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I think it's well-written and some of the low reviews entirely based themselves on grammar issues and such, which were actually not that present. This is the author's first book and the issues that I have seen will be improved through more writing and otherwise, the story is interesting and worth a read, the writing can use some improvement but I think the author already has good descriptive ability. Give it a read, everyone! Keep it up :)
This is dope! Author you're doing a very good job! The story is great and for it being your first story, I give you a thumbs up 👍 Good job. Reginald is a character! He is all in one comedy 😂 the Action scenes got me going. Keep it up Author 👍
I think that the book Is written in a descriptive manner but it is also able to pull you in and keep u interested sure there are some mistakes but the overall story makes you overlook that great story
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
inspired by tomb raider king? Because the concepts of Relics, bringin ppl together after the calamity really seems similar. #IMPORTANT I havent read the novel yet so idk what happens in it
I haven’t read a lot of chapters yet however, if you hate fillers and slightly bad grammar and you are burnt out don’t read this book. If you have patience and love the concept of the book read.
I really enjoyed the first chapter. Your writing style is amazing with few to no noticeable errors. I must say, the power of the relics are quite dangerous from what I read so far😫 Anyway, keep up the great work and I'll be keeping an eye on this story to see how it goes [img=recommend]
Okay this is actually really good and interesting. I totally recommend it to anyone and I'm sure they will be mind blown just like I am now!
As your first novel, it was very well written, the pace was okay , not too fast, i got hooked from the very first chapter, cant wait for more from you
A really interesting idea, which has a powerful start with the colorful image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters and the novel becomes more and more interesting through those words written.
The story has potential. I have to say that the description is really amazing. I mean, it's not too much, and not too less, just enough, just the way it should be. Good work!
The Author work is much appreciated. The way he handled the Characters is very interesting and fascinating. Hoping for more stable chapters. Keep it up.
I have to say.. Wow! I love the character development and the banter! The conversations are so natural and so interesting!! I need more chapters! I need them now!!
!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!
Story seems to be well thought out. I can tell that the author put everything into this work. The story goes along smoothly as it subtly immerses the reader in the plot. Well done author!!
The author has an amazing storyline here and your writing style is good. I didn't find any grammar issues and it didn't disrupt my flow in reading. You have done an amazing job here! Kudos to you. Hoping to read more!! Good work, Author!!
Overall: This is a very interesting novel to read. If you want to read a fantasy book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using third person narration style. We are able to experience the feelings and actions of the characters. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. It's about a guy who'll embark on a journey of assembling a team together ti find out the cause of the apocalypse. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their rolesl. Well written. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.
A great twist on a classic trope. I don't think I've ever seen a fantasy story that happens quite like this. The story plot line is completely different from what you see these days. The continuous action scenes which are very hard to handle, but yet seeing them written out so beautifully its endearing.Kudos to the author. Keep going!All the best!
The story development and characters and wow! the power system is quite awesome,and let's not forget the humor just epic .Keep up the good job bro looking forward for more thrills
The author's love and passion for their craft had me hungrily reading their work. With the highlight of their skill being in openings and closings of their chapters, each segment is happily wrapped up to ensure even the angstiest of times are fulfilling. Write on!
The plot is interesting though these are a few points you could improve on. The setting/world background is very unclear. Is it a futuristic setting or ancient? You use technology and also horse riders which symbolises ancient times. If this novel is 800 years into the future then we should have amazing technology even with the chaos of the old world ending. The characters are not distinct and seem to have the same time and NO motivation. We also don't get a clear idea of who the MC is. Characters aren't well designed and the scene jumps are jarring. You should write scene by scene or use a scene break appropriately. You could use some proofreading before publishing to avoid grammar errors. Also, the plot doesn't satisfy the promise of relics. We don't see the rules of the magic system and it's shady. Good job nonetheless.
I'll be reviewing this base on the fact that this the author's first attempt at writing a story. The world building is legit. The characters are lovable. And the writing style polishes up with more chapter releases. Real time growth from this author The story is very unique and interesting ... Goodluck!
The book is amazing and captivating! It has an amazing plot. The synopsis is well-described as well. Good job, author! Hope to see more of the good work!
For someone who starts as fresh the story development is amazing 😉 not fo mention the characters design and and world background if is on another level. Keep it up 🔥🔥
Good day! This is really interesting, I like how you wonderfully describe the event and it made us think of what happened. I saw some mistakes which I advise you to proofread everything. Good job author, have a nice day!
I really like it! It's interesting, and i can't wait to see what the author comes up with - it seems very creative, and i have a feeling that there will a lot more to come in the future! The beginning was a bit hard to follow, but despite that, i enjoyed reading it. Good luck!
This was so much fun to read! I love how your characters have so much personality, and how they interact with each other blends so well! I didn't find any mistakes grammar wise, but I might have been so enthralled into the story to really notice. The beginning was a bit choppy for me, but once you get through that, it's smooth sailing! Keep going strong young skywalker!!! I'll be rooting for you!
It's a fun read especially when it involves history and relics and other stuff that the novel can offer! It reminds me of "Tomb raider king" but more! I liket his novel, and I hope this story blooms! The only thing that I'd like to point out are "show" and "Tell" technique. There are lot of sentence that you used telling instead of showing. Although telling is a powerful technique, showing brings more emotions to us, readers! Kudos for the author!
The dial is put to a 100 and doesn't go down for a moment! Lots of action, lots of things going on. The world lore is interesting and not too difficult to grasp. The only downside is that with so many things happening the actual event taking place get muddled in all the witty back anf forths between the character. A good story! Keep going!
I think it's well-written and some of the low reviews entirely based themselves on grammar issues and such, which were actually not that present. This is the author's first book and the issues that I have seen will be improved through more writing and otherwise, the story is interesting and worth a read, the writing can use some improvement but I think the author already has good descriptive ability. Give it a read, everyone! Keep it up :)
This is dope! Author you're doing a very good job! The story is great and for it being your first story, I give you a thumbs up 👍 Good job. Reginald is a character! He is all in one comedy 😂 the Action scenes got me going. Keep it up Author 👍
I think that the book Is written in a descriptive manner but it is also able to pull you in and keep u interested sure there are some mistakes but the overall story makes you overlook that great story
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
inspired by tomb raider king? Because the concepts of Relics, bringin ppl together after the calamity really seems similar. #IMPORTANT I havent read the novel yet so idk what happens in it
I haven’t read a lot of chapters yet however, if you hate fillers and slightly bad grammar and you are burnt out don’t read this book. If you have patience and love the concept of the book read.
I really enjoyed the first chapter. Your writing style is amazing with few to no noticeable errors. I must say, the power of the relics are quite dangerous from what I read so far😫 Anyway, keep up the great work and I'll be keeping an eye on this story to see how it goes [img=recommend]
Okay this is actually really good and interesting. I totally recommend it to anyone and I'm sure they will be mind blown just like I am now!
As your first novel, it was very well written, the pace was okay , not too fast, i got hooked from the very first chapter, cant wait for more from you
A really interesting idea, which has a powerful start with the colorful image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters and the novel becomes more and more interesting through those words written.
The story has potential. I have to say that the description is really amazing. I mean, it's not too much, and not too less, just enough, just the way it should be. Good work!
The Author work is much appreciated. The way he handled the Characters is very interesting and fascinating. Hoping for more stable chapters. Keep it up.
I have to say.. Wow! I love the character development and the banter! The conversations are so natural and so interesting!! I need more chapters! I need them now!!
!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!
Story seems to be well thought out. I can tell that the author put everything into this work. The story goes along smoothly as it subtly immerses the reader in the plot. Well done author!!
The author has an amazing storyline here and your writing style is good. I didn't find any grammar issues and it didn't disrupt my flow in reading. You have done an amazing job here! Kudos to you. Hoping to read more!! Good work, Author!!
Overall: This is a very interesting novel to read. If you want to read a fantasy book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using third person narration style. We are able to experience the feelings and actions of the characters. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. It's about a guy who'll embark on a journey of assembling a team together ti find out the cause of the apocalypse. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their rolesl. Well written. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.
A great twist on a classic trope. I don't think I've ever seen a fantasy story that happens quite like this. The story plot line is completely different from what you see these days. The continuous action scenes which are very hard to handle, but yet seeing them written out so beautifully its endearing.Kudos to the author. Keep going!All the best!
The story development and characters and wow! the power system is quite awesome,and let's not forget the humor just epic .Keep up the good job bro looking forward for more thrills
The author's love and passion for their craft had me hungrily reading their work. With the highlight of their skill being in openings and closings of their chapters, each segment is happily wrapped up to ensure even the angstiest of times are fulfilling. Write on!
The plot is interesting though these are a few points you could improve on. The setting/world background is very unclear. Is it a futuristic setting or ancient? You use technology and also horse riders which symbolises ancient times. If this novel is 800 years into the future then we should have amazing technology even with the chaos of the old world ending. The characters are not distinct and seem to have the same time and NO motivation. We also don't get a clear idea of who the MC is. Characters aren't well designed and the scene jumps are jarring. You should write scene by scene or use a scene break appropriately. You could use some proofreading before publishing to avoid grammar errors. Also, the plot doesn't satisfy the promise of relics. We don't see the rules of the magic system and it's shady. Good job nonetheless.
I'll be reviewing this base on the fact that this the author's first attempt at writing a story. The world building is legit. The characters are lovable. And the writing style polishes up with more chapter releases. Real time growth from this author The story is very unique and interesting ... Goodluck!
The book is amazing and captivating! It has an amazing plot. The synopsis is well-described as well. Good job, author! Hope to see more of the good work!
For someone who starts as fresh the story development is amazing 😉 not fo mention the characters design and and world background if is on another level. Keep it up 🔥🔥
Good day! This is really interesting, I like how you wonderfully describe the event and it made us think of what happened. I saw some mistakes which I advise you to proofread everything. Good job author, have a nice day!
I really like it! It's interesting, and i can't wait to see what the author comes up with - it seems very creative, and i have a feeling that there will a lot more to come in the future! The beginning was a bit hard to follow, but despite that, i enjoyed reading it. Good luck!
This was so much fun to read! I love how your characters have so much personality, and how they interact with each other blends so well! I didn't find any mistakes grammar wise, but I might have been so enthralled into the story to really notice. The beginning was a bit choppy for me, but once you get through that, it's smooth sailing! Keep going strong young skywalker!!! I'll be rooting for you!
It's a fun read especially when it involves history and relics and other stuff that the novel can offer! It reminds me of "Tomb raider king" but more! I liket his novel, and I hope this story blooms! The only thing that I'd like to point out are "show" and "Tell" technique. There are lot of sentence that you used telling instead of showing. Although telling is a powerful technique, showing brings more emotions to us, readers! Kudos for the author!
The dial is put to a 100 and doesn't go down for a moment! Lots of action, lots of things going on. The world lore is interesting and not too difficult to grasp. The only downside is that with so many things happening the actual event taking place get muddled in all the witty back anf forths between the character. A good story! Keep going!