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So far, I've liked it. I almost gave up at first to see it was a wish fulfillment, but it wasn't as over-the-top as the others, and it has no system, and more importantly, the world is a mix of dragon ball and bnha.
Meu querido amigo, espero que você não se importe com essa pequena crítica e mama meu ovo de avestruz. Com carinho do seu eterno amigo Vinicius.
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great use of a dual universe rules and environments had a really great s plot story I hope you keep go with the book would love to see more chapters
great story. I always try to find fanfictions like this but a lot of them get discontinued or barely even start. it's great to find something that I can enjoy.
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i don't get it... MC got Ancient Saiyan Bloodline but he's still on par with Goku? Isn't the Ancient Bloodline like Goku being compared to Broly? and Broly naturally got stronger I think?
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Gross! Apparently it is becoming a habit to ruin the power level of the world to which the MC is sent just because the latter is OP. Also now the authors use the phrase 'This is a Fanfic' to justify the horrors they do. Writing a fanfic does not mean that the background of the original story should be 'slaughtered'. (Google translate)
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So far, I've liked it. I almost gave up at first to see it was a wish fulfillment, but it wasn't as over-the-top as the others, and it has no system, and more importantly, the world is a mix of dragon ball and bnha.
Meu querido amigo, espero que você não se importe com essa pequena crítica e mama meu ovo de avestruz. Com carinho do seu eterno amigo Vinicius.
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great use of a dual universe rules and environments had a really great s plot story I hope you keep go with the book would love to see more chapters
great story. I always try to find fanfictions like this but a lot of them get discontinued or barely even start. it's great to find something that I can enjoy.
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i don't get it... MC got Ancient Saiyan Bloodline but he's still on par with Goku? Isn't the Ancient Bloodline like Goku being compared to Broly? and Broly naturally got stronger I think?
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Gross! Apparently it is becoming a habit to ruin the power level of the world to which the MC is sent just because the latter is OP. Also now the authors use the phrase 'This is a Fanfic' to justify the horrors they do. Writing a fanfic does not mean that the background of the original story should be 'slaughtered'. (Google translate)
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is this dropped ? PLEASE DON'T