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4.5 updates it please[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp]
Really very good novel, I enjoyed reading it and I am looking forward to the emergence of MC and his broken system I think the system has something to do with the Fate Eater Am I right, I am looking forward to see how you link the two, Happy Luck.
The plot is good, the characters are luxurious and the story world is very large, it seems that the MC is still a frog at the bottom of a well now, I hope his character is also good and not like the heroes of Chinese novels in the future of the story.
It's good to see it's kinda fun but it's not enough I want more chapters Please keep downloading I'll add them to the library now.this is verry good story
An interesting novel, despite the lack of chapters now, but I expect more work from you, brother. You have to lack a lot of scientific information, the followers will be disturbed.
One of the best introductions to the novels that I have personally read. It looks like it will be interesting, a fight between a terrifying monster and a more terrifying civilization. Is the MC's world close to the explorer universe?
Very good novel, the story goes well and plot is great in the story, I'm eager to see the full story Looks like the dragon will have some kind of relation with the MC later!
Good, on great to read this, keep going, The writing is really good, the story setting looks interesting, and the story world is really huge, I'm excited for the next chapters.
Well your author here, I will review this work early and give some information about the future of the story because it will be rather long and not some short nonsense without plot... Volume one is a story about the source of the system because it is not something that will fall on the head of the hero out of thin air I do not like it to be My own story is vague or just I'm giving the hero a system from the gods that's not here. The story will be a coherent plot from beginning to end. I hope you will support me to continue with this story because it will definitely not be ordinary. If you like the legendary mechanic then you will definitely like my novel but my story world is definitely not a game it is the original universe of our galaxy and our world but in a way with a wilder imagination I will work hard to make you like the story world even if it is very big I will not compromise I will accept any challenge for you❤️ For the type of system it is definitely It will be very broken in the original hero world (Earth) and even in the galaxy (Milky Way) ,because he will have the ability to devour fate, but outside this range, its effect will be limited and you will know the reason later.
4.5 updates it please[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp]
Really very good novel, I enjoyed reading it and I am looking forward to the emergence of MC and his broken system I think the system has something to do with the Fate Eater Am I right, I am looking forward to see how you link the two, Happy Luck.
The plot is good, the characters are luxurious and the story world is very large, it seems that the MC is still a frog at the bottom of a well now, I hope his character is also good and not like the heroes of Chinese novels in the future of the story.
It's good to see it's kinda fun but it's not enough I want more chapters Please keep downloading I'll add them to the library now.this is verry good story
An interesting novel, despite the lack of chapters now, but I expect more work from you, brother. You have to lack a lot of scientific information, the followers will be disturbed.
One of the best introductions to the novels that I have personally read. It looks like it will be interesting, a fight between a terrifying monster and a more terrifying civilization. Is the MC's world close to the explorer universe?
Very good novel, the story goes well and plot is great in the story, I'm eager to see the full story Looks like the dragon will have some kind of relation with the MC later!
Good, on great to read this, keep going, The writing is really good, the story setting looks interesting, and the story world is really huge, I'm excited for the next chapters.
Well your author here, I will review this work early and give some information about the future of the story because it will be rather long and not some short nonsense without plot... Volume one is a story about the source of the system because it is not something that will fall on the head of the hero out of thin air I do not like it to be My own story is vague or just I'm giving the hero a system from the gods that's not here. The story will be a coherent plot from beginning to end. I hope you will support me to continue with this story because it will definitely not be ordinary. If you like the legendary mechanic then you will definitely like my novel but my story world is definitely not a game it is the original universe of our galaxy and our world but in a way with a wilder imagination I will work hard to make you like the story world even if it is very big I will not compromise I will accept any challenge for you❤️ For the type of system it is definitely It will be very broken in the original hero world (Earth) and even in the galaxy (Milky Way) ,because he will have the ability to devour fate, but outside this range, its effect will be limited and you will know the reason later.
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