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love the book although the quality is not the best I still like the story itself so keep writing pancakes witch ill love to see more of chaos and his.... okay i don't want to put spoilers out there so bye
2 Hey Author I Have Seen All Your Works Here In WN They Are Almost The Same So Is It Possible If All Of Your Main In All Novels Has The Same Lineages? PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP.IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Decent read , good innocent romance, decent pacing, kinda hollow at some points but its fine, its wholesome how MC develops his feelings and emotions (a bit cringe but wholesome nonetheless), overall very entertaining.
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Its a good story and i recommend it even though i almost only read female mc story's. Speaking of female mc story's, are you planning on making a new book soon? and if so, is it going to be a female mc or male mc? I always look forward toward new story's from you and Epic of catepillar was really good ( even though after 1000+ chapter it gets pretty repetetive ) [img=recommend]
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it's a very good book highly recommended it to any who's likes overpower characters. the world building is great and I really the characters and their story arc so far it's a great book
Amezing my englhis is going to be broken sorry in my opinion its perfect only thing is its kinda slow some times but all a great novel my favorite in a long time so good love it
I really like this one. Especially the part where my favorite character/anime gets mentioned... A.K.A overlord .... The MC is not dumb either as a lot of others are in some way although he doesn't have a normal common sense because of his past life where he was experimented on as a child before death but he learns quite fast i think.
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um hi i was reading your info and what not. i was wondering if you would be ok if i threw a idea towards you? iv read all yours books and you said you love mixing geres so i hope youl say yes and let me pitch to u my idea for a new book?
I’m Enjoying it so far and the power is nice 👍🏾👌🏾 I hope it doesn’t become a harem though it would be the worst and at first I was hoping he found a vampire queen or something but I guess not:/
It's a great novel filled with creativity lots of different abilities and different ways for cultivation BUT grammar is lacking and also characters don't feel real enough
Great novel filled with new things in each chapter BUt Author please have another look at past tense grammar in English You are seriously lacking in that grammar
I can't tell you what it really is. I can only tell you what it feels like and right now it's a.......I ran outta fuel. But God fucking damn your book is awesome. I'm really damn amazed.
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So all your books look interesting so can you tell me the one that has the least chances of getting droped ............................ . ......
Is there ever going to be a crossover with other novels you have created or will it be like a scene or ark were they mention another character from another novel you made in a foreboding way due to the time difference between novels or will the characters straight up meet at one time.
Great story. I would definitely recommend this to any of my froends... if I had any. Can't wait for some romance and keep up the good work sir or ma'am
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Hello thor, can i ask u something? Where u fine ur reference to making this novel, is quite unique and how the system work is so cool. But this is a very good novel, so keep ur hard work thor[img=recommend]
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System ✅ Dragon ✅ Vampire ✅ Slime Waifu✅ Overall pretty interesting. MC is unique unlike most these days. Im enjoying the story but have one major complaint. The system notification get a bit crazy. I find myself skipping half the chapter because of the notifications, I really dont want to read the description of 20 skills he wont use. This might change because the Author stated a Skill fusion skill will make its appearance but for now its pretty hard to bear. Then again, it is a free story so I don’t really have a right to complain. Keep up the good work Author 👍
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História muito interessante amei,gostei de mais da história do enrendo e muito da trama,o harém ou o começo parece promissor espero muito dele,e o filho dele é fofinho
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i love this novel...........................................................................................................................
Really good story. Love the characters. My only problem is that I have noticed at first how the author repeat lots of information in the free chapters. Sometimes, it can even take about 20% or more of space to repeat old info from the previous chapter. I was disappointed to realize the same method comes back in the paid chapters. As if the author was afraid we would get confused in the next chapter. If I pay for a chapter, I would prefer it to be all new info. No need to spend 10~30% of chapter space for old info.
love the book although the quality is not the best I still like the story itself so keep writing pancakes witch ill love to see more of chaos and his.... okay i don't want to put spoilers out there so bye
2 Hey Author I Have Seen All Your Works Here In WN They Are Almost The Same So Is It Possible If All Of Your Main In All Novels Has The Same Lineages? PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP.IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Decent read , good innocent romance, decent pacing, kinda hollow at some points but its fine, its wholesome how MC develops his feelings and emotions (a bit cringe but wholesome nonetheless), overall very entertaining.
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Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Its a good story and i recommend it even though i almost only read female mc story's. Speaking of female mc story's, are you planning on making a new book soon? and if so, is it going to be a female mc or male mc? I always look forward toward new story's from you and Epic of catepillar was really good ( even though after 1000+ chapter it gets pretty repetetive ) [img=recommend]
Let's hope it's good Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej heheejehejjehehehehejejjee
Reveal Spoiler it's a very good book highly recommended it to any who's likes overpower characters. the world building is great and I really the characters and their story arc so far it's a great book
Amezing my englhis is going to be broken sorry in my opinion its perfect only thing is its kinda slow some times but all a great novel my favorite in a long time so good love it
I really like this one. Especially the part where my favorite character/anime gets mentioned... A.K.A overlord .... The MC is not dumb either as a lot of others are in some way although he doesn't have a normal common sense because of his past life where he was experimented on as a child before death but he learns quite fast i think.
Reveal Spoiler um hi i was reading your info and what not. i was wondering if you would be ok if i threw a idea towards you? iv read all yours books and you said you love mixing geres so i hope youl say yes and let me pitch to u my idea for a new book?
I’m Enjoying it so far and the power is nice 👍🏾👌🏾 I hope it doesn’t become a harem though it would be the worst and at first I was hoping he found a vampire queen or something but I guess not:/
It's a great novel filled with creativity lots of different abilities and different ways for cultivation BUT grammar is lacking and also characters don't feel real enough
Great novel filled with new things in each chapter BUt Author please have another look at past tense grammar in English You are seriously lacking in that grammar
I can't tell you what it really is. I can only tell you what it feels like and right now it's a.......I ran outta fuel. But God fucking damn your book is awesome. I'm really damn amazed.
reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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So all your books look interesting so can you tell me the one that has the least chances of getting droped ............................ . ......
Is there ever going to be a crossover with other novels you have created or will it be like a scene or ark were they mention another character from another novel you made in a foreboding way due to the time difference between novels or will the characters straight up meet at one time.
Great story. I would definitely recommend this to any of my froends... if I had any. Can't wait for some romance and keep up the good work sir or ma'am
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Reveal Spoiler Hello thor, can i ask u something? Where u fine ur reference to making this novel, is quite unique and how the system work is so cool. But this is a very good novel, so keep ur hard work thor[img=recommend]
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System ✅ Dragon ✅ Vampire ✅ Slime Waifu✅ Overall pretty interesting. MC is unique unlike most these days. Im enjoying the story but have one major complaint. The system notification get a bit crazy. I find myself skipping half the chapter because of the notifications, I really dont want to read the description of 20 skills he wont use. This might change because the Author stated a Skill fusion skill will make its appearance but for now its pretty hard to bear. Then again, it is a free story so I don’t really have a right to complain. Keep up the good work Author 👍
Reveal Spoiler História muito interessante amei,gostei de mais da história do enrendo e muito da trama,o harém ou o começo parece promissor espero muito dele,e o filho dele é fofinho
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i love this novel...........................................................................................................................
Really good story. Love the characters. My only problem is that I have noticed at first how the author repeat lots of information in the free chapters. Sometimes, it can even take about 20% or more of space to repeat old info from the previous chapter. I was disappointed to realize the same method comes back in the paid chapters. As if the author was afraid we would get confused in the next chapter. If I pay for a chapter, I would prefer it to be all new info. No need to spend 10~30% of chapter space for old info.