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I love the story keep going! yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!
An amazing fanfiction with just the right amount of action, cute moments. I love how you had Ayane train Izuku. Amazing job. Have fun on your hiatus.
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[COMPLETED] π Why author, just why and I was even looking forward to the next chapter too ΰΌΰΊΆοΈ΅ΰΌΰΊΆ ...........................................
one of my favorites, i thought it's only in hiatus, but why is it labeled as completed tho?? i will be waiting for the update, please tell me it will still update huhu TT
As an idiot, I can say that this story have helped me get my job at a local company with good pay by killing everyone in the building and taking over the company
it's good like the author other yuri story and the semi op mc is also good after all she not getting trashed by the other enemy hopefully for the upcoming festival MHA event[img=recommend]
Would have been good but it takes a hit too much from unnecessary lyIng and hiding things that dont need to hidden. βHide thisβ Hide your quirk its unheard of two quirks that have nothing to do with each other. βI dont want to get first placeβ βits his time to shine ill do something flashy laterβ it makes the story lame worrying about the plot and stuff if the character dosent affect the original plot whats the pont if the fanfic she should be the protagonist of her own life if even she considers herself an extra what do you think the readers will think
author is this fanfic dropped or just in hiatus?? ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ
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Good phase, grammar nice, story nice, but I feel like, everyone reaction too shallow, like all she did only abnormal, not extraordinary, overall I like this lastly YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO
not much about the world is given except that u need to rely on your memory of MBA to imagine the environment.good story nethertheless but some minor grammer mistake but still gud
Overall, it's a good fanfic. The only annoyance is that the author unnecessarily created two identities for the mc and to make matters worse divided the powers of the mc between the two. That would have been ok in a medieval world where having two identities isn't really a crime, but in the modern world it's a big mistake. At some point the mc will need to fire her hero id and this will reveal that the two are actually her. If they simply listed that the hero ID has all combat powers and then the power to change clothes into the civil ID (without revealing the shape-shifting), or listed both as having fire powers but the hero being an oni with fire powers and the civilian has only fire would not be a problem, as it is normal for siblings to have similar quirks in bnh. Even listing civil identity as quirkless, or a useless power like eye color mutation or 2% accelerated thinking would have been ok. As things stand now, it's only a matter of time before mc's identity is revealed and disaster results.
Very nice, she is slightly overpowered, capable of casually fighting nomu very early in the story. Also this isn't a complete AU, the story starts at the same point but butterfly-effects out of control.
im reading it because of Ojou just like what name says she is really Kawaii PS. it seems i need to reach 140 words so i can post the review
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LOVE IT GREAT POTENTIAL FOR 100S OF CHAPTERS SO PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP
To simply put. It is awesome. There has been so many reference in this story. And its definitely a good read, i just binged it. Dear Author-san, I want mooooore.
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lol I didn't expect your novel to be here too, I just looked for your novel here and I found it. Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
you met my requirements, yuri-yes, no harem-yes, op-yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes.
I liked the idea. Maybe you lacked a bit of childhood development or something like that and make the characters not so flat, but overall you do a good job
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GenderbentMerlin was recommended this novel to me so I read this.everything in this novel is well written and I like vtuber so it's interesting plot story so far.
Yo Handsome Reader here Iβm back cause I forgot to ask for Ayame Pictures in my first review. I know you have em.
I love the story keep going! yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!
An amazing fanfiction with just the right amount of action, cute moments. I love how you had Ayane train Izuku. Amazing job. Have fun on your hiatus.
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[COMPLETED] π Why author, just why and I was even looking forward to the next chapter too ΰΌΰΊΆοΈ΅ΰΌΰΊΆ ...........................................
one of my favorites, i thought it's only in hiatus, but why is it labeled as completed tho?? i will be waiting for the update, please tell me it will still update huhu TT
As an idiot, I can say that this story have helped me get my job at a local company with good pay by killing everyone in the building and taking over the company
it's good like the author other yuri story and the semi op mc is also good after all she not getting trashed by the other enemy hopefully for the upcoming festival MHA event[img=recommend]
Would have been good but it takes a hit too much from unnecessary lyIng and hiding things that dont need to hidden. βHide thisβ Hide your quirk its unheard of two quirks that have nothing to do with each other. βI dont want to get first placeβ βits his time to shine ill do something flashy laterβ it makes the story lame worrying about the plot and stuff if the character dosent affect the original plot whats the pont if the fanfic she should be the protagonist of her own life if even she considers herself an extra what do you think the readers will think
author is this fanfic dropped or just in hiatus?? ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ
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Good phase, grammar nice, story nice, but I feel like, everyone reaction too shallow, like all she did only abnormal, not extraordinary, overall I like this lastly YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO YO DAYO
not much about the world is given except that u need to rely on your memory of MBA to imagine the environment.good story nethertheless but some minor grammer mistake but still gud
Overall, it's a good fanfic. The only annoyance is that the author unnecessarily created two identities for the mc and to make matters worse divided the powers of the mc between the two. That would have been ok in a medieval world where having two identities isn't really a crime, but in the modern world it's a big mistake. At some point the mc will need to fire her hero id and this will reveal that the two are actually her. If they simply listed that the hero ID has all combat powers and then the power to change clothes into the civil ID (without revealing the shape-shifting), or listed both as having fire powers but the hero being an oni with fire powers and the civilian has only fire would not be a problem, as it is normal for siblings to have similar quirks in bnh. Even listing civil identity as quirkless, or a useless power like eye color mutation or 2% accelerated thinking would have been ok. As things stand now, it's only a matter of time before mc's identity is revealed and disaster results.
Very nice, she is slightly overpowered, capable of casually fighting nomu very early in the story. Also this isn't a complete AU, the story starts at the same point but butterfly-effects out of control.
im reading it because of Ojou just like what name says she is really Kawaii PS. it seems i need to reach 140 words so i can post the review
Yo dazoγ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €
Reveal Spoiler LOVE IT GREAT POTENTIAL FOR 100S OF CHAPTERS SO PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP
To simply put. It is awesome. There has been so many reference in this story. And its definitely a good read, i just binged it. Dear Author-san, I want mooooore.
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lol I didn't expect your novel to be here too, I just looked for your novel here and I found it. Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
you met my requirements, yuri-yes, no harem-yes, op-yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes.
I liked the idea. Maybe you lacked a bit of childhood development or something like that and make the characters not so flat, but overall you do a good job
Very nice ..................................................................................................................................
GenderbentMerlin was recommended this novel to me so I read this.everything in this novel is well written and I like vtuber so it's interesting plot story so far.
Yo Handsome Reader here Iβm back cause I forgot to ask for Ayame Pictures in my first review. I know you have em.
i hope you continue with the novel.