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PLEASE don't drop genuinely good pokémon fic👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
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is it dropped??? author san. cause there is no update in 5 days and you said there will be regular updates so did you drop it or went into a hiatus.
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Es pokemon asi que toma tus 5 estrellas 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
just giving a review because I thought it needs more stars and keep updating.☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹
The story is yes, it is not bad, it is just that there is no real development, personality, interaction with other characters, it must detail and deepen more in its journey, coexistence with Pokémon or battles, you could even put other points of view, etc. is that the story seems more like a summary in which they talk about where Mc is going and what he does and there is no real development in the story, although it is not all bad and has a good idea, it is not well managed and could to get better, Anyway, good luck! :)
Love this fanfic. it's fast paced and befitting a dragon master. Some things are a little less realistic. for example how no one is curious why all his Pokémon are shiny or team rockets incompetence is too game like. Also gym leaders Pokémon levels are weird. But overall good story. Keep it up
Interesting pokemon fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
this fanfic is amazing. the grammer is perfect with no spelling mistakes and almost zero grammatical error. the protagonist is smart and is ambitious. his family background might not be as influential as oak family but is fairly good. our protagonist drake prioritizes his ambition above all things. he is aspiring to become a dragon master and I must say is doing a great job. he doesn't sympathize with others and is not a hero of justice. he has 4 pokemon which are a dragonair, shiny charmeleon, shiny scizor, shiny tauros but he uses tauros for transportation. his pokemon are much stronger than there species. overall his character is good, he is ambitious, takes care of his pokemon and kills pokemon and humans for the motives if required but is not necessarily evil. this fanfiction has potential to reach on top and i hope it reaches its potential. you have done a great job in making this fanfic author san hope you continue making such progress and please do increase the chapters per-day. thank you and best of luck.
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PLEASE don't drop genuinely good pokémon fic👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
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is it dropped??? author san. cause there is no update in 5 days and you said there will be regular updates so did you drop it or went into a hiatus.
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Es pokemon asi que toma tus 5 estrellas 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
just giving a review because I thought it needs more stars and keep updating.☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹☹
The story is yes, it is not bad, it is just that there is no real development, personality, interaction with other characters, it must detail and deepen more in its journey, coexistence with Pokémon or battles, you could even put other points of view, etc. is that the story seems more like a summary in which they talk about where Mc is going and what he does and there is no real development in the story, although it is not all bad and has a good idea, it is not well managed and could to get better, Anyway, good luck! :)
Love this fanfic. it's fast paced and befitting a dragon master. Some things are a little less realistic. for example how no one is curious why all his Pokémon are shiny or team rockets incompetence is too game like. Also gym leaders Pokémon levels are weird. But overall good story. Keep it up
Interesting pokemon fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
this fanfic is amazing. the grammer is perfect with no spelling mistakes and almost zero grammatical error. the protagonist is smart and is ambitious. his family background might not be as influential as oak family but is fairly good. our protagonist drake prioritizes his ambition above all things. he is aspiring to become a dragon master and I must say is doing a great job. he doesn't sympathize with others and is not a hero of justice. he has 4 pokemon which are a dragonair, shiny charmeleon, shiny scizor, shiny tauros but he uses tauros for transportation. his pokemon are much stronger than there species. overall his character is good, he is ambitious, takes care of his pokemon and kills pokemon and humans for the motives if required but is not necessarily evil. this fanfiction has potential to reach on top and i hope it reaches its potential. you have done a great job in making this fanfic author san hope you continue making such progress and please do increase the chapters per-day. thank you and best of luck.
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