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I read the synopsis of the book and it was enough to make me read the book. This one is definitely going in my library as this is one of the best books I've read so far on this app. The writing style of the author is captivating and the words compliment each other. So far, I'm loving this book.
I love this novel...... it's very interesting and the first novel that I actually find realistic... ♥️ Arianna, Levi and Nolan..... Keep up the good work author
I really really liked this book and it was well worth the purchase. The characters were so well designed. I have had a lot of time on my hands lately and a lot of books just dont speak to me like this on did.
I really like the way the author represented the characters in this story. The world creation is good and interesting. This is totally worthwhile to take some time to read this book. ^^
You are indeed talented. I admire your writing style The way Athena was described makes me want to cry Thumb up to the author for a job well done I love this book
A Good story, success on characters and story background, updating frequency is a success top. Thank to the author for sharing such a nice one...✋✋✋✋✋
A very interesting story! The plot is intriguing, your characters are expressive. You're doing well! I wish you endless inspiration and a lot of great ideas!
Amazing. Thats what this is. A perfect blend of happiness and sadness to keep you needing more. Not to mention the chemistry between Athena and Aiden. The way they are written and the conversations they have. All round amazing!
A very solid story overall. It's a nice change up from the horror stories and magic stories that I see so often on here. I could use something more light-hearted. I really liked the childhood aspects of the story. Keep up the good work author. I would put a bit more description into how the characters look and to describe their feelings. I think that's it. Everything else is spot on.
Interesting story to read, really like the the way the story is going on, looking for the the chemistry between Athena and Aiden spice up a bit more, way to go author.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] You described her story very well! You definitely have a unique way of writing, I can relate to her somehow, and I wish that her future character development grows! Givin' this a perfect 5!
The author's great attribute is, they provide the questions for the readers that makes them curious enough to read the story. And then they get trapped in those well distanced paras of nicely crafted words, and lost in the story. The story unfolds, enticing plot moves forward and the author promptly goes on answering all those questions plus leaving new ones to edge on the curiosity. That's good. This story is great. It's loaded with potential, do try it. (Dear author, it's just my humble personal opinion, I think you're telling so much and there is not enough show. I mean I got the emotions and all but I had trouble properly imagining it. Creating it in my head. It can be just a problem with me. I might not be understanding the point of view by which you tell the story. Sorry I don't meaning anything bad by sharing this."
I can say that the story is a roller coaster one. Though I am a fantasy/action type reader, this even made me enjoy its first person narrations. Splendid choice of narrations and choice of words. I can say your grammar was decent enough for me as I am not an English speaker. You can read Nr_Yet's godly narrations for more insights and other authors for more methaporic and poetic lines. Though the narration was proper for your genre as it was direct and precise. No need for flowery words to play with our tongues. Some may like it, some don't so let the readers say your success. Kudos for a job well done!
It's such a good story with perfect character development and world-building. The pace is smooth and so is the writing style. The author has done a great job in portraying FL's thoughts and I'm really liking her character. It's definitely a must-read!
I could explain how the story is charming, interesting, and well-paced, but you could also read it for yourself and experience first hand. If you have free time make sure to give it a read.
I really like the story! It has this elements that a novel needs, and I cannot wait to see the character development of both the girl and the boy protagonists/maincharacters. Kudos for the author! ^^
It is a very interesting story showing the growth of the main character and her relationship with those close to her, it really hits close to home in some parts and I really enjoy reading it, a very good job from the author!
I really love how this story slowly unravels. Athena is a very strong girl and I hope that as the story progresses, she will find happiness again. I couldn't stop reading it once I started. She is so relatable. Thank you for this story, CodeyVanilla <3
I like the character Athena from this novel. When I started reading it, I couldn't stop. The author describes the scenes so beautifully that you can easily imagine it happening in your mind. Highly recommended!
The name of the characters draw me in. I have no shame in admitting that I liked the female lead. She is strong and knows how to handle the bad boy Aiden. I love the perspective and the description given in the story.
This is a really good story; I loved it how the author has described the feelings and the plot...I felt it while reading it..a great book written by the author. Recommend to read!
loved the story so far. The plot is great and so is the story pace. The characters are well described too. Cant wait to read more. Keep up the great work Author [img=update][img=recommend]
When a bad boy falls in love, makes up for a very interesting read. But when that bad boy is beautifully scarred and broken, that.. is just beautiful writing! i love it!
Touching story about teenage emotions. The story plot becomes clear right from the start. The motivations of each character are clear too as well as their internal and interpersonal conflicts. Writing wise, simply great. The first person narrative is done correctly, with minimal internal monologues. I did share some humble feedback on dialogues with the author for any future drafts. Definitely an interesting story in the making. Will be following to see what happens to Athena and Aiden. Great job, author!
Not usually a fan of the romance genre but I genuinely enjoyed reading this one. The writing skills that were put in use for this one are just amazing, I'm at a loss for words. I really see great potential in this novel. I hope more people find this hidden gem. Great job author!
I applaud the author's strong character voice. Athena's voice is very distinct. I felt the dialogue in some places was a little messy, but it's can be attributed to a charming quirk of the writing style, we are in a teenager's brain after all. the story is fast-paced, but there is a lack of atmospheric descriptions at times that pull me out of the story. in conclusion, I am waiting for the next chapter anxiously!
A Great cover page and well-written synopsis. The story is different from all **** here (pardon my wording...) CEOs mommy, CEO, daddy, etc. It's lovely written. After reading a few chapters I have no doubts, that you know how to write.
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Great book! Well done author. I will keep in library and read all the updates. Please update soon and dont make me wait too long. Hehehehe. I had a great time reading this. If you're thinking of reading it, go ahead. You will not regret it at all.
This story is indeed very interesting. The more you read it, the more you want to know what happens next in the story. The way the author has portrayed the story is incredible. All the best to the author.
I read the synopsis of the book and it was enough to make me read the book. This one is definitely going in my library as this is one of the best books I've read so far on this app. The writing style of the author is captivating and the words compliment each other. So far, I'm loving this book.
I love this novel...... it's very interesting and the first novel that I actually find realistic... ♥️ Arianna, Levi and Nolan..... Keep up the good work author
I really really liked this book and it was well worth the purchase. The characters were so well designed. I have had a lot of time on my hands lately and a lot of books just dont speak to me like this on did.
I really like the way the author represented the characters in this story. The world creation is good and interesting. This is totally worthwhile to take some time to read this book. ^^
You are indeed talented. I admire your writing style The way Athena was described makes me want to cry Thumb up to the author for a job well done I love this book
A Good story, success on characters and story background, updating frequency is a success top. Thank to the author for sharing such a nice one...✋✋✋✋✋
A very interesting story! The plot is intriguing, your characters are expressive. You're doing well! I wish you endless inspiration and a lot of great ideas!
Amazing. Thats what this is. A perfect blend of happiness and sadness to keep you needing more. Not to mention the chemistry between Athena and Aiden. The way they are written and the conversations they have. All round amazing!
A very solid story overall. It's a nice change up from the horror stories and magic stories that I see so often on here. I could use something more light-hearted. I really liked the childhood aspects of the story. Keep up the good work author. I would put a bit more description into how the characters look and to describe their feelings. I think that's it. Everything else is spot on.
Interesting story to read, really like the the way the story is going on, looking for the the chemistry between Athena and Aiden spice up a bit more, way to go author.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] You described her story very well! You definitely have a unique way of writing, I can relate to her somehow, and I wish that her future character development grows! Givin' this a perfect 5!
The author's great attribute is, they provide the questions for the readers that makes them curious enough to read the story. And then they get trapped in those well distanced paras of nicely crafted words, and lost in the story. The story unfolds, enticing plot moves forward and the author promptly goes on answering all those questions plus leaving new ones to edge on the curiosity. That's good. This story is great. It's loaded with potential, do try it. (Dear author, it's just my humble personal opinion, I think you're telling so much and there is not enough show. I mean I got the emotions and all but I had trouble properly imagining it. Creating it in my head. It can be just a problem with me. I might not be understanding the point of view by which you tell the story. Sorry I don't meaning anything bad by sharing this."
I can say that the story is a roller coaster one. Though I am a fantasy/action type reader, this even made me enjoy its first person narrations. Splendid choice of narrations and choice of words. I can say your grammar was decent enough for me as I am not an English speaker. You can read Nr_Yet's godly narrations for more insights and other authors for more methaporic and poetic lines. Though the narration was proper for your genre as it was direct and precise. No need for flowery words to play with our tongues. Some may like it, some don't so let the readers say your success. Kudos for a job well done!
It's such a good story with perfect character development and world-building. The pace is smooth and so is the writing style. The author has done a great job in portraying FL's thoughts and I'm really liking her character. It's definitely a must-read!
I could explain how the story is charming, interesting, and well-paced, but you could also read it for yourself and experience first hand. If you have free time make sure to give it a read.
I really like the story! It has this elements that a novel needs, and I cannot wait to see the character development of both the girl and the boy protagonists/maincharacters. Kudos for the author! ^^
It is a very interesting story showing the growth of the main character and her relationship with those close to her, it really hits close to home in some parts and I really enjoy reading it, a very good job from the author!
I really love how this story slowly unravels. Athena is a very strong girl and I hope that as the story progresses, she will find happiness again. I couldn't stop reading it once I started. She is so relatable. Thank you for this story, CodeyVanilla <3
I like the character Athena from this novel. When I started reading it, I couldn't stop. The author describes the scenes so beautifully that you can easily imagine it happening in your mind. Highly recommended!
The name of the characters draw me in. I have no shame in admitting that I liked the female lead. She is strong and knows how to handle the bad boy Aiden. I love the perspective and the description given in the story.
This is a really good story; I loved it how the author has described the feelings and the plot...I felt it while reading it..a great book written by the author. Recommend to read!
loved the story so far. The plot is great and so is the story pace. The characters are well described too. Cant wait to read more. Keep up the great work Author [img=update][img=recommend]
When a bad boy falls in love, makes up for a very interesting read. But when that bad boy is beautifully scarred and broken, that.. is just beautiful writing! i love it!
Touching story about teenage emotions. The story plot becomes clear right from the start. The motivations of each character are clear too as well as their internal and interpersonal conflicts. Writing wise, simply great. The first person narrative is done correctly, with minimal internal monologues. I did share some humble feedback on dialogues with the author for any future drafts. Definitely an interesting story in the making. Will be following to see what happens to Athena and Aiden. Great job, author!
Not usually a fan of the romance genre but I genuinely enjoyed reading this one. The writing skills that were put in use for this one are just amazing, I'm at a loss for words. I really see great potential in this novel. I hope more people find this hidden gem. Great job author!
I applaud the author's strong character voice. Athena's voice is very distinct. I felt the dialogue in some places was a little messy, but it's can be attributed to a charming quirk of the writing style, we are in a teenager's brain after all. the story is fast-paced, but there is a lack of atmospheric descriptions at times that pull me out of the story. in conclusion, I am waiting for the next chapter anxiously!
A Great cover page and well-written synopsis. The story is different from all **** here (pardon my wording...) CEOs mommy, CEO, daddy, etc. It's lovely written. After reading a few chapters I have no doubts, that you know how to write.
Reveal Spoiler Great book! Well done author. I will keep in library and read all the updates. Please update soon and dont make me wait too long. Hehehehe. I had a great time reading this. If you're thinking of reading it, go ahead. You will not regret it at all.
This story is indeed very interesting. The more you read it, the more you want to know what happens next in the story. The way the author has portrayed the story is incredible. All the best to the author.