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So 3 years for Dudley so far... or rather 3 books. An amusing thing is that this is basically a Return/Rebirth type story with a "villain" type who is suppressing the original "hero protagonist", a fanon harem master Harry Potter.
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Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far. Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far.Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far.Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far.
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was interesting at the start than he kinda turns into a degenerate unintelligent every holes a goal kinda thing and the last chapter just kinda ruined it for me not a fan that your a cuck 4/10 some people enjoy that stuff tho so to eaches own
So good. Omg. Ha ha. Poor hermione. Naive girl. Excited for more. So good. Omg. Ha ha. Poor hermione. Naive girl.So good. Omg. Ha ha. Poor hermione. Naive girl.
another great chapter with ginny. Excited for more chapters. another great chapter with ginny. Excited for more chapters.another great chapter with ginny. Excited for more chapters.
Reveal Spoiler Nice so far. Fresh to see dudley as a mc. Nice so far. Fresh to see dudley as a mc.Nice so far. Fresh to see dudley as a mc.Nice so far. Fresh to see dudley as a mc.
More please. This is so good. 140 words. More please. This is so good. 140 words.More please. This is so good. 140 words.More please. This is so good. 140 words.
Great to see other povs. Loving so far. Great to see other povs. Loving so far.Great to see other povs. Loving so far.Great to see other povs. Loving so far.
Nice. Nice for petunia and dudley. Hope for more. Nice. Nice for petunia and dudley. Hope for more.Nice. Nice for petunia and dudley. Hope for more.
this is really good. Please keep updating more. this is really good. Please keep updating more.this is really good. Please keep updating more.
Just giving the author some support, it’s the first time seeing a Harry Potter fanfic where the mc is Dudley, so keep going
honestly with taking Harry's magic it kind of ruined it for me since there's no real reason reason the antagonism behind everything at that point. then again very few potterverse fan fics ever turn out well for one reason or another so I'll go back tomeaiting on dxd fan fics or something
DO NOT READ ITS DISGUSTING AUTHOR COULD BE A PEDO OR HE WILL GROW IN TO ONE THE WAY THIS STORY IS WRITTEN. THIS SHOULD BE DELETED.
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Reveal Spoiler So 3 years for Dudley so far... or rather 3 books. An amusing thing is that this is basically a Return/Rebirth type story with a "villain" type who is suppressing the original "hero protagonist", a fanon harem master Harry Potter.
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Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far. Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far.Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far.Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far.
Don't. Just don't.
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was interesting at the start than he kinda turns into a degenerate unintelligent every holes a goal kinda thing and the last chapter just kinda ruined it for me not a fan that your a cuck 4/10 some people enjoy that stuff tho so to eaches own
So good. Omg. Ha ha. Poor hermione. Naive girl. Excited for more. So good. Omg. Ha ha. Poor hermione. Naive girl.So good. Omg. Ha ha. Poor hermione. Naive girl.
another great chapter with ginny. Excited for more chapters. another great chapter with ginny. Excited for more chapters.another great chapter with ginny. Excited for more chapters.
Reveal Spoiler Nice so far. Fresh to see dudley as a mc. Nice so far. Fresh to see dudley as a mc.Nice so far. Fresh to see dudley as a mc.Nice so far. Fresh to see dudley as a mc.
More please. This is so good. 140 words. More please. This is so good. 140 words.More please. This is so good. 140 words.More please. This is so good. 140 words.
Great to see other povs. Loving so far. Great to see other povs. Loving so far.Great to see other povs. Loving so far.Great to see other povs. Loving so far.
Nice. Nice for petunia and dudley. Hope for more. Nice. Nice for petunia and dudley. Hope for more.Nice. Nice for petunia and dudley. Hope for more.
this is really good. Please keep updating more. this is really good. Please keep updating more.this is really good. Please keep updating more.
Just giving the author some support, it’s the first time seeing a Harry Potter fanfic where the mc is Dudley, so keep going
honestly with taking Harry's magic it kind of ruined it for me since there's no real reason reason the antagonism behind everything at that point. then again very few potterverse fan fics ever turn out well for one reason or another so I'll go back tomeaiting on dxd fan fics or something
DO NOT READ ITS DISGUSTING AUTHOR COULD BE A PEDO OR HE WILL GROW IN TO ONE THE WAY THIS STORY IS WRITTEN. THIS SHOULD BE DELETED.