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it really good for now keep the good works a quik question is he gonna summon a servant before go to other world? .........................
There are no grammar mistakes. Story development is kinda good. The main problem is the Character and Personality of MC. He's just too Naive. He says out all his or his opponent's secret like a fool. The update stability is also kinda low. Overall, This ff had a great potential but it really disappointed me.
Do not dissapont me hooman Reject humanity become monke Reject humanity become monke Reject humanity become monke Reject humanity become monke Reject humanity become monke Reject humanity become monke Reject humanity become monke Reject humanity become monke
it really good for now keep the good works a quik question is he gonna summon a servant before go to other world? .........................
There are no grammar mistakes. Story development is kinda good. The main problem is the Character and Personality of MC. He's just too Naive. He says out all his or his opponent's secret like a fool. The update stability is also kinda low. Overall, This ff had a great potential but it really disappointed me.