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One of the Best books I have read on Webnovel although some idiots have voted less stars for no reason. Great story, no grammar mistakes, characters feel real with their flaws. Story after 50 chapter is so vivid for imagination that you will like it. Mc become serious after some 200th chapter...from their story is like peak of dao of novels It honestly makes the world easier to imagine and makes the book less content heavy to explain the world and its laws. SYSTEM!! Its done perfectly, the MC isnt driven by it and the author uses it brilliantly as a supporting tool. Clearly defines the parity and disparity of power levels and skills as the character develops. This is first novel I've read where I can say it enhances the plot as opposed to dominating/driving it.(This opinion I agree with other guy in comments). NOW GO START READING //'''====
Author has a really good premise even with the cringe. He tragic beginning he could’ve did a lot with it if he just killed off the annoying side character, Sister, but he didn’t because you know that would’ve been good so the whole thing is just unbelievably infuriating that Sister does nothing is actually a ball and chain useless completely but full of Snark and disrespect. Unbelievable I mean I don’t know if you as a man like to live with that ungratefulness but yeah, boy can’t handle it so enjoy the story if y’all can handle stuff like that, good writing good character with the main character, I mean his trash in the beginning, but he slowly started to develop into a man but man, the side characters in the back.
PLEASE COME BACK TO IT I know author is also working on earths greatest magus but please revive this gem
Buena historia pero no entiendo por que dejaste de escribir dejando tirados a tus fan y los que aportaron a esta novela, creo que es una falta de respeto total.
I wouldn’t recommend this book for a few reasons. 150 chapters in and nothing interesting happens. Arc 1 feels like a filler that didn’t need to be that long. Arc 2 feels pointless since the MC’s relationship w/ the elf princess takes one step forward ten steps back. (Maybe more happens idk, I dropped after they spend the night together.) The characters SUCK. There hasn’t been a single likable character yet. MC feels childish and naive even though he’s over 18 and spent time in prison. The sister adds nothing to the story. The side characters are literally just there to annoy the readers. MC seems like he’s suppose to be strong but 150 chapters in the author hasn’t allowed the MC to take a meaningful W. I get slowburns but PLEASE let the audience have something to cheer for. Overall, just a lot of minor details that ruins the book for me.
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Herrera enter the harem ? ................................................................................................................................................................
The story is okay. Not really worth the stones. Typical story of underdog needed to save the world but is constantly beaten down or hampered by the people he has to save. Mc is close to being a comple idiot. Given great abilities but never uses them to make them better but with the effect of plot armor he manages to win.
the update is slower than before 18days and no update overall is good.the flow, character, and no grammatical error everything feels real. I congratulate the author
Writing quality : Good Character : Sometimes they act like they r intelligent being and sometimes stupid System : Good system.... at least interesting Story development : Nothing noteworthy After reading some chapter.... it seems it’s not my cup of tea..... Everyone give it a try before judging. Don’t just disregard it after just listing what others say. And it looks like I am the 100th review 😁😎 Happy Century
It is a good book. Writing quality is great with little to no errors and the story development is actually pretty great. I've seen no problems with the updating stability and the world background is really interesting. Character design is pretty good but I have a problem with how the main character constantly hinders himself with many of the simplest things he knows about his powers. If you have an ability, it works quickly and cost nothing, can be activated without the need for any additional actions, and is required for you to do everything including just to live. Then please, use it. Use it every chance you can and spam it every chance you get. This unfortunately bothers me to no end when I encounter it. Don't get me wrong this is still a very good book despite my personal pet peeves.
The premise is good and the system is cool. Along with the world and Mc's powers. But it suffers from a brain dead Mc. And worst of all this useless sister who is honestly the reason i'm dropping this book.
it was a great read initially. author gave out very good depiction of his world and the characters were intriguing. But the story is not progressing faster like in its beginning. but thank god, there are not much filler chapters. however, i wish the author could release chapters more frequently. starting lose interest in continuing. If its any personal issue, i wish for the author to come over it stronger.
Without the stupid MC it's a master class. But I cry everyday for this stupid guy ... Oh and all the stories of this autor are like that. If u know the same kind of story BUT without stupid MC comment please and sorry for my poor English.
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a great book, but only put out a few chapters a month. ive been a privileged member for months and now i wont renew because it isnt worth it.
It started descent but after a while. The chapters become nothing but filler. Forced plot and just toss in really dumb stuff and that is this story. Mc is a tool for everyone else and that’ the story. I saved you your time.
Really love the novel, like the others in spiritverse: ties and contrasts really well well other works by avans. Love the kingdom building and antihero aspect of the story. Cant wait for it to progress further.
The Mc is too soft in my opinion mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.m...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkkkkkkkkmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I very hard to read this novel after chapter 50 I stopped. because I very disappointed about mc character. sorry If my review about this novel not good. but like other novel from avan Dom's pillar
Full stars for this book! This is insane! I love the mixing world of this book. It seems that this universe doesnt have limitation which is pretty cool indeed! And the MC! Nothing compares to him.
Its pretty slow but it's an good book to read in your downtime. The MC is pretty badness and the plot is good too. I've noticed that people don't like his sister, I myself like his sister because she is his anchor, he will do anything for her so long as it doesn't effect her chances of survival. Most stories are about orphans these days and don't have any family members so they attach too quickly to others, him having his sister effects all of his decisions.
The Earths schockling bad, In addition To Earths Greatest magus in addition to doomsday. In this book it doesn't deliver the tags whats so ever, Overpowered. You either are or you aren't, he's nerfed after 3 chapters of having his ability. Goes from also being someone showing common sense and a small amount of intelligence to mentally disabled, and just lacks overall everything, complains about everything and is just overall bad character, all the free chapters after meeting with the elf outside the temple it just goes down hill, forced plots ot holes everywhere, his sister is just bagged to annoying mob character. if not due to forcing 1 star the rating would be lower.
Personagem forte, mas não é invencível. Muito bom isso. Em questão de inteligência, ele é normal ou um pouco acima da média. Não é ingênuo. A história está no começo ainda, mas gostei do que vi. Não é apenas poder muito exagerado. Também tem inteligência, estratégia e batalha em longa escala. Espero que no volume espacial seja ainda melhor com batalhas envolvendo naves como Star Wars ou Duna.
Have read to chapter 90 and the story feels like it never takes of. Does the MC ever get powerfully or is he always just pushed around by others? Wasn't this supposed to be a lower world?
i will just spam 5 star cuz i believe on the author i hope he makes another masterpiece . ... .. .. .. . .. .. .. . .. ... .. . . .
Story is Very edgy And lacks a real motive for evil.Author states humans are gray nither black nor white morality wise but Fails to visualize real suffering and real choice between right and wrong and Instead makes a MC Just does stuff because ILL DO ANYTHING TO PROTECT MY SISTER!!!!!. great idea for a novel wonderful concepts and world building
Good novel ;!;!;!,!,!;€;!;!,!,!,!,!,!,!;!,!;!;&,&,&,&,&;&,&&,,&‘,‘,&,‘,&,,‘,‘,‘‘,‘,!,,‘,‘,‘,‘,‘,‘‘,‘,‘,‘,‘,‘,‘?&(&(&(&,‘(&,&&(&(&(&(&,&((&(&
Dunno man why every novel is suffering from so many typos and bad grammar like aleast some of them can be prevented by using grammar correction tools. But I guess it doesn't matter to authors.
I don’t write many reviews but for this book i am willing. Great writing, characters feel quite real with their flaws. Character progression is obvious but logical and desired. World building, a lot of cut and paste from other genres... some might even say plagiarism but it doesnt take away from the value of the read. It honestly makes the world easier to imagine and makes the book less content heavy to explain the world and its laws. Now the best part! THE USE OF A SYSTEM!! Its perfectly done, the MC isnt driven by it and the author uses it brilliantly as a supporting tool. Clearly defines the parity and disparity of power levels and skills as the character develops. This is first novel ive read where I can say it enhances the plot as opposed to dominating/driving it. PS. I think the sister is a fine character, her responses are quite reasonable and what you would expect from a young female in a new world. She can always progress so im keen to see what she ends up like and with... +1 Harem.
One of the Best books I have read on Webnovel although some idiots have voted less stars for no reason. Great story, no grammar mistakes, characters feel real with their flaws. Story after 50 chapter is so vivid for imagination that you will like it. Mc become serious after some 200th chapter...from their story is like peak of dao of novels It honestly makes the world easier to imagine and makes the book less content heavy to explain the world and its laws. SYSTEM!! Its done perfectly, the MC isnt driven by it and the author uses it brilliantly as a supporting tool. Clearly defines the parity and disparity of power levels and skills as the character develops. This is first novel I've read where I can say it enhances the plot as opposed to dominating/driving it.(This opinion I agree with other guy in comments). NOW GO START READING //'''====
Author has a really good premise even with the cringe. He tragic beginning he could’ve did a lot with it if he just killed off the annoying side character, Sister, but he didn’t because you know that would’ve been good so the whole thing is just unbelievably infuriating that Sister does nothing is actually a ball and chain useless completely but full of Snark and disrespect. Unbelievable I mean I don’t know if you as a man like to live with that ungratefulness but yeah, boy can’t handle it so enjoy the story if y’all can handle stuff like that, good writing good character with the main character, I mean his trash in the beginning, but he slowly started to develop into a man but man, the side characters in the back.
PLEASE COME BACK TO IT I know author is also working on earths greatest magus but please revive this gem
Buena historia pero no entiendo por que dejaste de escribir dejando tirados a tus fan y los que aportaron a esta novela, creo que es una falta de respeto total.
I wouldn’t recommend this book for a few reasons. 150 chapters in and nothing interesting happens. Arc 1 feels like a filler that didn’t need to be that long. Arc 2 feels pointless since the MC’s relationship w/ the elf princess takes one step forward ten steps back. (Maybe more happens idk, I dropped after they spend the night together.) The characters SUCK. There hasn’t been a single likable character yet. MC feels childish and naive even though he’s over 18 and spent time in prison. The sister adds nothing to the story. The side characters are literally just there to annoy the readers. MC seems like he’s suppose to be strong but 150 chapters in the author hasn’t allowed the MC to take a meaningful W. I get slowburns but PLEASE let the audience have something to cheer for. Overall, just a lot of minor details that ruins the book for me.
Reveal Spoiler Herrera enter the harem ? ................................................................................................................................................................
The story is okay. Not really worth the stones. Typical story of underdog needed to save the world but is constantly beaten down or hampered by the people he has to save. Mc is close to being a comple idiot. Given great abilities but never uses them to make them better but with the effect of plot armor he manages to win.
the update is slower than before 18days and no update overall is good.the flow, character, and no grammatical error everything feels real. I congratulate the author
Writing quality : Good Character : Sometimes they act like they r intelligent being and sometimes stupid System : Good system.... at least interesting Story development : Nothing noteworthy After reading some chapter.... it seems it’s not my cup of tea..... Everyone give it a try before judging. Don’t just disregard it after just listing what others say. And it looks like I am the 100th review 😁😎 Happy Century
It is a good book. Writing quality is great with little to no errors and the story development is actually pretty great. I've seen no problems with the updating stability and the world background is really interesting. Character design is pretty good but I have a problem with how the main character constantly hinders himself with many of the simplest things he knows about his powers. If you have an ability, it works quickly and cost nothing, can be activated without the need for any additional actions, and is required for you to do everything including just to live. Then please, use it. Use it every chance you can and spam it every chance you get. This unfortunately bothers me to no end when I encounter it. Don't get me wrong this is still a very good book despite my personal pet peeves.
The premise is good and the system is cool. Along with the world and Mc's powers. But it suffers from a brain dead Mc. And worst of all this useless sister who is honestly the reason i'm dropping this book.
it was a great read initially. author gave out very good depiction of his world and the characters were intriguing. But the story is not progressing faster like in its beginning. but thank god, there are not much filler chapters. however, i wish the author could release chapters more frequently. starting lose interest in continuing. If its any personal issue, i wish for the author to come over it stronger.
Without the stupid MC it's a master class. But I cry everyday for this stupid guy ... Oh and all the stories of this autor are like that. If u know the same kind of story BUT without stupid MC comment please and sorry for my poor English.
EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
a great book, but only put out a few chapters a month. ive been a privileged member for months and now i wont renew because it isnt worth it.
It started descent but after a while. The chapters become nothing but filler. Forced plot and just toss in really dumb stuff and that is this story. Mc is a tool for everyone else and that’ the story. I saved you your time.
Really love the novel, like the others in spiritverse: ties and contrasts really well well other works by avans. Love the kingdom building and antihero aspect of the story. Cant wait for it to progress further.
The Mc is too soft in my opinion mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.m...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkkkkkkkkmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I very hard to read this novel after chapter 50 I stopped. because I very disappointed about mc character. sorry If my review about this novel not good. but like other novel from avan Dom's pillar
Full stars for this book! This is insane! I love the mixing world of this book. It seems that this universe doesnt have limitation which is pretty cool indeed! And the MC! Nothing compares to him.
Its pretty slow but it's an good book to read in your downtime. The MC is pretty badness and the plot is good too. I've noticed that people don't like his sister, I myself like his sister because she is his anchor, he will do anything for her so long as it doesn't effect her chances of survival. Most stories are about orphans these days and don't have any family members so they attach too quickly to others, him having his sister effects all of his decisions.
The Earths schockling bad, In addition To Earths Greatest magus in addition to doomsday. In this book it doesn't deliver the tags whats so ever, Overpowered. You either are or you aren't, he's nerfed after 3 chapters of having his ability. Goes from also being someone showing common sense and a small amount of intelligence to mentally disabled, and just lacks overall everything, complains about everything and is just overall bad character, all the free chapters after meeting with the elf outside the temple it just goes down hill, forced plots ot holes everywhere, his sister is just bagged to annoying mob character. if not due to forcing 1 star the rating would be lower.
Personagem forte, mas não é invencível. Muito bom isso. Em questão de inteligência, ele é normal ou um pouco acima da média. Não é ingênuo. A história está no começo ainda, mas gostei do que vi. Não é apenas poder muito exagerado. Também tem inteligência, estratégia e batalha em longa escala. Espero que no volume espacial seja ainda melhor com batalhas envolvendo naves como Star Wars ou Duna.
Have read to chapter 90 and the story feels like it never takes of. Does the MC ever get powerfully or is he always just pushed around by others? Wasn't this supposed to be a lower world?
i will just spam 5 star cuz i believe on the author i hope he makes another masterpiece . ... .. .. .. . .. .. .. . .. ... .. . . .
Story is Very edgy And lacks a real motive for evil.Author states humans are gray nither black nor white morality wise but Fails to visualize real suffering and real choice between right and wrong and Instead makes a MC Just does stuff because ILL DO ANYTHING TO PROTECT MY SISTER!!!!!. great idea for a novel wonderful concepts and world building
Good novel ;!;!;!,!,!;€;!;!,!,!,!,!,!,!;!,!;!;&,&,&,&,&;&,&&,,&‘,‘,&,‘,&,,‘,‘,‘‘,‘,!,,‘,‘,‘,‘,‘,‘‘,‘,‘,‘,‘,‘,‘?&(&(&(&,‘(&,&&(&(&(&(&,&((&(&
Dunno man why every novel is suffering from so many typos and bad grammar like aleast some of them can be prevented by using grammar correction tools. But I guess it doesn't matter to authors.
I don’t write many reviews but for this book i am willing. Great writing, characters feel quite real with their flaws. Character progression is obvious but logical and desired. World building, a lot of cut and paste from other genres... some might even say plagiarism but it doesnt take away from the value of the read. It honestly makes the world easier to imagine and makes the book less content heavy to explain the world and its laws. Now the best part! THE USE OF A SYSTEM!! Its perfectly done, the MC isnt driven by it and the author uses it brilliantly as a supporting tool. Clearly defines the parity and disparity of power levels and skills as the character develops. This is first novel ive read where I can say it enhances the plot as opposed to dominating/driving it. PS. I think the sister is a fine character, her responses are quite reasonable and what you would expect from a young female in a new world. She can always progress so im keen to see what she ends up like and with... +1 Harem.