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I love an OP Woman MC in One Piece... But wishes sucks .... nothing makes Over Powerd OP. Soul is over 1 million years old and she wishes for that ... give her another 100 million years.... not even telekinetic ability.... devil fruit space or water ... mythical zoan nephillim .... sajan blod line ... old sharingan or above .... longlivity like elf ...
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I overall enjoy this with its mix of slice of life and action put together. I love how its humorous yet serious at the same time in the fight scenes which is a breath of fresh air from all the other serious and ruthless mcs we have.
The idea of this fanfic is nice and the grammar is already good, but the main problem I have regarding this fanfic is that the Mc is too afraid of the butterfly effect. Like, we get it, knowing the future will come in handy, but the way MC keeps tryibg to avoid changing the plot makes the story seem uninteresting. After all, why read a fanfic when nothing in the plot will change? Even if the author is planning to change the plot in the future, by that time i’m pretty sure many readers would already be tired of The story, me included.
Really enjoying the story’s progression and how it doesn’t change the one piece timeline dramatically. I also like how the main character doesn’t start of op but trains to get stronger.
Great story just like all yours works. Keep up with the great work. peace, may the physics be with you. djdjdjdndndndmdmdmdmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsms
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Was looking For more novels with Op female charictors withoit romance and found this one loved the start of it and also love The characters personality.......Wish you post more
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not really 5☆, but I will give 5☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - to tell you the truth, I would rate it 3.7☆. the start of the story is a bit weird. how was she able to escape that easy. Well I hope you can improve the story more. ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ - Physical design is 5☆. I hope you can give us more information regarding her abilities. - a bit disappointed about veldora's sword, the fact that you didn't name it veldora is a bit disappointing. also nurffing it to the point it's just feels like just top10 sword in onepiece. (I didn't mind the nurffing it but isn't it a bit to much?)(I'm not going to give the details how strong veldora's should be, because you have already read the wn.) ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
Reveal Spoiler Great story just like all the other works.........................................................,...........................................May the Physics be with you
It's Interesting and pretty cool writing and if you're looking for a good read i recommend you try this fanfic[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I love an OP Woman MC in One Piece... But wishes sucks .... nothing makes Over Powerd OP. Soul is over 1 million years old and she wishes for that ... give her another 100 million years.... not even telekinetic ability.... devil fruit space or water ... mythical zoan nephillim .... sajan blod line ... old sharingan or above .... longlivity like elf ...
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I overall enjoy this with its mix of slice of life and action put together. I love how its humorous yet serious at the same time in the fight scenes which is a breath of fresh air from all the other serious and ruthless mcs we have.
The idea of this fanfic is nice and the grammar is already good, but the main problem I have regarding this fanfic is that the Mc is too afraid of the butterfly effect. Like, we get it, knowing the future will come in handy, but the way MC keeps tryibg to avoid changing the plot makes the story seem uninteresting. After all, why read a fanfic when nothing in the plot will change? Even if the author is planning to change the plot in the future, by that time i’m pretty sure many readers would already be tired of The story, me included.
Really enjoying the story’s progression and how it doesn’t change the one piece timeline dramatically. I also like how the main character doesn’t start of op but trains to get stronger.
Great story just like all yours works. Keep up with the great work. peace, may the physics be with you. djdjdjdndndndmdmdmdmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsms
Yuri+protagonist op=perfect.................................................................................................................................................................................... ........................................................................
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Was looking For more novels with Op female charictors withoit romance and found this one loved the start of it and also love The characters personality.......Wish you post more
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not really 5☆, but I will give 5☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - to tell you the truth, I would rate it 3.7☆. the start of the story is a bit weird. how was she able to escape that easy. Well I hope you can improve the story more. ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ - Physical design is 5☆. I hope you can give us more information regarding her abilities. - a bit disappointed about veldora's sword, the fact that you didn't name it veldora is a bit disappointing. also nurffing it to the point it's just feels like just top10 sword in onepiece. (I didn't mind the nurffing it but isn't it a bit to much?)(I'm not going to give the details how strong veldora's should be, because you have already read the wn.) ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
Reveal Spoiler Great story just like all the other works.........................................................,...........................................May the Physics be with you
It's Interesting and pretty cool writing and if you're looking for a good read i recommend you try this fanfic[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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