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the writing quality is extremely shotty at times that's the biggest flaw and by far the most consistent which takes away from readability...
This doesn't have any consistency and can can be very confusing to the reader such as how or when did the MC get that weapon/item or power etc.
good plot but lot of confusing parts. would help if author explained some things such as power leve and how to cultivate and stuff better. but overall good story just explain things better
just a free advice if you like take it or just leave it . please don't these reader's advice affect your story . don't include unnecessary things like romance and all those stuff . especially harem these things are like fire if don't written well it will destroy your entire story but If you have confidence and a well directed plot then to i advice to be cautious. please don't these reader's affect the way you think they are here to read your story not to direct your story and most important do listen effective things and critic but not trash . and in the last thankyou for your efforts 😊
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hello Mr. author, I'm about to start reading this book of yours, and I want to know if there's any steamy moments coming anytime soon, with all of my regards Buff Shrek
There is a lot to say about this novel. Think the author don't have a lot of experience writing novel. So, I'm going to make it my job to comment as much as I can on the mistakes he makes. The story: The story development is kind of too fast. 50 chapters in, and he seems like he's unbeatable. Also, what kind of bs is this when the mc asked for the mysterious orbs from the auction boss and the boss agreed just because the mc won the stare-down. Isn't the mc suppose to be grateful that he is saved by the boss? Character design: The characters are fine, no problems with it. Just not that great enough to get a five star. World Background: ...Seriously, author? So far, I have not seen any explanation about the levels and the power catalogs and stuff like that. There should be like, Level 1-10, regular human stats to Olympic champions stats. Level 20-30, surpass human limits. So on, so forth. After reading a lot of chapters, I didn't get any in depth information about the worlds and people's abilities. Not trying to roast the author or criticize on no bases, just trying to give some constructive criticism to the author.
I have not read a word of this novel. But i am not interested since Its logically evident that he cant be stronger than the devil that he borrows powers from. After all you can't be stronger than someone who is giving you power logically. But the Chaos thing was interesting.
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just as a fellow author i am i give this novel 4 because of the new world and the creation the author did. but 😑 the story is not so good i will say that as i also a writer i will say you should do something new story. like a normal family not the revenge type story. many readers readed the revenge type story thats the fan fiction is so popular this day. creat some new story. man not like this here every one can guess what your story main thing. like this title the book as a world overload. right most of readers will think about a Finally a different story. but you just killed by writing your story a revenge with tragic story. where mc try to claim the power of the top to take revenge. and in this process you make mc life harder and giving him a ton of luck etc to survived the dead like scenario. this type of novel is all over the net. so do sometimes new. like the age of adapts if you read the novel. you will find that start is different from most of the other novel. except the reincarnation details that the author copyed it from the other novels. the rest are different and so does the Storyline is Also. the mc of this story almost died if not for his quick Brain.yes there is luck on mc but the author of age of adapts didnt put much except on 5 occasion of the entire novel. this all i have to say man. your novel had great potential if not for your revenge with tragic background and the mc lot of lucks.....
my second review, I didn't like it at the start but the author got better as the book moved forward so I think it's ok......................
Wow, this is marvellous, the author really did great work writing this, it is to be considered a masterpiece and there are very little faults from the very beginning. Keep up the good work Author 👏👏😁😁✨✨✨🔥🔥🌟🌟🌟⭐🌠🌠⚡⚡
I gotta say I'm obsessed with this story🤣 Well the writing of the author...of my god, it's awesome like the world background, the characters, and the writing quality...the word perfect isn't enough to descript it. Well, the first chapter is so interesting with the flow of the story and the mc's family background. Should read this one!! 10/10
Well I applause the author, that he was brave enough to write and publish his webnovel, not many can do it. The world is interesting, the cultivation system is a bit cliche, but it's not bad to have a cliche as how you use depends. Now to say what I didn't like that much. That is that he got a Katana, and the Celtic long sword, first if there isn't a Celtic culture in this world, why it is named as such, and katana, they are a bit cringe, but that is only something I dislike not something that bad, and it comes to reader tastes. But the Celtic sword can be a pothole as this world is different from ours. The system is too convenient, he really gives almost all to the mc, he was lazy to get some stones and buy for points, which can be useful. He got a conic hat, but those are suspicious and I doubt someone will not search for who bought one. And well as advice I can give, is that you shouldn't make your mc undefeatable, as humans, or even gods no one can be perfect. Well have a nice day. :3
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I enjoyed this book. I was immersed in every chapter and character. The storyline is impressive, and I must say, a work well written. Each character plays into the other
A good good fantasy with giga chad Mc this you jam, from the first it hooks you and make you read more, the characters and world-building is so smooth overall a must read
Amazing main character👍, not some kind hearted *uck. Fighting scenarios are well expressed, takes you into the novel world. Story plot is also diverse, not just MC centerd. Overall- Nice work!
At first, the story is admittedly a little confusing, but at the same time, it's interesting enough to make you want to understand more. Over the next chapters, everything starts getting clearer and you find out just how thought out the world-building is. The main character, Devon, seems to have enough character to make him feel alive and make one look forward to his development. The grammar and writing quality, in general, is good, I had no problem understanding anything. Looking forward to the next chapters!
The author creates a world that's both exciting and intense. The characters are ruthless and the writer's way of portraying fights and battle scenes makes this all the more interesting. I've only read up the C3 but this is definitely a must-read for anyone looking for an action-packed, story-driven, and well-thought-out novel. I can't wait to read more Author-sama! Keep up the good work!
A little more effort into proofreading and this becomes an absolute gem in this genre. Honestly, this was far less recognition than it should have. Keep up the work
Honestly, I feel like the writing could be better. Although, it's not far behind most of the other novels. The characters could also be more in-depth, not just saying cliched lines all the time. I must say though, the plot is interesting. Overall, like any other work, it can be better. I look forward to the author improving this novel. Good luck to you and to me!
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The premise is interesting and I can see already that the author has a lot planned. I have no idea so far if the mc will be overpowered as those are the types I am more into, but so far, so good. Keep it up Man👍 As for you guys reading this review...
A very enticing and unique storyline. The pain of a shattered man who has lost his mother and now revenge has blindfolded his eyes and he is lost in the darkness forced to make a deal with the devil! Must say very interesting and catchy plot and would highly recommend this book to fantasy lovers..... Best of luck to the book and author! Fatima......
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Great start. I love books that begin with broken trust, anger or hatred. The fact that it's a feeling of betrayal somewhat by his sister and father makes it even better. So excited to read this book to the end to know what transpires amongst the blooded trio...
This was quite the enjoyable first chapter. I always enjoy a bit of a slow burn when introducing the main story/character. I look forward to seeing where this goes!
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The book has a nice start to it, it is easy to understand since the writer gives an explanation of everything. The characters and plot are well done. I recommend it to anyone who like a good novel from weak to strong.
By far one of the best stories I've read on this app while the story is a little rough at first by the time you get to chapters 50-60 it gets addictive Devon is an amazing main character and the background of the world is filled with mystery that makes the story stand out and the development is also very good and the updates are very consistent and sometimes the author is even nice enough to throw in some extras. I'm very excited to see what is in store in the future for Devon's adventure and all the mysteries to finally come to light. The only negative thing I can say about this story is the grammar mistakes that are made but that will get better with time. I heavily recommend this story to everyone and hope to see it to its end
the writing quality is extremely shotty at times that's the biggest flaw and by far the most consistent which takes away from readability...
This doesn't have any consistency and can can be very confusing to the reader such as how or when did the MC get that weapon/item or power etc.
good plot but lot of confusing parts. would help if author explained some things such as power leve and how to cultivate and stuff better. but overall good story just explain things better
just a free advice if you like take it or just leave it . please don't these reader's advice affect your story . don't include unnecessary things like romance and all those stuff . especially harem these things are like fire if don't written well it will destroy your entire story but If you have confidence and a well directed plot then to i advice to be cautious. please don't these reader's affect the way you think they are here to read your story not to direct your story and most important do listen effective things and critic but not trash . and in the last thankyou for your efforts 😊
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hello Mr. author, I'm about to start reading this book of yours, and I want to know if there's any steamy moments coming anytime soon, with all of my regards Buff Shrek
There is a lot to say about this novel. Think the author don't have a lot of experience writing novel. So, I'm going to make it my job to comment as much as I can on the mistakes he makes. The story: The story development is kind of too fast. 50 chapters in, and he seems like he's unbeatable. Also, what kind of bs is this when the mc asked for the mysterious orbs from the auction boss and the boss agreed just because the mc won the stare-down. Isn't the mc suppose to be grateful that he is saved by the boss? Character design: The characters are fine, no problems with it. Just not that great enough to get a five star. World Background: ...Seriously, author? So far, I have not seen any explanation about the levels and the power catalogs and stuff like that. There should be like, Level 1-10, regular human stats to Olympic champions stats. Level 20-30, surpass human limits. So on, so forth. After reading a lot of chapters, I didn't get any in depth information about the worlds and people's abilities. Not trying to roast the author or criticize on no bases, just trying to give some constructive criticism to the author.
I have not read a word of this novel. But i am not interested since Its logically evident that he cant be stronger than the devil that he borrows powers from. After all you can't be stronger than someone who is giving you power logically. But the Chaos thing was interesting.
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just as a fellow author i am i give this novel 4 because of the new world and the creation the author did. but 😑 the story is not so good i will say that as i also a writer i will say you should do something new story. like a normal family not the revenge type story. many readers readed the revenge type story thats the fan fiction is so popular this day. creat some new story. man not like this here every one can guess what your story main thing. like this title the book as a world overload. right most of readers will think about a Finally a different story. but you just killed by writing your story a revenge with tragic story. where mc try to claim the power of the top to take revenge. and in this process you make mc life harder and giving him a ton of luck etc to survived the dead like scenario. this type of novel is all over the net. so do sometimes new. like the age of adapts if you read the novel. you will find that start is different from most of the other novel. except the reincarnation details that the author copyed it from the other novels. the rest are different and so does the Storyline is Also. the mc of this story almost died if not for his quick Brain.yes there is luck on mc but the author of age of adapts didnt put much except on 5 occasion of the entire novel. this all i have to say man. your novel had great potential if not for your revenge with tragic background and the mc lot of lucks.....
my second review, I didn't like it at the start but the author got better as the book moved forward so I think it's ok......................
Wow, this is marvellous, the author really did great work writing this, it is to be considered a masterpiece and there are very little faults from the very beginning. Keep up the good work Author 👏👏😁😁✨✨✨🔥🔥🌟🌟🌟⭐🌠🌠⚡⚡
I gotta say I'm obsessed with this story🤣 Well the writing of the author...of my god, it's awesome like the world background, the characters, and the writing quality...the word perfect isn't enough to descript it. Well, the first chapter is so interesting with the flow of the story and the mc's family background. Should read this one!! 10/10
Well I applause the author, that he was brave enough to write and publish his webnovel, not many can do it. The world is interesting, the cultivation system is a bit cliche, but it's not bad to have a cliche as how you use depends. Now to say what I didn't like that much. That is that he got a Katana, and the Celtic long sword, first if there isn't a Celtic culture in this world, why it is named as such, and katana, they are a bit cringe, but that is only something I dislike not something that bad, and it comes to reader tastes. But the Celtic sword can be a pothole as this world is different from ours. The system is too convenient, he really gives almost all to the mc, he was lazy to get some stones and buy for points, which can be useful. He got a conic hat, but those are suspicious and I doubt someone will not search for who bought one. And well as advice I can give, is that you shouldn't make your mc undefeatable, as humans, or even gods no one can be perfect. Well have a nice day. :3
Reveal Spoiler I enjoyed this book. I was immersed in every chapter and character. The storyline is impressive, and I must say, a work well written. Each character plays into the other
A good good fantasy with giga chad Mc this you jam, from the first it hooks you and make you read more, the characters and world-building is so smooth overall a must read
Amazing main character👍, not some kind hearted *uck. Fighting scenarios are well expressed, takes you into the novel world. Story plot is also diverse, not just MC centerd. Overall- Nice work!
At first, the story is admittedly a little confusing, but at the same time, it's interesting enough to make you want to understand more. Over the next chapters, everything starts getting clearer and you find out just how thought out the world-building is. The main character, Devon, seems to have enough character to make him feel alive and make one look forward to his development. The grammar and writing quality, in general, is good, I had no problem understanding anything. Looking forward to the next chapters!
The author creates a world that's both exciting and intense. The characters are ruthless and the writer's way of portraying fights and battle scenes makes this all the more interesting. I've only read up the C3 but this is definitely a must-read for anyone looking for an action-packed, story-driven, and well-thought-out novel. I can't wait to read more Author-sama! Keep up the good work!
A little more effort into proofreading and this becomes an absolute gem in this genre. Honestly, this was far less recognition than it should have. Keep up the work
Honestly, I feel like the writing could be better. Although, it's not far behind most of the other novels. The characters could also be more in-depth, not just saying cliched lines all the time. I must say though, the plot is interesting. Overall, like any other work, it can be better. I look forward to the author improving this novel. Good luck to you and to me!
Reveal Spoiler The premise is interesting and I can see already that the author has a lot planned. I have no idea so far if the mc will be overpowered as those are the types I am more into, but so far, so good. Keep it up Man👍 As for you guys reading this review...
A very enticing and unique storyline. The pain of a shattered man who has lost his mother and now revenge has blindfolded his eyes and he is lost in the darkness forced to make a deal with the devil! Must say very interesting and catchy plot and would highly recommend this book to fantasy lovers..... Best of luck to the book and author! Fatima......
Reveal Spoiler Great start. I love books that begin with broken trust, anger or hatred. The fact that it's a feeling of betrayal somewhat by his sister and father makes it even better. So excited to read this book to the end to know what transpires amongst the blooded trio...
This was quite the enjoyable first chapter. I always enjoy a bit of a slow burn when introducing the main story/character. I look forward to seeing where this goes!
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Reveal Spoiler The book has a nice start to it, it is easy to understand since the writer gives an explanation of everything. The characters and plot are well done. I recommend it to anyone who like a good novel from weak to strong.
By far one of the best stories I've read on this app while the story is a little rough at first by the time you get to chapters 50-60 it gets addictive Devon is an amazing main character and the background of the world is filled with mystery that makes the story stand out and the development is also very good and the updates are very consistent and sometimes the author is even nice enough to throw in some extras. I'm very excited to see what is in store in the future for Devon's adventure and all the mysteries to finally come to light. The only negative thing I can say about this story is the grammar mistakes that are made but that will get better with time. I heavily recommend this story to everyone and hope to see it to its end