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Chapter 81: Dropped plans to Rewrite

Hello to anyone reading this and if you are then you already read the title or this chapter to know that I'm dropping this fanfic of mine so that I can rewrite it again.

When I went back and reread it I couldn't help but saw some major grammar errors as well as but also problems with some of the character's reactions in the process.

Like the problems of how they go with the flow or how there was no plot or reason to add the Chat Group without anyone questioning what it was and just accepting the problems.

There were also the facts that I did some characters dirty or how I'm adding too many to the group chat without a chance to flush out the characters that make no sense in some like that mistake on the Impel Down to the one chapter War Bests arc.

I was embarrassed without any additions to that one I couldn't help but cringe at my work and the rest soon after.

Given some thoughts, I'm going to rewrite it and leave the chapters here for anyone to read and create the remake on another fanfic but the MC will still be reincarnated as Tatsumi but adding more background and reasons why.

Although I'm planning on changing the members at the beginning though I would like to hear if I should keep one of the characters from the beginning.

Also sorry if you were wanting to read what happens next but I felt that the characters were a bit lacking.


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