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It could be better, some of the original text is missing. It makes the story jump around in places that don't make sense. For instance one of the most blatant is when the entire scene where Harry is taught to cast with negative intent by Rosier and Calypso is just cut out. Then you have a scene mentioning it. If you have read the original you can notice several instances of it.
As much as I have enjoyed reading this fic it kinda sucks that it hasn't updated for over a year, overall a 10/10 fic if you can deal with it being dropped. amazing writing had me hooked since chap 1
The idea is great, but the MC is an original character in the Harry Potter world, not reincarnated. It means that MC is a child despite his intelligence and maturity in some aspects. You will see the behavior of a child, some foolishness, irresponsibility, recklessness, and childish feelings such as searching for love and trust in people and not questioning their suspicious behavior. If you can bear it, it's a great story
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This has got to be one of my favorite Harry Potter books of all time and I really want the author to keep updating it. The world background and the characters are amazing, spot on in my mind for the most part.
I love this story itβs really amazing. The characters feel great and especially Harryβs development is so good I want to keep reading on and on to know if heβll become the next dark lord. But has the writer dropped this? Idk there hasnβt been an update in 6 months so Iβm not sure.
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Great fanfic. The characters are well developed and itβs an interesting change of pace from the usual Dark Harry Potter works Please come back
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Really like the characterization of everyone in this fic. I'm really tired of fanfictions that paint James & Lily Potter in a bad light. They're just weren't the type of parents that would favor a twin more than the other. Dumbledore being a grandfather figure and not being all omnipotent is the best. Though tbh I can't really understand OCs such as Calypso & Romulus. Like what was their end goal here? What's their deal? Why is their dynamic like that? I feel like their character as a whole is not portrayed well like the rest. There are only snippets of them here and there. Hoping that we will see more of them as the story progress <3 Also hoping that you'll update soon
I believe that the story has an amazing plot and the whole description of his time at durmstrang(spelling?) is amazing and this is one of my favorite hp fanfictions ever
Good so far as you continued the story yourself chaps got a short- Will harry actually become a dark lord as he is very reluctant to go deeper into dark magic and creating his own dark spells. Story is good harry is not too op that noone can match him there are many people stronger than him.
This garbage was very interesting but... This story has no impact on cannon. Mc is side character that does nothing important. I spend 140 chapter learning about theory of magic expecting mc to come back to hogwards and compete in triwizard tournament. For some reason he did not make it in time (author bull.). Also Nathan replaced Harry as a boy who lived but lives his life in hogwards as og Harry did. What is the point? Why not just name your Mc Nathan? Because this is a story about a brother of og Harry.
dam this novel is just too good i'm 33 chap and loved every chap i did read. this novel just let you see wizarding world diff way. only think i dont like is that mc name is harry. i hope more ppl will find this
Oh my god this story is so underrated I mean it has it all Character development, great world building, amazing pacing, and most of all amazing combat scenes I freaking love it
This Book is a hidden gem, Itβs truly astounding. The only complaint I had was the speed when I first started reading but I got use to it, Iβm used to trashy quick dark Harry Potter fanfictions but this truly manages to put everything together in a beautifully paced way. Another thing is, I havent seen many fanfictions where Harry tried his best and fails at something he honestly put his mind to but the author seems to stray away from the cliquish writing and it makes the story even more enjoyable.
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well this will be my first review. I'm going to go very general to not provide spoilers. but first of all I read the original that the author stopped updating and I'm so glad you continued it. and honestly the quality that of your chapters are either a little bit better than the original authors or quite a bit better. I really like the direction you're taking this it's a very different premise than most you're not following the common tropes. you update very stably also. when you get the power stones. so in truth I'm just waiting for my power stones to replenish so I can give you more cuz I'm always at the edge of my seat in this book wondering what's happening next.
Itβs good Written in third person Character and story development speed: medium Boring parts or skipped but there is building How the story is going to develop is not predictable, so fun to read and enjoy the journey
after reading this book- no, masterpiece, I have to say the one single problem I have with this book is the fact that it doesn't get enough attention. like unlike most other novels this book doesn't really contain cringe and it's characters go through growth as well as plenty of in depth world building, if I'd have to rate this book with the hundreds Ive read(cause I have no life lol) it would easily be in top ten. I cannot wait for more updates, but auther please don't over work yourself, and remember don't listen to idiots. aight peace out.
Don't mind me I'm just an amazing (and less than slightly shameless) writer who is continuing this great story and giving it 5 starts :)
It could be better, some of the original text is missing. It makes the story jump around in places that don't make sense. For instance one of the most blatant is when the entire scene where Harry is taught to cast with negative intent by Rosier and Calypso is just cut out. Then you have a scene mentioning it. If you have read the original you can notice several instances of it.
As much as I have enjoyed reading this fic it kinda sucks that it hasn't updated for over a year, overall a 10/10 fic if you can deal with it being dropped. amazing writing had me hooked since chap 1
The idea is great, but the MC is an original character in the Harry Potter world, not reincarnated. It means that MC is a child despite his intelligence and maturity in some aspects. You will see the behavior of a child, some foolishness, irresponsibility, recklessness, and childish feelings such as searching for love and trust in people and not questioning their suspicious behavior. If you can bear it, it's a great story
Reveal Spoiler author-sama please update please come back please please please please I need more updates please come back I need to know how its gonna go[img=update] please
Hey Are you dead π????? Will you update or not Please update π It's been a year since you write this story Kindly update ππππππππππππππΒ―\_(γ)_/Β― (βββ‘ββ)οΎ(β’Μα΄β’Μ)Ω(αα£α)ΥβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ‘π£ππ₯π₯πͺ π‘ππππ€π
Reveal Spoiler This has got to be one of my favorite Harry Potter books of all time and I really want the author to keep updating it. The world background and the characters are amazing, spot on in my mind for the most part.
I love this story itβs really amazing. The characters feel great and especially Harryβs development is so good I want to keep reading on and on to know if heβll become the next dark lord. But has the writer dropped this? Idk there hasnβt been an update in 6 months so Iβm not sure.
Please come back Please come backPlease come backPlease come back Please come back Please come backPlease come backPlease come backPlease come back Please come backPlease come backPlease come back
Great fanfic. The characters are well developed and itβs an interesting change of pace from the usual Dark Harry Potter works Please come back
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Really like the characterization of everyone in this fic. I'm really tired of fanfictions that paint James & Lily Potter in a bad light. They're just weren't the type of parents that would favor a twin more than the other. Dumbledore being a grandfather figure and not being all omnipotent is the best. Though tbh I can't really understand OCs such as Calypso & Romulus. Like what was their end goal here? What's their deal? Why is their dynamic like that? I feel like their character as a whole is not portrayed well like the rest. There are only snippets of them here and there. Hoping that we will see more of them as the story progress <3 Also hoping that you'll update soon
I believe that the story has an amazing plot and the whole description of his time at durmstrang(spelling?) is amazing and this is one of my favorite hp fanfictions ever
Good so far as you continued the story yourself chaps got a short- Will harry actually become a dark lord as he is very reluctant to go deeper into dark magic and creating his own dark spells. Story is good harry is not too op that noone can match him there are many people stronger than him.
This garbage was very interesting but... This story has no impact on cannon. Mc is side character that does nothing important. I spend 140 chapter learning about theory of magic expecting mc to come back to hogwards and compete in triwizard tournament. For some reason he did not make it in time (author bull.). Also Nathan replaced Harry as a boy who lived but lives his life in hogwards as og Harry did. What is the point? Why not just name your Mc Nathan? Because this is a story about a brother of og Harry.
dam this novel is just too good i'm 33 chap and loved every chap i did read. this novel just let you see wizarding world diff way. only think i dont like is that mc name is harry. i hope more ppl will find this
Oh my god this story is so underrated I mean it has it all Character development, great world building, amazing pacing, and most of all amazing combat scenes I freaking love it
This Book is a hidden gem, Itβs truly astounding. The only complaint I had was the speed when I first started reading but I got use to it, Iβm used to trashy quick dark Harry Potter fanfictions but this truly manages to put everything together in a beautifully paced way. Another thing is, I havent seen many fanfictions where Harry tried his best and fails at something he honestly put his mind to but the author seems to stray away from the cliquish writing and it makes the story even more enjoyable.
Its good but i just dont understand why you didnt make the brother the mc and keep harry the same Word count Word count Word count word count
Exp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp expExp exp exp exp
well this will be my first review. I'm going to go very general to not provide spoilers. but first of all I read the original that the author stopped updating and I'm so glad you continued it. and honestly the quality that of your chapters are either a little bit better than the original authors or quite a bit better. I really like the direction you're taking this it's a very different premise than most you're not following the common tropes. you update very stably also. when you get the power stones. so in truth I'm just waiting for my power stones to replenish so I can give you more cuz I'm always at the edge of my seat in this book wondering what's happening next.
Itβs good Written in third person Character and story development speed: medium Boring parts or skipped but there is building How the story is going to develop is not predictable, so fun to read and enjoy the journey
after reading this book- no, masterpiece, I have to say the one single problem I have with this book is the fact that it doesn't get enough attention. like unlike most other novels this book doesn't really contain cringe and it's characters go through growth as well as plenty of in depth world building, if I'd have to rate this book with the hundreds Ive read(cause I have no life lol) it would easily be in top ten. I cannot wait for more updates, but auther please don't over work yourself, and remember don't listen to idiots. aight peace out.
Don't mind me I'm just an amazing (and less than slightly shameless) writer who is continuing this great story and giving it 5 starts :)