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I'm intrigued by the system, but the MC is just dumb... I'm conflicted, on one hand, I want to know how it goes, on the other, I'm glad I don't have to read the stupidity of the ML... and that stupid girl just stands on my nerves... I don't know. I started reading it, knowing that there would be only 40 ch and after reading some reviews, kinda knowing what to expect, but still...
I like the concept..............................................................................................................................
This is the kind of novel that will delete your brain cells, mc is the most nonsensical mc i have ever read, he is like the fusion of a jp mc with a beta chinese mc, he will do anything for women, he will show everyone his wealth and will tell everyone his secrets it does not make any sense
Interesting story line. Pretty good writing, Grammer and spelling. Want to read more of it, could have done better with a few things like using the system a tiny bit more. After Adam returns from the Zerg planet, the system isn't even used once up to chapter 40 latest chapter. There is also barely any details of cultivating or practising techniques. World building needs attention as well but overall I like it and will continue reading.
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wonderful novel should be selected for publishing it now and please don't put it in taking a break. because if it is gotten put into taking a break then it have to take break for the rest of his life.
I need a fast pass never read the book tho hope its good and you enjoy it Still need to write to get 150 letter count hope you all are have a nice day
I started reading this thinking that it had a potential of a fine treasure, but what I found was fine trash.................................
Haiz Why are there a lot of novel like this recently. I hope webnovel has something like a quality control. Don't just upload everything. Pick something good.
Webnovel is just a sad excuse for a company. That also extends to China Literature and their owner, Tencent. Tencent is too focused on copying from the world to realize it should work on improving its management. China is truly showing the world its finest idiots!
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his an idiot🙄................................................................ .............................................................
Read a few chapters and then removed from library.... MC is way too naive, or maybe the author thinks that people can interact in such a situation like that. way too flashy in the beginning
Good idea and premise, but very bad execution. I even wonder whether MC sacrificed his brains to obtain this system because his dialogue is so childish, behaviour unfit for the story. Action is too rushed. One chapter he worries about being cannon fodder the next chapter he's already throwing S scrolls while a decent family can only have enough resources for 1 B scroll maybe. Then the next chapter he brags to a girl like a cuckold, and another chapter in she invites him to her family as a guest. Then they all go ham and get all lively and childish in what's supposed to be a very dangerous threatening zone. It's one f*** big mess. Do yourself a favor and skip this novel
the only advantage is it has some good writing quality which makes it easy to read but story wise it just one of the millions among others which has a hero complex mc who wants to show off before every one, basically put a marker saying he got some high quality resources in a desolate planet
The story is interesting... but the writing is bad. There is no weight behind what happens. Feed a guy or rescue a person and bam instant hero status. Literally a surface level story lacking in even the slightest depth. I'm not even sure if this is good enough for mindless reading. As always there is the potential that the writing quality improves over time but I honestly think it needs a rewrite from the author to reach the potential that is there even if difficult to see.
Not a fan personally ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
The MC is so stupid. He just mentions his legacy to everyone just hoping they will keep a secret Also he is just an idiot who does anything for females . Stupid and idiotic premise where MC acts without any plans or smartness
Very good and interesting story. It is fun and have excellent construction structure. It also have good background and devolopment. Hope it is picked
System is awesome System is awesome System is awesome System is awesome System is awesome System is awesome System is awesome System is awesome
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
I'm not very happy with the MC, but the story kind of intrigues me, so I just finished the 40 chapters. I don't even know if this novel is going to continue or not, we'll see
I'm intrigued by the system, but the MC is just dumb... I'm conflicted, on one hand, I want to know how it goes, on the other, I'm glad I don't have to read the stupidity of the ML... and that stupid girl just stands on my nerves... I don't know. I started reading it, knowing that there would be only 40 ch and after reading some reviews, kinda knowing what to expect, but still...
I like the concept..............................................................................................................................
This is the kind of novel that will delete your brain cells, mc is the most nonsensical mc i have ever read, he is like the fusion of a jp mc with a beta chinese mc, he will do anything for women, he will show everyone his wealth and will tell everyone his secrets it does not make any sense
Interesting story line. Pretty good writing, Grammer and spelling. Want to read more of it, could have done better with a few things like using the system a tiny bit more. After Adam returns from the Zerg planet, the system isn't even used once up to chapter 40 latest chapter. There is also barely any details of cultivating or practising techniques. World building needs attention as well but overall I like it and will continue reading.
Reveal Spoiler Anyone know the mtl tittle? ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I need the raw... Someone have it? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
wonderful novel should be selected for publishing it now and please don't put it in taking a break. because if it is gotten put into taking a break then it have to take break for the rest of his life.
I need a fast pass never read the book tho hope its good and you enjoy it Still need to write to get 150 letter count hope you all are have a nice day
I started reading this thinking that it had a potential of a fine treasure, but what I found was fine trash.................................
Haiz Why are there a lot of novel like this recently. I hope webnovel has something like a quality control. Don't just upload everything. Pick something good.
Webnovel is just a sad excuse for a company. That also extends to China Literature and their owner, Tencent. Tencent is too focused on copying from the world to realize it should work on improving its management. China is truly showing the world its finest idiots!
QjjsjdjsjskxjcjdjdjQjjsjdjsjskxjcjdjdjQjjsjdjsjskxjcjdjdjQjjsjdjsjskxjcjdjdjQjjsjdjsjskxjcjdjdjQjjsjdjsjskxjcjdjdjQjjsjdjsjskxjcjdjdjQjjsjdjsjskxjcjdjdjQjjsjdjsjskxjcjdjdj
his an idiot🙄................................................................ .............................................................
Read a few chapters and then removed from library.... MC is way too naive, or maybe the author thinks that people can interact in such a situation like that. way too flashy in the beginning
Good idea and premise, but very bad execution. I even wonder whether MC sacrificed his brains to obtain this system because his dialogue is so childish, behaviour unfit for the story. Action is too rushed. One chapter he worries about being cannon fodder the next chapter he's already throwing S scrolls while a decent family can only have enough resources for 1 B scroll maybe. Then the next chapter he brags to a girl like a cuckold, and another chapter in she invites him to her family as a guest. Then they all go ham and get all lively and childish in what's supposed to be a very dangerous threatening zone. It's one f*** big mess. Do yourself a favor and skip this novel
the only advantage is it has some good writing quality which makes it easy to read but story wise it just one of the millions among others which has a hero complex mc who wants to show off before every one, basically put a marker saying he got some high quality resources in a desolate planet
The story is interesting... but the writing is bad. There is no weight behind what happens. Feed a guy or rescue a person and bam instant hero status. Literally a surface level story lacking in even the slightest depth. I'm not even sure if this is good enough for mindless reading. As always there is the potential that the writing quality improves over time but I honestly think it needs a rewrite from the author to reach the potential that is there even if difficult to see.
Not a fan personally ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
The MC is so stupid. He just mentions his legacy to everyone just hoping they will keep a secret Also he is just an idiot who does anything for females . Stupid and idiotic premise where MC acts without any plans or smartness
Very good and interesting story. It is fun and have excellent construction structure. It also have good background and devolopment. Hope it is picked
System is awesome System is awesome System is awesome System is awesome System is awesome System is awesome System is awesome System is awesome
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
I'm not very happy with the MC, but the story kind of intrigues me, so I just finished the 40 chapters. I don't even know if this novel is going to continue or not, we'll see