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A rubbish novel, the hero is stupid and naive, who punishes villains and murderers, the author tries to show morals and human relations, a joke does he think people are stupid, you will find an older brother, a beautiful sister, a nice sister,
This story is really good and a lot of chapters where initially published but after that there has been no more updates and I just wished it would have regular updates.
sadden that this is a faloo novel :( can't read it if it only has 40 chapters :/ |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Good enough! A kingdom builder without the tag and we need more kingdom builders on this site. Or at least more that are readable and not copy and pasted into a translator.
Its good for the most part. My biggest complaint is that the author introduces a love interest tooo soon. You can write a romance interest at any point in the story so why do it at the beginning when the MC does not have a foundation to stand on. Of course the girl brings trouble before he can really deal with it. you got 40 chapters to interest the reader but they used 10 of them to talk about a girl and a mercenary. Ill still give 5 stars because at least it was fun to read even if not perfect.
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I enjoyed reading it. At the very least its readable unlike most of the work on the trial read. Plus I enjoy kingdom builders and having it in space is rare. Some minor things that don't make sense but are tolerable.
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this story has a really great idea but I hate that it doesn't go into depth of worlds and abilities. if someone would take this and make it better than the original I would be very grateful. tech is more than just making battleships I want to see the growth of the civilization as a whole not just the rapid production for war. I do recommend it though maybe it get better later.
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changed from source, very disappointed. ................................................................................................................
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I can access 50 episodes for free. I've found after 50 spaces on no site. please suggest a site where they can add originals.[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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The story is so fast paced that the author seems to not have any time to write in the story. Things are barely mentioned or not even mentioned before moving on. There could be an interesting story there but you'll have to figure it out as all you'll get is a framework of a story.
what is the name of this novel in mtl? ........................................................................................................................................
Uma premissa com muito potencial, mais infelizmente foi HORRIVELMENTE escrita....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
this is a very good novel, i even use real currency to unlock to show my aprreciation ,......................................................
This book is trash. From the very beginning, we are given no introduction to what is going on other than that 300,000 people from earth were transported in a mysterious way, then all became the lords of a planet. For one, the world-building is garbage. How can there be magic and tech civilizations in the same galaxy? Another thing is later on in the book, we are told the planet is desolate and barren. If that is true, how can there be enough food for 100 million people? The author clearly put no thought total to the logical aspects of this book, and the concept is just another overpowered system book where MC does basically nothing except tell the system what to do. This author is clearly leeching off the tried and true system novels, but this one is simply a bad concept with bad execution. I do not. recommend this book and it is simply a waste of time to read it.
I will give this a good star review because it has some potential. The idea used was actually good, it's just the execution is weird. Background story is not detailed enough, it was just like suddenly everything start. I need to read all the 40 trial chapter first before editing this review.
I've already read this on the phallus despite what it looks like, it improves with time[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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An update happens to be a priority I would like to see. word count----> ^~^ $/\$ β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§
Well the only thing I read in the trial read is the FML Section where it is much better and has more plot that this stupid and no brain novel the ML section has
I guess its okay? It could have been interesting. The idea was good, just not that well executed. i would like it more if it was written in a more serious fashion. more like a book than a webnovel you know, more depiction. the portrayal is too simple to depict the tension of the situation, making it less serious than i feel it should have been.
Ok so I've read to chapter 20 so far. The book starts of sorta meh with main character having assassination attempt against him. At first I thought the book would be on of those op system novels that have no story development. I'm happily surprised to share that the story has a unique background to it though I feel like it would have been better showing how the Mc gets transported to the universe because the start of the book for myself at least gives the wrong impression to me at least. Also though we get some background information on the universe we don't get as much as I would wish for so hopefully in later chapters the author fleshs it out more. I enjoyed the story and hope for more.
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similar to era of the Gods the beginning is horribly explained its like we're missing 1 or 2 chapters still it's a interesting novel concept having 30000 human with powerful talents with the can improve there world and races and than fight it out to become galaxy overlords even though a bad bigging hope its get picked
i just cant read this.. from synopsis and first chapter it seems like it is another novel (ζι ι’δΈ»οΌζηζι θ°ιδΊΏηΉεΌΊ), but they start diverging really fast. it is like webnovel hired people to copy paste faloo novels, but cause of copyright issues they needed to change them. and then you get totally different novel. i wont even mention westernization which is really bad practice.
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A rubbish novel, the hero is stupid and naive, who punishes villains and murderers, the author tries to show morals and human relations, a joke does he think people are stupid, you will find an older brother, a beautiful sister, a nice sister,
This story is really good and a lot of chapters where initially published but after that there has been no more updates and I just wished it would have regular updates.
sadden that this is a faloo novel :( can't read it if it only has 40 chapters :/ |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Petition to bring back War Truck in the Apocalypse.................................................................................................
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Good enough! A kingdom builder without the tag and we need more kingdom builders on this site. Or at least more that are readable and not copy and pasted into a translator.
Its good for the most part. My biggest complaint is that the author introduces a love interest tooo soon. You can write a romance interest at any point in the story so why do it at the beginning when the MC does not have a foundation to stand on. Of course the girl brings trouble before he can really deal with it. you got 40 chapters to interest the reader but they used 10 of them to talk about a girl and a mercenary. Ill still give 5 stars because at least it was fun to read even if not perfect.
Reveal Spoiler I enjoyed reading it. At the very least its readable unlike most of the work on the trial read. Plus I enjoy kingdom builders and having it in space is rare. Some minor things that don't make sense but are tolerable.
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this story has a really great idea but I hate that it doesn't go into depth of worlds and abilities. if someone would take this and make it better than the original I would be very grateful. tech is more than just making battleships I want to see the growth of the civilization as a whole not just the rapid production for war. I do recommend it though maybe it get better later.
Reveal Spoiler changed from source, very disappointed. ................................................................................................................
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I can access 50 episodes for free. I've found after 50 spaces on no site. please suggest a site where they can add originals.[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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The story is so fast paced that the author seems to not have any time to write in the story. Things are barely mentioned or not even mentioned before moving on. There could be an interesting story there but you'll have to figure it out as all you'll get is a framework of a story.
what is the name of this novel in mtl? ........................................................................................................................................
Uma premissa com muito potencial, mais infelizmente foi HORRIVELMENTE escrita....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
this is a very good novel, i even use real currency to unlock to show my aprreciation ,......................................................
This book is trash. From the very beginning, we are given no introduction to what is going on other than that 300,000 people from earth were transported in a mysterious way, then all became the lords of a planet. For one, the world-building is garbage. How can there be magic and tech civilizations in the same galaxy? Another thing is later on in the book, we are told the planet is desolate and barren. If that is true, how can there be enough food for 100 million people? The author clearly put no thought total to the logical aspects of this book, and the concept is just another overpowered system book where MC does basically nothing except tell the system what to do. This author is clearly leeching off the tried and true system novels, but this one is simply a bad concept with bad execution. I do not. recommend this book and it is simply a waste of time to read it.
I will give this a good star review because it has some potential. The idea used was actually good, it's just the execution is weird. Background story is not detailed enough, it was just like suddenly everything start. I need to read all the 40 trial chapter first before editing this review.
I've already read this on the phallus despite what it looks like, it improves with time[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Reveal Spoiler An update happens to be a priority I would like to see. word count----> ^~^ $/\$ β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§β€β‘ββ§
Well the only thing I read in the trial read is the FML Section where it is much better and has more plot that this stupid and no brain novel the ML section has
I guess its okay? It could have been interesting. The idea was good, just not that well executed. i would like it more if it was written in a more serious fashion. more like a book than a webnovel you know, more depiction. the portrayal is too simple to depict the tension of the situation, making it less serious than i feel it should have been.
Ok so I've read to chapter 20 so far. The book starts of sorta meh with main character having assassination attempt against him. At first I thought the book would be on of those op system novels that have no story development. I'm happily surprised to share that the story has a unique background to it though I feel like it would have been better showing how the Mc gets transported to the universe because the start of the book for myself at least gives the wrong impression to me at least. Also though we get some background information on the universe we don't get as much as I would wish for so hopefully in later chapters the author fleshs it out more. I enjoyed the story and hope for more.
Reveal Spoiler Amazinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggghghg Omg this is sooooooooo gooooodddd
similar to era of the Gods the beginning is horribly explained its like we're missing 1 or 2 chapters still it's a interesting novel concept having 30000 human with powerful talents with the can improve there world and races and than fight it out to become galaxy overlords even though a bad bigging hope its get picked
i just cant read this.. from synopsis and first chapter it seems like it is another novel (ζι ι’δΈ»οΌζηζι θ°ιδΊΏηΉεΌΊ), but they start diverging really fast. it is like webnovel hired people to copy paste faloo novels, but cause of copyright issues they needed to change them. and then you get totally different novel. i wont even mention westernization which is really bad practice.
badge . . . . . .. . . . .. .c.c.f f.r.f.f.f..f. .cmf c. cmc. .cm .mv.c.c.3mf.c.