u can buy because u dont put out enough chapters a month to to even have us buy the premium chapters of 25 just to read thr newest chapters that came out... I mean u only put at most 4 chapters a month out and its just a waste of everyone coins to even buy the premium chapters.... I mean at this rate it will take like 5 months or longer before er can even start to read the new chapters that came/come out... so unless ur willing to start writing more chapters like u where in the beginning then can u lower the premium chapters so this we can buy them at a reasonable amount of coins or it will be basically like not reading the book because u only put about 4 chapters on average a month sometimes u do even less... so it would be great if u can do that because I want to be able to keep up and read the new chapters that come out all the time!!! Im on chapter 558 but there r 563 chapters so if u dont lower the privilege chapters then ill have to wait till there r at least 25 chapters ahead in the book and honestly by that time I wont want to read it.... I mean at this point I almost dont wanf o keep reading it because there r so little amount of chapters coming out to begin with but because I really really like this book I keep reading but I am not wasting coins on premium chapters when the amount of chapters that come out r not even worth the coins spent on the premium chapters!!! So can u please either lower the number to like 2 or 5 or even zero and let use read the book scenes there r no more then 4 chapters a month that come out??? if u where to put more chapters a month out ot would be way better but its been like thos for just about a year now.... but I want to keep reading the book so I hope u can fix/do something about this so I dont have to stop reading it!!!!
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Grammar is weak but can be ignored but uploading chapters per week should be atleast 3 if writer could giveup his laziness that would give happiness to readers
When will more chapters come out?? This book is really really good and I want it to continue!!
bruh, please stop using the word "whisper" everywhere. for every few paragraphs you used the word "whispered" instead of "said" in a low voice or softly or something shit. "whisper" word is only applicable when you are talking using the breath not the voice such that only the person who is standing very close to you can hear it. You use it in every few paragraphs and almost all of them are not applicable to the situation in the paragraph. I actually liked the story so much that I started reading it one shot. I really like the story and all the shenanigans even with all the cultivation filler,taunting and trashtalk bullishit. various grammar mistakes at the beginning , but it got better later. but later the whisper thing keeps getting on my nerves. these grammar mistakes disrupt the flow of reading. every time i read the word whisper and i imagine it, but it doesn't fit the situation in the scene.and I have to re-read the paragraph and correct them in my mind with "said". very much looking forward to the future chapters. hope you stop using the word "whisper" in the future chapters.
I love the story, except that there are a bunch of words being used that don't belong or being used wrong and alot of words are not placed correctly and some words definitely need changing or used, if those errors were corrected this story would be awesome.
When r more chapters going to come out??? I really hate the waiting so long for new chapters!!
I really lover this book and dont want it to see it go aways and hope it keeps coming out with chapters.... I really hope that it comes out with more then 1 chapter a week like at least 3 places so it would be worth reading the chapters u have to by ahead of time with coins!!!!
Everything was going well until about chapter 140, grammar dropped from well readable to forcing myself to keep reading because I like the novel.After some point , I just gave up, no point wasting my money on some half-ass proofreading.
I just got dont reading chapter 938 and I wish more chapters would come out sooner because this is an awesome book and I want to keep reading it for a long time and I definitely want to see this book go till the end!! And I really cant wait to see what the MC is going to do to her... Maybe make her part of his group after everything is done or throw her back in the sisters world or keep he as a prisoner in the sisters world and this way he can talk to about things when he wants and then make her part of the group this way he has another strong person to cultivation with when hes ready!!! And honestly she would be a really really great asset in the long run and she is supposedly supposed to be really really old so she should have a lot of knowledge of formations and other things that might benefit him and his clan either in protecting it or even giving battle ideas like formations or even help defending against others because as of right now he needs all the hel he can get and the stronger the help the better!!! And after the MC takes care of her I hope that they go into the shrine or her "house" and take everything they can that is useful and even her ring and any other artifacts on her because in the long run all of the girls that the MC saved is going to take money and supplies and resources to support them so it doesnt hurt to have more then what they already have!!! And 1 more thing that is bothering me and that is the MC doesnt have meny skills and/or techniques!!! Honestly if he was to get into a fight with someone or something bigger and better them or have to fight someone just like himself but they all have more skills and/or techniques then him then the MC will be destroyed if not killed so he needs more skills and/or techniques!!!
Hay does anyone know whats going on with the chapters?? I can only see chapters up to 922 but it says there r 923 for chapters and I cant find it anywhere!!???
I really really lover this book! I really really hope u dont stop writing this book and keep writing!! A lot of really really good books have been stop being written and it sucks so I really really hope u keep writing it till the end of the book because it will really suck if it stops halfway through!!
I love this book a lot and witsh it can kepp going for a long time!!! and I was thinking about how the MC went after the girl that was stuck in the sword and found out it was a different world and that there r other worlds like that 1 and let the MC and the sisters go back to there world and recruit people to hel the MC because hes going to need more man/women power and doesnt have the time to train them right now so if he can get fights and or people that r already trained to come to his world to help him then that would be better and even if he can find a place that has all beasts and uave the MC take the dragon with him and when he finds a large continent or world or beasts they all bow to his dragon and him and will do anything they say and will help them to get stronger as well!!
Can you pleas describe charecters physical characteristics more ,otherwise I love the way of your writing novel♥️♥️ ................................................................................
very great novel 👍 such a nice plot 😀 op Mc please upload novel chapter fast.. I can't wait read more chapter
Finally was able to read the next chapter 892!! I still live this book and dont want it to end! But there r some things that I hope to see like I hope the MC will be able to help the girls awaken bloodlines too because if he goes to fight the war like hes supposed to later on that will kill everyone they wont be powerful enough to do so with just regular bloodlines!! So when that all reach the highest realm Y not have it so the MC is able to help them break through and awaken there bloodline so they can be stronger!! And y not let the MC tell his mother and grandfather EVERYTHING that is going on and what will happen so this way they know and all the girls he trusts 100 percent and have become his partners! And after everything is said y not have have his mothe be with him scenes technically they dont have the same bloodline anymore because his just changed and became better but thats only IF his father is dead witch I kinda hope he is because he is stupid and doesnt do anything and his level isnt even high hes better off not even being in the book anymore! I know its mean to say but its the truth! So this is just my thoughts but I hope to see them come true and hope that everyone that is at least close to the MC survives and lives forever with him and they all can be a family and I hope that most of the girls that he saved will become so strong that most of them wont die and that the MC goes around helping any and all the girls like this and even some families and people that need it so that if any of the girls or people from his planet dont want to fight he can make up the numbers by having other people from other planets can be used in there place and protected and the MC can offer protection to the other planets so they will fight for him! But I truly just want to see the MC and all the girls he saved and even the ones in the future and even other people that need to be saved or r willing to help him and join him can stay alive and live there lifes for the rest of there lifes with out any dangers after that! so basically I just want to see the MC save his planet at least but only save the people that deserve to be saved and that deserve to live! And I hipe that the MC can have plenty of time with his family and I hope that his family all survive and will be safe and the girls and people that deserve to be saved!!
I READ CHAPTER 888 AND I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT BLOODLINE HE GETS!! I REALLY HOPE HE GETS SOMETHING AMAZING SO THIS WAY IT CAN HELP HIM TO BE ABLE TO GET TO A HIGHER REALM AND IN RETURN ALLOWS HIS PARTNERS TO BREACK THRUGH AND KEEP UP WITH THE MC AND GO AS HIGH AS HE DOES!! AND I HOPE HE SITS ALL OF HIS PARTNERS DOWN AND TALKS TO THEM ABOUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN IN THE FUTURE AND THAT HE TALKED TO A GODDESS THAT HAS BEEN HELPING MAYNE EVEN HAVE HIS PARTNERS AND HIS GRANDFATHER AND MOTHER KNOW ABOUT THE SYSTEM AND WHAT WILL HAPPEN IN THE FUTURE AND THE ONLY WAY TO TO HAVE THE SLIGHTEST CHANCE OF WINNING IS TO HAVE THE GIRLS HE SAVED HELP AND HAVE HIM TURN THEM INTO CULTIVATERS AND GO AS HIGH AS THEY CAN!!
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
I HOPE THE AUTHOR SEES THIS AND TAKES THIS INTO CONSIDERATION IF THIS UR BOOK THAT U R WRITING!! ITS SO GREAT AND CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!! I just got done reading chapter 865 and this book is still awesome!! I still cant get enough of this book!!! I do have a couple suggestions on a couple things in the future that I hope u take into consideration!!! I hope nothing happened to fangs mom and then when all of the girls r back at the clan including the girls they saved and even the girls with the dragon and the ones they went to save they all go to 1 room and have the MC tell them what happened all these times from to point of when they came back from the poison sect or when he disappeared till now!! This way they can know what happened and sense these would be the people he trusts 100 percent then he can show them the dragon and thw sub space and all that. and disnt hos blood change or something so cant he be with his mother even if he has the same blood ot doesnt matter he can still be with her!! The MC should have the girls that he trust 100 percent be the main girls and have thw girls find him girls that they like because they helped in some way or did something or whatever and bring them to him and see if he would welcome them into there group to help them out more and then they should find the most special spirit roots to take in and they should find the strongest and the ones with the best attitudes to be able to lead so they can be in the in the 100 percent group that he trust and this way they will be the strongest and some will lead his army and others will manage other this and so on and so forth...
I REALLY LIKE THIS BOOK A LOT AND I BEEN SEEING THAT U HAVENT BEEN DOING AS MANY CHAPTERS AS U USED TO AND WANTED TO KNOW IF UR GOING TO STOP THE BOOK OR R U GOING TO KEEP GOING BUT UR JUST BUSY AND DONT HAVE ENOUGH TIME?? THIS WAY WE KNOW WHATS GOING ON AND WHAT TO EXPECT! I TEXT LIKE THIS BECAUSE MY PHONE IS BROKE
Fellow reader,I love the novel,it's very interesting, I love the general,R18,system,transmigration.[img=update]
Reveal Spoiler This is an exceptional novel, but I eagerly anticipate more frequent chapter uploads.
I REALLY LIKE THIS BOOK HOW COME IT GOT STOPPED?? I REALLY WANT IT TO CONTINUE! ITS HARD TO FID BOOKS THAT R GOOD LIKE THIS AND DO HAVE STUPID THINGS PUT IN THERE!!
I haven't read this book yet, but my god, these reviews are insane, one was just one dude screaming "HAREM!" for the entire thing, I am never getting this time back, but I give him 5 stars, and therefore by extension, this book 5 stars.
Hay author is there any way that u can lower the number of premium chapters that we have to buy??? like can u do just 2?? I am reading another book and they jave the premium chapters set at 2 chapters u can buy because u dont put out enough chapters a month to to even have us buy the premium chapters of 25 just to read thr newest chapters that came out... I mean u only put at most 4 chapters a month out and its just a waste of everyone coins to even buy the premium chapters.... I mean at this rate it will take like 5 months or longer before er can even start to read the new chapters that came/come out... so unless ur willing to start writing more chapters like u where in the beginning then can u lower the premium chapters so this we can buy them at a reasonable amount of coins or it will be basically like not reading the book because u only put about 4 chapters on average a month sometimes u do even less... so it would be great if u can do that because I want to be able to keep up and read the new chapters that come out all the time!!! Im on chapter 558 but there r 563 chapters so if u dont lower the privilege chapters then ill have to wait till there r at least 25 chapters ahead in the book and honestly by that time I wont want to read it.... I mean at this point I almost dont wanf o keep reading it because there r so little amount of chapters coming out to begin with but because I really really like this book I keep reading but I am not wasting coins on premium chapters when the amount of chapters that come out r not even worth the coins spent on the premium chapters!!! So can u please either lower the number to like 2 or 5 or even zero and let use read the book scenes there r no more then 4 chapters a month that come out??? if u where to put more chapters a month out ot would be way better but its been like thos for just about a year now.... but I want to keep reading the book so I hope u can fix/do something about this so I dont have to stop reading it!!!!
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Grammar is weak but can be ignored but uploading chapters per week should be atleast 3 if writer could giveup his laziness that would give happiness to readers
When will more chapters come out?? This book is really really good and I want it to continue!!
bruh, please stop using the word "whisper" everywhere. for every few paragraphs you used the word "whispered" instead of "said" in a low voice or softly or something shit. "whisper" word is only applicable when you are talking using the breath not the voice such that only the person who is standing very close to you can hear it. You use it in every few paragraphs and almost all of them are not applicable to the situation in the paragraph. I actually liked the story so much that I started reading it one shot. I really like the story and all the shenanigans even with all the cultivation filler,taunting and trashtalk bullishit. various grammar mistakes at the beginning , but it got better later. but later the whisper thing keeps getting on my nerves. these grammar mistakes disrupt the flow of reading. every time i read the word whisper and i imagine it, but it doesn't fit the situation in the scene.and I have to re-read the paragraph and correct them in my mind with "said". very much looking forward to the future chapters. hope you stop using the word "whisper" in the future chapters.
I love the story, except that there are a bunch of words being used that don't belong or being used wrong and alot of words are not placed correctly and some words definitely need changing or used, if those errors were corrected this story would be awesome.
When r more chapters going to come out??? I really hate the waiting so long for new chapters!!
I really lover this book and dont want it to see it go aways and hope it keeps coming out with chapters.... I really hope that it comes out with more then 1 chapter a week like at least 3 places so it would be worth reading the chapters u have to by ahead of time with coins!!!!
Everything was going well until about chapter 140, grammar dropped from well readable to forcing myself to keep reading because I like the novel.After some point , I just gave up, no point wasting my money on some half-ass proofreading.
I just got dont reading chapter 938 and I wish more chapters would come out sooner because this is an awesome book and I want to keep reading it for a long time and I definitely want to see this book go till the end!! And I really cant wait to see what the MC is going to do to her... Maybe make her part of his group after everything is done or throw her back in the sisters world or keep he as a prisoner in the sisters world and this way he can talk to about things when he wants and then make her part of the group this way he has another strong person to cultivation with when hes ready!!! And honestly she would be a really really great asset in the long run and she is supposedly supposed to be really really old so she should have a lot of knowledge of formations and other things that might benefit him and his clan either in protecting it or even giving battle ideas like formations or even help defending against others because as of right now he needs all the hel he can get and the stronger the help the better!!! And after the MC takes care of her I hope that they go into the shrine or her "house" and take everything they can that is useful and even her ring and any other artifacts on her because in the long run all of the girls that the MC saved is going to take money and supplies and resources to support them so it doesnt hurt to have more then what they already have!!! And 1 more thing that is bothering me and that is the MC doesnt have meny skills and/or techniques!!! Honestly if he was to get into a fight with someone or something bigger and better them or have to fight someone just like himself but they all have more skills and/or techniques then him then the MC will be destroyed if not killed so he needs more skills and/or techniques!!!
Hay does anyone know whats going on with the chapters?? I can only see chapters up to 922 but it says there r 923 for chapters and I cant find it anywhere!!???
I really really lover this book! I really really hope u dont stop writing this book and keep writing!! A lot of really really good books have been stop being written and it sucks so I really really hope u keep writing it till the end of the book because it will really suck if it stops halfway through!!
I love this book a lot and witsh it can kepp going for a long time!!! and I was thinking about how the MC went after the girl that was stuck in the sword and found out it was a different world and that there r other worlds like that 1 and let the MC and the sisters go back to there world and recruit people to hel the MC because hes going to need more man/women power and doesnt have the time to train them right now so if he can get fights and or people that r already trained to come to his world to help him then that would be better and even if he can find a place that has all beasts and uave the MC take the dragon with him and when he finds a large continent or world or beasts they all bow to his dragon and him and will do anything they say and will help them to get stronger as well!!
Can you pleas describe charecters physical characteristics more ,otherwise I love the way of your writing novel♥️♥️ ................................................................................
very great novel 👍 such a nice plot 😀 op Mc please upload novel chapter fast.. I can't wait read more chapter
Finally was able to read the next chapter 892!! I still live this book and dont want it to end! But there r some things that I hope to see like I hope the MC will be able to help the girls awaken bloodlines too because if he goes to fight the war like hes supposed to later on that will kill everyone they wont be powerful enough to do so with just regular bloodlines!! So when that all reach the highest realm Y not have it so the MC is able to help them break through and awaken there bloodline so they can be stronger!! And y not let the MC tell his mother and grandfather EVERYTHING that is going on and what will happen so this way they know and all the girls he trusts 100 percent and have become his partners! And after everything is said y not have have his mothe be with him scenes technically they dont have the same bloodline anymore because his just changed and became better but thats only IF his father is dead witch I kinda hope he is because he is stupid and doesnt do anything and his level isnt even high hes better off not even being in the book anymore! I know its mean to say but its the truth! So this is just my thoughts but I hope to see them come true and hope that everyone that is at least close to the MC survives and lives forever with him and they all can be a family and I hope that most of the girls that he saved will become so strong that most of them wont die and that the MC goes around helping any and all the girls like this and even some families and people that need it so that if any of the girls or people from his planet dont want to fight he can make up the numbers by having other people from other planets can be used in there place and protected and the MC can offer protection to the other planets so they will fight for him! But I truly just want to see the MC and all the girls he saved and even the ones in the future and even other people that need to be saved or r willing to help him and join him can stay alive and live there lifes for the rest of there lifes with out any dangers after that! so basically I just want to see the MC save his planet at least but only save the people that deserve to be saved and that deserve to live! And I hipe that the MC can have plenty of time with his family and I hope that his family all survive and will be safe and the girls and people that deserve to be saved!!
I READ CHAPTER 888 AND I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT BLOODLINE HE GETS!! I REALLY HOPE HE GETS SOMETHING AMAZING SO THIS WAY IT CAN HELP HIM TO BE ABLE TO GET TO A HIGHER REALM AND IN RETURN ALLOWS HIS PARTNERS TO BREACK THRUGH AND KEEP UP WITH THE MC AND GO AS HIGH AS HE DOES!! AND I HOPE HE SITS ALL OF HIS PARTNERS DOWN AND TALKS TO THEM ABOUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN IN THE FUTURE AND THAT HE TALKED TO A GODDESS THAT HAS BEEN HELPING MAYNE EVEN HAVE HIS PARTNERS AND HIS GRANDFATHER AND MOTHER KNOW ABOUT THE SYSTEM AND WHAT WILL HAPPEN IN THE FUTURE AND THE ONLY WAY TO TO HAVE THE SLIGHTEST CHANCE OF WINNING IS TO HAVE THE GIRLS HE SAVED HELP AND HAVE HIM TURN THEM INTO CULTIVATERS AND GO AS HIGH AS THEY CAN!!
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
I HOPE THE AUTHOR SEES THIS AND TAKES THIS INTO CONSIDERATION IF THIS UR BOOK THAT U R WRITING!! ITS SO GREAT AND CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!! I just got done reading chapter 865 and this book is still awesome!! I still cant get enough of this book!!! I do have a couple suggestions on a couple things in the future that I hope u take into consideration!!! I hope nothing happened to fangs mom and then when all of the girls r back at the clan including the girls they saved and even the girls with the dragon and the ones they went to save they all go to 1 room and have the MC tell them what happened all these times from to point of when they came back from the poison sect or when he disappeared till now!! This way they can know what happened and sense these would be the people he trusts 100 percent then he can show them the dragon and thw sub space and all that. and disnt hos blood change or something so cant he be with his mother even if he has the same blood ot doesnt matter he can still be with her!! The MC should have the girls that he trust 100 percent be the main girls and have thw girls find him girls that they like because they helped in some way or did something or whatever and bring them to him and see if he would welcome them into there group to help them out more and then they should find the most special spirit roots to take in and they should find the strongest and the ones with the best attitudes to be able to lead so they can be in the in the 100 percent group that he trust and this way they will be the strongest and some will lead his army and others will manage other this and so on and so forth...
I REALLY LIKE THIS BOOK A LOT AND I BEEN SEEING THAT U HAVENT BEEN DOING AS MANY CHAPTERS AS U USED TO AND WANTED TO KNOW IF UR GOING TO STOP THE BOOK OR R U GOING TO KEEP GOING BUT UR JUST BUSY AND DONT HAVE ENOUGH TIME?? THIS WAY WE KNOW WHATS GOING ON AND WHAT TO EXPECT! I TEXT LIKE THIS BECAUSE MY PHONE IS BROKE
Fellow reader,I love the novel,it's very interesting, I love the general,R18,system,transmigration.[img=update]
Reveal Spoiler This is an exceptional novel, but I eagerly anticipate more frequent chapter uploads.
I REALLY LIKE THIS BOOK HOW COME IT GOT STOPPED?? I REALLY WANT IT TO CONTINUE! ITS HARD TO FID BOOKS THAT R GOOD LIKE THIS AND DO HAVE STUPID THINGS PUT IN THERE!!
Did he finally dual cultivate with Xiao Feng?