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this is the best Naruto fan fic I have ever read, I hope you keep up good health, and I hope your financial problems go away. Please stay safe. and please make more chapters. Thank you for your amazing work.
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If not for the updating stability, i would not hesitate to rate this with a perfect 5 βοΈ One of the best naruto fanfics A new perspective with an amazing blend of characters to this specific plotline Heartwarming and addictive All the best for the author Keep up the good work and please update chapters regularly DONT DROP THIS GEM!
I really liked the way the system was added, and the diatheses with his parents were so warm and pleasant, the things most of us wanted to see in anime.
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One of the best Naruto ff of all time really love it and can't wait for more chapters have a lot of words with almost no mistakes very clean and good story the only problem is update times takes alot from chapter to the next
Very good Naruto fan fiction. Even though there are only 10 chapters, it is already at least in the top 3 of the ones I have read. Cute relationships between characters, especially between parents and MC. Smooth development of strength and mind. Π Π΄Π°, ΠΏΡΠΈΠ²Π΅Ρ, ΡΠ΄ΠΈΠ²ΠΈΠ»ΡΡ, ΠΊΠΎΠ³Π΄Π° ΡΠ·Π½Π°Π», ΡΡΠΎ ΡΡ ΡΡΡΡΠΊΠΈΠΉ. Π£Π΄Π°ΡΠΈ Π² Π½Π°ΠΏΠΈΡΠ°Π½ΠΈΠΈ, Π½Π°Π΄Π΅ΡΡΡ, ΡΡΠΎ Π²ΡΠΏΡΡΠΊ Π³Π»Π°Π² Π±ΡΠ΄Π΅Ρ ΡΠ°ΡΠ΅).
This is my first go at this and I really like it. Naruto has taken a turn for the better and I look forward to reading more. Please dont let up on the chapters and please continue releasing them till the end of the story. I will look forward to it every time.
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the only problem with this book is update stabilty..the story is amazing and so was char development.. writing quality is good as well..waiting to read more from u author..
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I started reading it at dawn and I didn't sleep until I finished it, it has one of the most interesting stories that I have read so far of naruto fanfic (personal opinion only), they are almost always reincarnations or something similar and I like that it is naruto but since another point if his parents had given him something
Interesting concept, I love it! this fanfic had a bright future if it has done with the right execution. the only problem I had is the stability of the update, but the fanfic itself is definitely worth reading. still waiting for the next chapter.[img=recommend]
Probably one of the few stories about Naruto that has something different from most clichΓ©d fanfiction. Thanks for your creativity)) ΠΠ°Π²Π΅ΡΠ½ΠΎΠ΅ ΠΎΠ΄ΠΈΠ½ ΠΈΠ· Π½Π΅ΠΌΠ½ΠΎΠ³ΠΈΡ ΠΈΡΡΠΎΡΠΈΠΉ ΠΎΠ± ΠΠ°ΡΡΡΠΎ, Π² ΠΊΠΎΡΠΎΡΡΡ Π΅ΡΡΡ, ΡΡΠΎ-ΡΠΎ ΠΎΡΠ»ΠΈΡΠΈΡΠ΅Π»ΡΠ½ΠΎΠ΅ ΠΎΡ Π±ΠΎΠ»ΡΡΠΈΠ½ΡΡΠ²Π° ΠΊΠ»ΠΈΡΠΈΡΠΎΠ²Π°Π½Π½ΡΡ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊΠΎΠ². Π‘ΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π·Π° Π²Π°ΡΠ΅ ΡΠ²ΠΎΡΡΠ΅ΡΡΠ²ΠΎ))
I love that it isn't your typical system, and that you aren't ruining it with needless humor. The premise of the story is, so far, very interesting. Please don't fall into the trap of bad comedy like so many other authors.
very good. ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ
I liked the concept, I hope more chapters,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,mory,more,more,because it needs so many characters
only problem is updates other than that cool story,nice representation of characters not too much diffrence from originals ,nice idea, writing style is good so far and story is developing in slow but stable pace with no problem at all. so please try to release at least one chapter a week
this is the best Naruto fan fic I have ever read, I hope you keep up good health, and I hope your financial problems go away. Please stay safe. and please make more chapters. Thank you for your amazing work.
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If not for the updating stability, i would not hesitate to rate this with a perfect 5 βοΈ One of the best naruto fanfics A new perspective with an amazing blend of characters to this specific plotline Heartwarming and addictive All the best for the author Keep up the good work and please update chapters regularly DONT DROP THIS GEM!
I really liked the way the system was added, and the diatheses with his parents were so warm and pleasant, the things most of us wanted to see in anime.
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One of the best Naruto ff of all time really love it and can't wait for more chapters have a lot of words with almost no mistakes very clean and good story the only problem is update times takes alot from chapter to the next
Very good Naruto fan fiction. Even though there are only 10 chapters, it is already at least in the top 3 of the ones I have read. Cute relationships between characters, especially between parents and MC. Smooth development of strength and mind. Π Π΄Π°, ΠΏΡΠΈΠ²Π΅Ρ, ΡΠ΄ΠΈΠ²ΠΈΠ»ΡΡ, ΠΊΠΎΠ³Π΄Π° ΡΠ·Π½Π°Π», ΡΡΠΎ ΡΡ ΡΡΡΡΠΊΠΈΠΉ. Π£Π΄Π°ΡΠΈ Π² Π½Π°ΠΏΠΈΡΠ°Π½ΠΈΠΈ, Π½Π°Π΄Π΅ΡΡΡ, ΡΡΠΎ Π²ΡΠΏΡΡΠΊ Π³Π»Π°Π² Π±ΡΠ΄Π΅Ρ ΡΠ°ΡΠ΅).
This is my first go at this and I really like it. Naruto has taken a turn for the better and I look forward to reading more. Please dont let up on the chapters and please continue releasing them till the end of the story. I will look forward to it every time.
This is so good![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the only problem with this book is update stabilty..the story is amazing and so was char development.. writing quality is good as well..waiting to read more from u author..
Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
I started reading it at dawn and I didn't sleep until I finished it, it has one of the most interesting stories that I have read so far of naruto fanfic (personal opinion only), they are almost always reincarnations or something similar and I like that it is naruto but since another point if his parents had given him something
Interesting concept, I love it! this fanfic had a bright future if it has done with the right execution. the only problem I had is the stability of the update, but the fanfic itself is definitely worth reading. still waiting for the next chapter.[img=recommend]
Probably one of the few stories about Naruto that has something different from most clichΓ©d fanfiction. Thanks for your creativity)) ΠΠ°Π²Π΅ΡΠ½ΠΎΠ΅ ΠΎΠ΄ΠΈΠ½ ΠΈΠ· Π½Π΅ΠΌΠ½ΠΎΠ³ΠΈΡ ΠΈΡΡΠΎΡΠΈΠΉ ΠΎΠ± ΠΠ°ΡΡΡΠΎ, Π² ΠΊΠΎΡΠΎΡΡΡ Π΅ΡΡΡ, ΡΡΠΎ-ΡΠΎ ΠΎΡΠ»ΠΈΡΠΈΡΠ΅Π»ΡΠ½ΠΎΠ΅ ΠΎΡ Π±ΠΎΠ»ΡΡΠΈΠ½ΡΡΠ²Π° ΠΊΠ»ΠΈΡΠΈΡΠΎΠ²Π°Π½Π½ΡΡ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊΠΎΠ². Π‘ΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π·Π° Π²Π°ΡΠ΅ ΡΠ²ΠΎΡΡΠ΅ΡΡΠ²ΠΎ))
I love that it isn't your typical system, and that you aren't ruining it with needless humor. The premise of the story is, so far, very interesting. Please don't fall into the trap of bad comedy like so many other authors.
very good. ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ
I liked the concept, I hope more chapters,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,mory,more,more,because it needs so many characters
only problem is updates other than that cool story,nice representation of characters not too much diffrence from originals ,nice idea, writing style is good so far and story is developing in slow but stable pace with no problem at all. so please try to release at least one chapter a week