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The progress of the story increases my interest a great deal. The more I read, the more I get immersed in the life of Mason. His personality is the one I really like. Serious and studious! I really like how each character adds a unique touch to the storyline. I started favoring the characters, but then I remembered the synopsis.... Who will betray Mason? Whoever does, I'll hate them to the core!! I like how the story is progressing. And I'm in for this book! Good work Author !
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Nice story building with a posh vibe and background to it. I have loved your book so far and I expect you to keep on writing. Even though the update stability is very low.. I wouldn't decrease the stars because I know how tough it is to write a novel. Thank you author for this amazing work and I hope you keep on rocking...
Hi, author-san! I love Mason Lard as a character. His character is totally the character I fall for in movies, anime, and manga, and I honestly think a lot of other readers will fall for him too. thank you for adding Mason into the characters I really like! that being said, in simpler terms, I love your book a lot! continue writing!
I admire the story plot so much. The rich vibes and all. Great idea and outstanding method of writing especially the writer's approach in presenting the characters Good work.
The story has been building up slowly and gradually but it's a good pace. I like the characters and their approach to life it felt relatable for me. The only downside I found was grammar errors which on a second editing could easily be eradicated.
The author has done a great work...the storyline is awesome and I loved the characters both mason and her sister. With no grammatical mistakes, book has a smooth narrations making readers to read smoothly. Great Work Author and keep up the good work. Highly recommended!
The story is new, so it's still shaping up. But so far I think the character development and story build up is good, It has all the makings to be a good novel.
Hi Guys! I'm the Author, so I'm shamelessly giving myself a five star review. However, it's my first novel and I would really appreciate your feedback in reveiws and comments to know how I am doing. I'm open to suggestions, corrections and advice, so please check out the book and let me know what you think. Thanks
There was truth in your synopsis author. As I read your book, it just had me so engrossed. The ability of the author to hold the readers attention is an excellent skill. Keep writing author. This is a superb work.
The progress of the story increases my interest a great deal. The more I read, the more I get immersed in the life of Mason. His personality is the one I really like. Serious and studious! I really like how each character adds a unique touch to the storyline. I started favoring the characters, but then I remembered the synopsis.... Who will betray Mason? Whoever does, I'll hate them to the core!! I like how the story is progressing. And I'm in for this book! Good work Author !
Reveal Spoiler Nice story building with a posh vibe and background to it. I have loved your book so far and I expect you to keep on writing. Even though the update stability is very low.. I wouldn't decrease the stars because I know how tough it is to write a novel. Thank you author for this amazing work and I hope you keep on rocking...
Hi, author-san! I love Mason Lard as a character. His character is totally the character I fall for in movies, anime, and manga, and I honestly think a lot of other readers will fall for him too. thank you for adding Mason into the characters I really like! that being said, in simpler terms, I love your book a lot! continue writing!
I admire the story plot so much. The rich vibes and all. Great idea and outstanding method of writing especially the writer's approach in presenting the characters Good work.
The story has been building up slowly and gradually but it's a good pace. I like the characters and their approach to life it felt relatable for me. The only downside I found was grammar errors which on a second editing could easily be eradicated.
The author has done a great work...the storyline is awesome and I loved the characters both mason and her sister. With no grammatical mistakes, book has a smooth narrations making readers to read smoothly. Great Work Author and keep up the good work. Highly recommended!
The story is new, so it's still shaping up. But so far I think the character development and story build up is good, It has all the makings to be a good novel.
Hi Guys! I'm the Author, so I'm shamelessly giving myself a five star review. However, it's my first novel and I would really appreciate your feedback in reveiws and comments to know how I am doing. I'm open to suggestions, corrections and advice, so please check out the book and let me know what you think. Thanks
There was truth in your synopsis author. As I read your book, it just had me so engrossed. The ability of the author to hold the readers attention is an excellent skill. Keep writing author. This is a superb work.