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So this is just a primary review ... I just read 10 chapters so This review is just a frist impression nothing more ... The story tell the tale of a girl who find herself a slave all of sudden and she was sold before she can even register what happened to her ... Her master is a cold and unfeeling business man and she is his new toy the first 10 chapters made in a good way and it's feel like this novel is not the first work of the author ... No much details about the plot or the background or even the world mentioned in this 10 chapters but the obvious thing is that the technology is more advanced but not by big margin from the real life. The frist 10 chapters are all from the POV of the heroine and only her until now ... For the Harem part, Will I don't understand it yet I can't even tell if the protagonist is male or female ( the master or the slave). And that's it if Mr. author make something worth mentioning then I will write it down in the replies sections or in another review until then .. Good luck.
Hello!! I've read upto chapter 33 and want to say that this is one of the best stories I've ever read. I get both fairy tale as well as dark vibes from the story. I still can't believe this is the first story of the author. The way the manor is described and the emotions and thoughts are portrayed, author definitely deserves an award. And, the way there story drifts off towards the other direction, it's very smooth. I never expected Zion to be a man with a broken child yearning for affection inside. I really can't wait to read the upcoming chapters and the other stories of the author. Love, hugs, support and respect to the author.
So this is just a primary review ... I just read 10 chapters so This review is just a frist impression nothing more ... The story tell the tale of a girl who find herself a slave all of sudden and she was sold before she can even register what happened to her ... Her master is a cold and unfeeling business man and she is his new toy the first 10 chapters made in a good way and it's feel like this novel is not the first work of the author ... No much details about the plot or the background or even the world mentioned in this 10 chapters but the obvious thing is that the technology is more advanced but not by big margin from the real life. The frist 10 chapters are all from the POV of the heroine and only her until now ... For the Harem part, Will I don't understand it yet I can't even tell if the protagonist is male or female ( the master or the slave). And that's it if Mr. author make something worth mentioning then I will write it down in the replies sections or in another review until then .. Good luck.
Hello!! I've read upto chapter 33 and want to say that this is one of the best stories I've ever read. I get both fairy tale as well as dark vibes from the story. I still can't believe this is the first story of the author. The way the manor is described and the emotions and thoughts are portrayed, author definitely deserves an award. And, the way there story drifts off towards the other direction, it's very smooth. I never expected Zion to be a man with a broken child yearning for affection inside. I really can't wait to read the upcoming chapters and the other stories of the author. Love, hugs, support and respect to the author.