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As you probably read from the other reviews, the writing quality does get better. Just power through it and you'll get to the really good parts. There are a few things that came to my attention though. The first would be the terrible synopsis you have written. I mean seriously, you get no information out of this. And Please Put More Words In Each Line Anyway, the story is pretty interesting. A dude who gets reincarnated into Tensura and gets OP real fast is always a good combination in my books. He also goes into other universes too. (Danmachi, highschool of the dead and Campione or whatever it's called) The MC is a crazy and cold blooded killer, so be aware of that. Being calm and nonchalant when committing genocide kind of crazy, to be specific. I like it but some don't. To each their own I guess. Just give it a try if you're interested and don't get discouraged by the worse grammar in the first few chapters, trust me it truly gets better.
The Great Author Reviewing Himself. I'm going to be honest this was basically a dumpster fire for the first 20 chapters I read it myself and it sucked but I can confidently say that after 25 or 30 chapters it was pretty good and as of now the quality of everything is unimaginable folds better, Do with that as you will
5/5 for me this used to be my fav fic but one day it got deleted, thanks author for reupload.
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Love the book it's really interesting pls don't drop 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
This masterpiece is finally back 🥰. I'm glad to see you back Author-sama. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
finally after a long time 😭.....I really want to read this ff again but It's got deleted👿 finally you want to repost this ff thx author[img=recommend]
wha happen? you ok author? did the acc get hacked or something???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It was an amazing story, but if you're reading this on a new account author, why was your account deleted? Just out of interest...................................................
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First 20 not great but the rest of the story was amazing and this is my second time reading it live the story and the authors work periods to fill the word limit nothing after this
As I have read this, the fic is pretty good. And while some people might not like the personality of the mc, I quite do. So I will give a review and say I like this fic.
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Honestly speaking as the author has said them selves the first 20ish chapters are completely nonsensical HOWEVER! if you get past those few chapters it only becomes more nonsensical so much so that it actually makes sense. This is fanfic for real men.
why is this harem I thought what he seek is not women according to what I read in the introduction. ............... ..... .....................
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This story is great for those antihero or villain loving genres. The Mc is just a little to insane and destructive for me. To each his own though.
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hi again . this man is the reason for all our pain and misery burn him i say burn him. ... . . . . . . . . . . .. .. .. . . . . . . . . . . . .
This is one of my favourites, the writing quality is quite good and I overall enjoy reading it. The mc is rather psychotic, but in an interesting way, that is quite enjoyable to see as evil mcs done right are rather rare, in conclusion I would recommend this to all who are ok with a story being on the darker side.
WQ:4 Apparently the beginning has bad writing which I don't remember since it's been months. As of rn ,the quality is quite good SD: 4 I love the present arc CD: 5 For a character who pretty much loves chaos, he's quite likeable in my books US:5 1 per day WB:5 I mean it's automatically 5 for fanfics
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Follow up questions for the author: 1 - How will he scale to other people when he returns to tensura? his current power should easily be above any anime/manga characters for tensura LN is a whole different story. but considering we haven't gotten there & he should still be growing by the time we do get there would hr be the most powerful character? 2 - He has power nullification, but you could add the power he nullifies becomes his own because it's emptied into his abyss. 3 - I personally think that the power rankings within the harem should go as followed : Ophis >= Milim >>Yellow, White, Violet >>>= Human girls ( Regardless of their powerups there are fundamental differences. (Ophis is stated to be equal to great red, also she has the power of infinity like the MC) (The Primordial demons shouldn't need an explanation considering you've already given one, & base demons violate humans, base primordial demons can probably take on a entire kingdom / empire if there is no guardian / true dragon. Our current primordial demons Pre-demonlord we're already stronger than demon lord ex. guy crimson when they got named "Their power has increased 10 fold" Previously you stated most demon lords would have trouble with them, if their power increased 10 fold then they could slaughter all the demon lords ex. guy crimson milim & our MC When they do become demo lords their power increased seven fold? therefore putting them at slightly below guy crimson & milim imo, milim would win a battle of attrition because of wrath king, but all 3 of them could probably take her.)The human girls currently can't be scaled atm ( Chapter 70)
Chapter - 68: I like the story currently where I'm at, the writing can be a bit cringe at times, but pull through it. I would love for the harem to lessen just a tad bit, through unknown means (Just do something funny that kills off one or two of them, (Can't be any of the tensura girls) whether you do it or not is up to you but, the harem is getting large. it was done with 1-4(5) girls but it's alot of management & slightly makes the story unenjoyable considering it disables the 'Do what I want' mindset because he has to worry about the females every 2 & a half seconds. Though he does get use from them, maybe make them a bit more unruly? I don't know how to explain it, but it feels like the females are kinda just there, with one goal of being with the MC. (Please just kill off 1-2(3) it'll make the story much more enjoyable because we won't have to wait through the training arcs for the girls, while all of the tensura girls are currently power, therefore allowing him to actually do what he wants. (Bro I'm begging you) This is a basic review, & before you tell me 'It will get better that won't necessarily matter if everyone drops it of cringe, & contradictions within his personality (Though it was stated it still doesn't help to see that almost every chapter) you'll lose readers. & Before you or anyone says 'Write one better than' This is constructive criticism not downright hatting on it, nor do I think I could personally write one better. but that's not the point is it, otherwise, the author wouldn't have asked us to write reviews. though it would change his personality, I think it would be a good change considering that at this point it should be titled 'Through the multiverse collecting girls' rather than the current title. I overall enjoy it I'm going to once more state this. Thank you for your work author-san, have a wonderful day.
for those hesitating to read because of people saying the writing is bad or read themselves the start but then stopped you should know that after chapter 25 it gets WAY better so read until then at least before deciding to drop please because it's the author's first work and he put a lot of effort into it, and it's sad to see bad reviews and the loss of readers just because they judged a book by it's cover. *for the author only* go to dxd pls
As you probably read from the other reviews, the writing quality does get better. Just power through it and you'll get to the really good parts. There are a few things that came to my attention though. The first would be the terrible synopsis you have written. I mean seriously, you get no information out of this. And Please Put More Words In Each Line Anyway, the story is pretty interesting. A dude who gets reincarnated into Tensura and gets OP real fast is always a good combination in my books. He also goes into other universes too. (Danmachi, highschool of the dead and Campione or whatever it's called) The MC is a crazy and cold blooded killer, so be aware of that. Being calm and nonchalant when committing genocide kind of crazy, to be specific. I like it but some don't. To each their own I guess. Just give it a try if you're interested and don't get discouraged by the worse grammar in the first few chapters, trust me it truly gets better.
The Great Author Reviewing Himself. I'm going to be honest this was basically a dumpster fire for the first 20 chapters I read it myself and it sucked but I can confidently say that after 25 or 30 chapters it was pretty good and as of now the quality of everything is unimaginable folds better, Do with that as you will
5/5 for me this used to be my fav fic but one day it got deleted, thanks author for reupload.
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Love the book it's really interesting pls don't drop 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
This masterpiece is finally back 🥰. I'm glad to see you back Author-sama. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
finally after a long time 😭.....I really want to read this ff again but It's got deleted👿 finally you want to repost this ff thx author[img=recommend]
wha happen? you ok author? did the acc get hacked or something???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It was an amazing story, but if you're reading this on a new account author, why was your account deleted? Just out of interest...................................................
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First 20 not great but the rest of the story was amazing and this is my second time reading it live the story and the authors work periods to fill the word limit nothing after this
As I have read this, the fic is pretty good. And while some people might not like the personality of the mc, I quite do. So I will give a review and say I like this fic.
have some 5 star reviews have some 5 star reviews have some 5 star reviews have some 5 star reviews have some 5 star reviews have some 5 star reviews have some 5 star reviews have some 5 star reviews
Honestly speaking as the author has said them selves the first 20ish chapters are completely nonsensical HOWEVER! if you get past those few chapters it only becomes more nonsensical so much so that it actually makes sense. This is fanfic for real men.
why is this harem I thought what he seek is not women according to what I read in the introduction. ............... ..... .....................
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This story is great for those antihero or villain loving genres. The Mc is just a little to insane and destructive for me. To each his own though.
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hi again . this man is the reason for all our pain and misery burn him i say burn him. ... . . . . . . . . . . .. .. .. . . . . . . . . . . . .
This is one of my favourites, the writing quality is quite good and I overall enjoy reading it. The mc is rather psychotic, but in an interesting way, that is quite enjoyable to see as evil mcs done right are rather rare, in conclusion I would recommend this to all who are ok with a story being on the darker side.
WQ:4 Apparently the beginning has bad writing which I don't remember since it's been months. As of rn ,the quality is quite good SD: 4 I love the present arc CD: 5 For a character who pretty much loves chaos, he's quite likeable in my books US:5 1 per day WB:5 I mean it's automatically 5 for fanfics
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Follow up questions for the author: 1 - How will he scale to other people when he returns to tensura? his current power should easily be above any anime/manga characters for tensura LN is a whole different story. but considering we haven't gotten there & he should still be growing by the time we do get there would hr be the most powerful character? 2 - He has power nullification, but you could add the power he nullifies becomes his own because it's emptied into his abyss. 3 - I personally think that the power rankings within the harem should go as followed : Ophis >= Milim >>Yellow, White, Violet >>>= Human girls ( Regardless of their powerups there are fundamental differences. (Ophis is stated to be equal to great red, also she has the power of infinity like the MC) (The Primordial demons shouldn't need an explanation considering you've already given one, & base demons violate humans, base primordial demons can probably take on a entire kingdom / empire if there is no guardian / true dragon. Our current primordial demons Pre-demonlord we're already stronger than demon lord ex. guy crimson when they got named "Their power has increased 10 fold" Previously you stated most demon lords would have trouble with them, if their power increased 10 fold then they could slaughter all the demon lords ex. guy crimson milim & our MC When they do become demo lords their power increased seven fold? therefore putting them at slightly below guy crimson & milim imo, milim would win a battle of attrition because of wrath king, but all 3 of them could probably take her.)The human girls currently can't be scaled atm ( Chapter 70)
Chapter - 68: I like the story currently where I'm at, the writing can be a bit cringe at times, but pull through it. I would love for the harem to lessen just a tad bit, through unknown means (Just do something funny that kills off one or two of them, (Can't be any of the tensura girls) whether you do it or not is up to you but, the harem is getting large. it was done with 1-4(5) girls but it's alot of management & slightly makes the story unenjoyable considering it disables the 'Do what I want' mindset because he has to worry about the females every 2 & a half seconds. Though he does get use from them, maybe make them a bit more unruly? I don't know how to explain it, but it feels like the females are kinda just there, with one goal of being with the MC. (Please just kill off 1-2(3) it'll make the story much more enjoyable because we won't have to wait through the training arcs for the girls, while all of the tensura girls are currently power, therefore allowing him to actually do what he wants. (Bro I'm begging you) This is a basic review, & before you tell me 'It will get better that won't necessarily matter if everyone drops it of cringe, & contradictions within his personality (Though it was stated it still doesn't help to see that almost every chapter) you'll lose readers. & Before you or anyone says 'Write one better than' This is constructive criticism not downright hatting on it, nor do I think I could personally write one better. but that's not the point is it, otherwise, the author wouldn't have asked us to write reviews. though it would change his personality, I think it would be a good change considering that at this point it should be titled 'Through the multiverse collecting girls' rather than the current title. I overall enjoy it I'm going to once more state this. Thank you for your work author-san, have a wonderful day.
for those hesitating to read because of people saying the writing is bad or read themselves the start but then stopped you should know that after chapter 25 it gets WAY better so read until then at least before deciding to drop please because it's the author's first work and he put a lot of effort into it, and it's sad to see bad reviews and the loss of readers just because they judged a book by it's cover. *for the author only* go to dxd pls