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Nuh_Uhh

Overall, this is fine, you overuse the word โ€œasโ€ and what you say is scrambled, an unorganised writing but other then that you have potential as a writer

2mth
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Blaze_The_amazing

Please continue with this as the other guy put this is the best thing because there isnโ€™t anything else like this and itโ€™s the best

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Meindert_De_mey

Please Please Please make ch 25 ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ™

1yr
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DURJOY_Barua

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Cabelinho

Amazing, I really liked the plot and the story is very interesting, the two characters personality is great and the protagonist is amazing, and his quest for power is the best part, the harem only has one And I liked her so far I really hope the development of two female characters or heroines

3yr
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_Cooldude_

Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update

3yr
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_Cooldude_

Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update

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SethKang

Hey author san when is the next chapter coming it been long time come on man u are torturing me without releasing the next chapter and please don't think about dropping or put hiatus please hurry up and release the chapters this time plz update chapters daily as it boring to wait for such treasure as this novel

3yr
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DaoistMgP6pU

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3yr
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asylbek_zholdas

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3yr
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CodezL

Es bastante bueno, el รบnico problema es la velocidad de las actualizaciones, lo รบnico lamentable es que no vamos a poder ver a ban y escanor ya que ellos nacen 3mil aรฑos despuรฉs.

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3yr
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Monarch_Lord

the update is kinda slow im sad

3yr
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akasuna123

story is too slow for me....... ..... .... .... ...... ... .... .... ..... ..... ..... ..... ... ..... ..... .... ..... .... .... ...... .....

3yr
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Amarilys

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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idontknowbitch21

very good development

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_Azrael_

The story is one of the best Iโ€™ve read and enjoyed completely. There is always room to improve but your doing great with this story. The only thing that really needs an upgrade is Update stability.

3yr
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Amarilys

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ManEater

More more more more more more more ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿฅฒ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿค—๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿคญโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคค๐Ÿค•๐Ÿ˜ช๐Ÿค•๐Ÿคง๐Ÿคข๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜ง๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ง๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ˜ฝ๐Ÿ™‰๐Ÿ˜ฝ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ™€๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ˜ผ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’Œ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿคค๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคญ๐ŸคชMore more more more more more more ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿฅฒ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿค—๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿคญโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคค๐Ÿค•๐Ÿ˜ช๐Ÿค•๐Ÿคง๐Ÿคข๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜ง๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ง๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ˜ฝ๐Ÿ™‰๐Ÿ˜ฝ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ™€๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ˜ผ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’Œ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿคค๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคช

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fetishman

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Rafael_Moura

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grigrait

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Amarilys

โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โ—‹โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™

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Excavelier

Pretty nice I like how you center the beginning part of the story towards Meliodas training this story is pretty rare since there are a small amount of seven Deadly sins Fanfic that are actually good.

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LuciferDFallN1

I give you 5 star in everything not because I read or anything like that... NO! because it's a Meliodas fic! .

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ThatsClassified

pretty solid, there's room for improvement but its pretty nice, there may be a little plot holes but even the original had plot holes so its not that big of a deal, the only thing Im looking to forward to him you do the 3000 year timeskip and how itl include the wives besides Elizabeth

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ThouShaltNotDie

Good โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ. โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ. โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ. โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ. โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ. โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ.

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HaremPLS

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Silver1Savant

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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grigrait

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Nuh_Uhh

Overall, this is fine, you overuse the word โ€œasโ€ and what you say is scrambled, an unorganised writing but other then that you have potential as a writer

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Blaze_The_amazing

Please continue with this as the other guy put this is the best thing because there isnโ€™t anything else like this and itโ€™s the best

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Meindert_De_mey

Please Please Please make ch 25 ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ™

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DURJOY_Barua

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Cabelinho

Amazing, I really liked the plot and the story is very interesting, the two characters personality is great and the protagonist is amazing, and his quest for power is the best part, the harem only has one And I liked her so far I really hope the development of two female characters or heroines

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_Cooldude_

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_Cooldude_

Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update

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SethKang

Hey author san when is the next chapter coming it been long time come on man u are torturing me without releasing the next chapter and please don't think about dropping or put hiatus please hurry up and release the chapters this time plz update chapters daily as it boring to wait for such treasure as this novel

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DaoistMgP6pU

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asylbek_zholdas

rus ัั‚ะพั‚ ั€ะพะผะฐะฝ ะดะพะฒะพะปัŒะฝะพ ั…ะพั€ะพัˆ. ะฟะตั€ัะพะฝะฐะถะธ ะธ ััŽะถะตั‚ ะพั‚ะปะธั‡ะฝั‹ะน.ะฝะพ ะพะฑะฝะพะฒะปะตะฝะธั ะพั‡ะตะฝัŒ ั€ะตะดะบะธ ---------------------------------------------------------------------

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CodezL

Es bastante bueno, el รบnico problema es la velocidad de las actualizaciones, lo รบnico lamentable es que no vamos a poder ver a ban y escanor ya que ellos nacen 3mil aรฑos despuรฉs.

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Daoist571053

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Monarch_Lord

the update is kinda slow im sad

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akasuna123

story is too slow for me....... ..... .... .... ...... ... .... .... ..... ..... ..... ..... ... ..... ..... .... ..... .... .... ...... .....

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Amarilys

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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idontknowbitch21

very good development

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_Azrael_

The story is one of the best Iโ€™ve read and enjoyed completely. There is always room to improve but your doing great with this story. The only thing that really needs an upgrade is Update stability.

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Amarilys

โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ—โ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽ โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ– โ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽโ–ช๏ธŽ

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ManEater

More more more more more more more ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿฅฒ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿค—๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿคญโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคค๐Ÿค•๐Ÿ˜ช๐Ÿค•๐Ÿคง๐Ÿคข๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜ง๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ง๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ˜ฝ๐Ÿ™‰๐Ÿ˜ฝ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ™€๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ˜ผ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’Œ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿคค๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคญ๐ŸคชMore more more more more more more ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿฅฒ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿค—๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿคญโ˜บ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคค๐Ÿค•๐Ÿ˜ช๐Ÿค•๐Ÿคง๐Ÿคข๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜ง๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ง๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ˜ฝ๐Ÿ™‰๐Ÿ˜ฝ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ™€๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ˜ผ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’Œ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿคค๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคช

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fetishman

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Rafael_Moura

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grigrait

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Amarilys

โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โ—‹โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™โŠ™

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Excavelier

Pretty nice I like how you center the beginning part of the story towards Meliodas training this story is pretty rare since there are a small amount of seven Deadly sins Fanfic that are actually good.

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LuciferDFallN1

I give you 5 star in everything not because I read or anything like that... NO! because it's a Meliodas fic! .

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ThatsClassified

pretty solid, there's room for improvement but its pretty nice, there may be a little plot holes but even the original had plot holes so its not that big of a deal, the only thing Im looking to forward to him you do the 3000 year timeskip and how itl include the wives besides Elizabeth

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ThouShaltNotDie

Good โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ. โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ. โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ. โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ. โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ. โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ.

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HaremPLS

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Silver1Savant

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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grigrait

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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