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Quite a good fan-fiction, with a promising mc and a nice cheat with a good backstory. The only problem is the mc, he is unlikebale to the extreme, with suicidal tendencies and many bad decisions made. Still all of these problems are resolved by the plot armor and while it is not the problem for the mc to have a plot armor it is annoying seeing him saved by it every 3/4 chapters.
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AMAZING FF!!!!! ................................................................................................................................................................................
Awesome novel. Very amazing read. The MC is OP but the nature of his power forces him to put handicaps on himself to further improve his strength. MC makes use of the full potential of his power unlike other novel mc’s who have soooooo much advantage but still struggle to defeat their enemies.
One of the worst kind of MC according to me. He let's go of everyone he meets when they have killing intent toward him Even then it was ok BUT WHY IS HE LETTING GO OF EVERY ONE OF PEOPLE HE MAKES ENEMIES OF!? AND WHAT IS HIS SI MP LIKE BEHAVIOUR!? AND HE'S TOO DUMB! HE HAS SO MANY POTENTIAL AND HE'S JUST LIKE OH I'M SCARED TO GET A RING JUST BECAUSE I SAW A SCARY FIGHT BETWEEN A CULTIVATOR AND SOUL BEAST !? The whole Fanfic is destroyed by Author. If not for the Plot Armour, MC died and got revived just in the starting chapters. I USUALLY DON'T WRITE A BAD REVIEW TO NOT DISCOURAGE ANY AUTHOR BUT I CAN'T STAND THIS SHET OF A NOVEL! Writing Quality : 3 * Story Development : 1* Character Design: 1* Updating Stability: 4* World Background: 1* I really appreciate any readers to read only if they are willing to read about a super naive MC who acts as a si mp and is only able to survive due to Plot Armour. I felt so much rage building up in me when I read it. In starting I let it go thinking that he will atleast kill people if necessary. BUT NO! HE JUST LET'S THEM GO AWAY LIKE NOTHING EVEN IF THEY ONCE KILLED HIM!
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Ceritanya bagus dan sangat menarik bagi saya.. Saya harap novel ini semakin cepat updated dan seru ceritanya.. Saya dukung anda author 👍😅 semoga sukses
Best Soul Land fanfiction novel I've read so far and hope you will continue to writing this masterpiece. 📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖
It’s very good. 👋🎊✋🥚🏳️🤩👍🤝👌🤟✋🤚🖐👈👉👆🦶🤙🧠👁👅👄🦻🫀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👀👀👁👀👀👀👀👁👀👁👀👀👀👀👣👣👁👁👁👀👀👀👁👁👣👀👁👁👣👀
GREAT FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ............................................................................................................................................ but MORE LEMON, PLEASE AUTHOR-SAMA!!!
AMAZING FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ......................................................................................................................................................
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GREAT FF!!!!!!!!!!!! .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
great ff!!!!!!!!!! ................................................................................................................................................................
As annoying as the main character is you can't help, but continue reading to find out what happens next. Needs a little editing in grammar and spelling. A really good read.
Great novel ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
AMAZING FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .........................................................................................................................................................
forgot to review this one after following for so long. and current rank 69. nice! . . . . . . .
I don't care about spoilers . just tell me if mc will tell others about sprit souls and help others get them and who are romance partner I am at chapter 81.
It's a pleasure to read this novel. The world feels alive and there is so much thought put into it, the interactions between characters feels real. The author is releasing very consistently too so It's perfect.
This a fine book one of the best fan fic that I have read in a long time. Character development is just wow and above all is the writing and story.
Excellent.. This is masterpiece at least at how author made story line from this to that.. I can feel how characters developed from beginning to now.. Unbelievable to think someone can make an fan fiction to this awesome work.. Thanks cuz make this art.
A história é mt boa, o autor tem estabilidade nas publicações e os personagens são bem desenvolvidos... A única mudança que eu gostaria, seria que o relacionamento entre Mc e Ah Yin fosse mais rapido... Fora isso ótima história.
Reveal Spoiler
it's been in my bookmark for a while, I'm just stacking chapters.btw is there any romance?? just asking cuz you romance is the spice for fanfic and novel.
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Great story and great mc. ..................................................................................................................................................
Previously I rated this novel pretty low, but after the first 20 chapters in which the mc was pretty unlikeable and even suicidal I found the story really interesting. Even if the mc sometimes gets dumber when he sees big rewards with his trait.
Quite a good fan-fiction, with a promising mc and a nice cheat with a good backstory. The only problem is the mc, he is unlikebale to the extreme, with suicidal tendencies and many bad decisions made. Still all of these problems are resolved by the plot armor and while it is not the problem for the mc to have a plot armor it is annoying seeing him saved by it every 3/4 chapters.
"with a system" story.... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... .........
good good good goodgood good good goodgood good good goodgood good good goodgood good good goodgood good good goodgood good good goodgood good good goodgood good good goodgood good good good
AMAZING FF!!!!! ................................................................................................................................................................................
Awesome novel. Very amazing read. The MC is OP but the nature of his power forces him to put handicaps on himself to further improve his strength. MC makes use of the full potential of his power unlike other novel mc’s who have soooooo much advantage but still struggle to defeat their enemies.
One of the worst kind of MC according to me. He let's go of everyone he meets when they have killing intent toward him Even then it was ok BUT WHY IS HE LETTING GO OF EVERY ONE OF PEOPLE HE MAKES ENEMIES OF!? AND WHAT IS HIS SI MP LIKE BEHAVIOUR!? AND HE'S TOO DUMB! HE HAS SO MANY POTENTIAL AND HE'S JUST LIKE OH I'M SCARED TO GET A RING JUST BECAUSE I SAW A SCARY FIGHT BETWEEN A CULTIVATOR AND SOUL BEAST !? The whole Fanfic is destroyed by Author. If not for the Plot Armour, MC died and got revived just in the starting chapters. I USUALLY DON'T WRITE A BAD REVIEW TO NOT DISCOURAGE ANY AUTHOR BUT I CAN'T STAND THIS SHET OF A NOVEL! Writing Quality : 3 * Story Development : 1* Character Design: 1* Updating Stability: 4* World Background: 1* I really appreciate any readers to read only if they are willing to read about a super naive MC who acts as a si mp and is only able to survive due to Plot Armour. I felt so much rage building up in me when I read it. In starting I let it go thinking that he will atleast kill people if necessary. BUT NO! HE JUST LET'S THEM GO AWAY LIKE NOTHING EVEN IF THEY ONCE KILLED HIM!
ГГ-симп для читателей-симпов. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . .
Ceritanya bagus dan sangat menarik bagi saya.. Saya harap novel ini semakin cepat updated dan seru ceritanya.. Saya dukung anda author 👍😅 semoga sukses
Best Soul Land fanfiction novel I've read so far and hope you will continue to writing this masterpiece. 📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖
It’s very good. 👋🎊✋🥚🏳️🤩👍🤝👌🤟✋🤚🖐👈👉👆🦶🤙🧠👁👅👄🦻🫀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👁👀👀👀👁👀👀👀👀👁👀👁👀👀👀👀👣👣👁👁👁👀👀👀👁👁👣👀👁👁👣👀
GREAT FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ............................................................................................................................................ but MORE LEMON, PLEASE AUTHOR-SAMA!!!
AMAZING FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ......................................................................................................................................................
continue your RI after this 🤤[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
GREAT FF!!!!!!!!!!!! .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
great ff!!!!!!!!!! ................................................................................................................................................................
As annoying as the main character is you can't help, but continue reading to find out what happens next. Needs a little editing in grammar and spelling. A really good read.
Great novel ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
AMAZING FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .........................................................................................................................................................
forgot to review this one after following for so long. and current rank 69. nice! . . . . . . .
I don't care about spoilers . just tell me if mc will tell others about sprit souls and help others get them and who are romance partner I am at chapter 81.
It's a pleasure to read this novel. The world feels alive and there is so much thought put into it, the interactions between characters feels real. The author is releasing very consistently too so It's perfect.
This a fine book one of the best fan fic that I have read in a long time. Character development is just wow and above all is the writing and story.
Excellent.. This is masterpiece at least at how author made story line from this to that.. I can feel how characters developed from beginning to now.. Unbelievable to think someone can make an fan fiction to this awesome work.. Thanks cuz make this art.
A história é mt boa, o autor tem estabilidade nas publicações e os personagens são bem desenvolvidos... A única mudança que eu gostaria, seria que o relacionamento entre Mc e Ah Yin fosse mais rapido... Fora isso ótima história.
Reveal Spoiler it's been in my bookmark for a while, I'm just stacking chapters.btw is there any romance?? just asking cuz you romance is the spice for fanfic and novel.
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Great story and great mc. ..................................................................................................................................................
Previously I rated this novel pretty low, but after the first 20 chapters in which the mc was pretty unlikeable and even suicidal I found the story really interesting. Even if the mc sometimes gets dumber when he sees big rewards with his trait.