Chapter 35: This story is now being rewritten

Well this story won the poll so I'm actively rewriting it. First Chapter is nearly at 1,400 words. Ideally I want it to have a minimum of 2,500 to 3,000 before I cap it and declare it finished. But that shouldn't be too far away. I'm considering creating a new story to house the rewrite. Doesn't seem fair to scarp this slot and replace it with something new, but it's only an eyesore for me so we'll see.