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just disappointed, the novel has an unbelievable potential but the author does not manage to sublimate his work and tell a good story with these damages
The premise of the story is interesting but the actual coolness of the codes system is lost due to the lack of codes and their usage. There are a ton of errors and some of the chapters are actually in the wrong order. The character has the potential to be great and this story amazing, but it seems like the author canโt stay on track with the characters goals.
honestly not that great wish they would stop putting this in the free to read so often it's like ehh why not that enjoyable and not that interesting story can be nice or drawn out or completely off the topic of the subject
Itโ s honestly terrible. Once you read the book, it was heading to a good start but you will soon find out that it went down hill. Shdshshshdhhdb
Disappointing. That's what i feel while reding the novel. The author remove the one thing that makes this novel unique. It would have been refreshing to have a mute mc not like the rest.
the mc is ok but the problem is that there's too much happening to him flashback messed up memories it doesn't make sense and theres to much going on at once it's hard to read the farther you get into it and needs like extra chapters to explain everything
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Noice basta nakita ko yung flag insta-support! Hahahahahha!(TL: The moment i saw 5e flag i insta-support the novel!) Anyways i think the novel i noice.
(Maybe there are small spoilers, read at your own risk) I'm at chapter 177 but there are still things that bother me, for example, at the beginning the protagonist says he can go to the code altar and exchange codes for skill points, from what i understand the skill points are the free points to allocate in any status you want (strength, vitality, agility, intelligence, etc etc) and you also have the option to exchange codes for XP to level up faster, but from my point of view the protagonist definitely doesn't make use of skill point exchange because if he did, he would definitely be much stronger than he is in the chapter I'm reading, and he has skills that the protagonist doesn't even use properly even though it's vital for increase his strength, an example of these skills is the primordial serpent skill that copies someone's skill after seeing it being performed, the protagonist seems intellectual because of his intelligence status ability unlocked but the truth is that the protagonist doesn't know how to use this intelligence properly because if he used it he would be much stronger than he is in the chapter I'm reading
I first found this book when it was free for 24 hours. The first 5 chapters were pretty ok, they were introducing the character and the system, as well as some details about the world. It also highlighted the beginning of his adventure towards power, his goals and motivations, which was great. It starts going down hill when he meets the boar orc, the second rare grade creature. At one point in the story it says that ordinary objects can't harm these beast and then he ends up killing the monster with a tree. I also have to mention that the fight scenes are pretty poorly described, I'm never able to get a picture of what's going on, I was only able to glean that he fought, got somewhat hurt and in the end somehow killed it with a tree. There are also some parts that I find really ridiculous, like when for some reason he feels the need to con someone who cared about him or the fact that a character just blurts out all his thoughts and worries to someone he deems a stranger. In reality people don't just blurt out the whole truth of their problems to others who they meet for the first time, at most they would give a vague outline of what's wrong. The character is also pretty dumb, at one point he goes on a tirade about how despicable others hiding information about their powers is, when he's also going to end up doing the exact same thing, it's kind of common sense to keep important information to yourself. Overall, the concept and beginning is good, it's just... everything else that's not great. Too many inconsistencies and nonsense.
Reveal Spoiler I feel betrayed, the synopsis says that Allen was born with a disease that makes him unable to speak, he is basically mute and is an orphan because he lost his family early, when I read the synopsis I thought he was a homeless person very young, but when start reading the guy has claw scars on his throat and that gives the impression that it's not a birth disease that makes him mute, but that his voice box was ripped by the claws of some beast and the guy has already finished high school and is became a hunter for lack of choice since he couldn't find a job, the synopsis is more interesting than the beginning of the story when I started reading '-'
so at first I'm intrigued by the title and the synopsis and the story seems good but then suddenly takes wrong turn in chapter 13, I get it that the protagonist still naive and such but believing that he just planted by some nano tracker in his blood by someone and agreed to become guard/pawn just so stupid. like is he doesn't have common sense usually people will probably attack since he's alone anyway and the fact he already said he's a support just makes it worst, is he afraid of his background? I just can't comprehend it. I will try read more and probably stop when I seen any very stupid decision like this one and hopefully there's none
the main character like bears Auto 5 stars from me it does have a slight feel of another novel on here that has surpassed 3000 chapters but I still like it
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yea i deropped book as soon as he was no longer mute what is the point of making him mute in the first place there was no point just a grab for more attention.
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Later in chapter 13, the MC will become a slave or a subordinate, even though he has the power to become a ruler. Should have been able to explain this is not why I gave *1 ? .It's useless if the writing is good, the setting is cool, etc., if the plot is sloppy, bad.
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some of the readers probably have brain damage cuz they spam the comments with stupid questions. like, DIdโt h3 Hav3 A bRok3n l3G. when in the previous chapter that he got healed cuz of a level up
Alright , I read the book til the cap 14-15 and those chapters killed me like why would the Mc let himself get stuck by a lie ? Like it was a good book by that point, the fact that he lost the handicap of being mute killed it a llitle bit but those chapters killed me, I will read a few chapters more but if there isn't a good explanation I will need to drop the novel
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Honestly, hard to place this one. I've read 7 chapters and in that span, the MC has gone from unable to speak (a pretty cool handicap) to able to speak. MC got a great power which he wants to keep secret for good reasons, but then a chapter later thinks poorly of other characters who got a similar ability and kept it secret. MC wants to be powerful, but also wants to leave his destiny to fate instead of trying to get stronger on his own. MC wants to be careful, but then does risky stuff and almost dies several times for no reason. If the author would choose something and stick with it, this *could* have been an interesting novel. This wishy washy stuff doesn't work for me, unfortunately.
Honestly. I enjoyed the beginning but then there are some critical things that don't make sense at all. His power level is inconsistent and literally don't know anything about how strong he is compared to others. World building also doesn't make sense as well. Ascension isn't described properly so clueless regarding that. Basically Mc is as strong as the author wants him to be at any given point so you always have no clue how strong he is.
I liked the start but the story goes downhill as it proceeds. The ML has snake code but he does not have any quality or show any quality. He is always led by his nose by other people. Snakes are cunning, lazy sharp and cruel and they do not possess any of the qualities even after the snake code changed his body. Moreover, the author just confusingly mixed technology and codes. I was at first very interested but after reading till chapter 50, my interest was lost! The whole novel introduces new ideas suddenly in some chapters to carry forward and the character of ML is poor, coward, cautious and extremely weak and have no knowledge about the world.
I think the story is pretty good and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
the idea could be interesting but the novel is poorly constructed, full of inconsistencies and grammatical errors and above all plot holes. the protagonist is an idiot
I read up to chapter 14, story was fine, there was quite a bit of grammatical mistakes, and between chapter 13-14 a character completely changes personality without warning, and forces the main character "ie plot" to do his bidding. Overall, not that optimistic towards the story.
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So can you give me spicy codes?...............................................................................................................
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Dropped within first 15 chapters. MC is blackmailed by a person saying he is from A terrorist grouping and will turn him in if he doesnโt follow his commands. The thing is MC is not so why would he just go along with it. An example would be a random person on the street walks up too you and says your a terrorist give me all your money or I will report you. Are you just going to give it too him? No you tell him to F off.
just disappointed, the novel has an unbelievable potential but the author does not manage to sublimate his work and tell a good story with these damages
The premise of the story is interesting but the actual coolness of the codes system is lost due to the lack of codes and their usage. There are a ton of errors and some of the chapters are actually in the wrong order. The character has the potential to be great and this story amazing, but it seems like the author canโt stay on track with the characters goals.
honestly not that great wish they would stop putting this in the free to read so often it's like ehh why not that enjoyable and not that interesting story can be nice or drawn out or completely off the topic of the subject
Itโ s honestly terrible. Once you read the book, it was heading to a good start but you will soon find out that it went down hill. Shdshshshdhhdb
Disappointing. That's what i feel while reding the novel. The author remove the one thing that makes this novel unique. It would have been refreshing to have a mute mc not like the rest.
the mc is ok but the problem is that there's too much happening to him flashback messed up memories it doesn't make sense and theres to much going on at once it's hard to read the farther you get into it and needs like extra chapters to explain everything
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Noice basta nakita ko yung flag insta-support! Hahahahahha!(TL: The moment i saw 5e flag i insta-support the novel!) Anyways i think the novel i noice.
(Maybe there are small spoilers, read at your own risk) I'm at chapter 177 but there are still things that bother me, for example, at the beginning the protagonist says he can go to the code altar and exchange codes for skill points, from what i understand the skill points are the free points to allocate in any status you want (strength, vitality, agility, intelligence, etc etc) and you also have the option to exchange codes for XP to level up faster, but from my point of view the protagonist definitely doesn't make use of skill point exchange because if he did, he would definitely be much stronger than he is in the chapter I'm reading, and he has skills that the protagonist doesn't even use properly even though it's vital for increase his strength, an example of these skills is the primordial serpent skill that copies someone's skill after seeing it being performed, the protagonist seems intellectual because of his intelligence status ability unlocked but the truth is that the protagonist doesn't know how to use this intelligence properly because if he used it he would be much stronger than he is in the chapter I'm reading
I first found this book when it was free for 24 hours. The first 5 chapters were pretty ok, they were introducing the character and the system, as well as some details about the world. It also highlighted the beginning of his adventure towards power, his goals and motivations, which was great. It starts going down hill when he meets the boar orc, the second rare grade creature. At one point in the story it says that ordinary objects can't harm these beast and then he ends up killing the monster with a tree. I also have to mention that the fight scenes are pretty poorly described, I'm never able to get a picture of what's going on, I was only able to glean that he fought, got somewhat hurt and in the end somehow killed it with a tree. There are also some parts that I find really ridiculous, like when for some reason he feels the need to con someone who cared about him or the fact that a character just blurts out all his thoughts and worries to someone he deems a stranger. In reality people don't just blurt out the whole truth of their problems to others who they meet for the first time, at most they would give a vague outline of what's wrong. The character is also pretty dumb, at one point he goes on a tirade about how despicable others hiding information about their powers is, when he's also going to end up doing the exact same thing, it's kind of common sense to keep important information to yourself. Overall, the concept and beginning is good, it's just... everything else that's not great. Too many inconsistencies and nonsense.
Reveal Spoiler I feel betrayed, the synopsis says that Allen was born with a disease that makes him unable to speak, he is basically mute and is an orphan because he lost his family early, when I read the synopsis I thought he was a homeless person very young, but when start reading the guy has claw scars on his throat and that gives the impression that it's not a birth disease that makes him mute, but that his voice box was ripped by the claws of some beast and the guy has already finished high school and is became a hunter for lack of choice since he couldn't find a job, the synopsis is more interesting than the beginning of the story when I started reading '-'
so at first I'm intrigued by the title and the synopsis and the story seems good but then suddenly takes wrong turn in chapter 13, I get it that the protagonist still naive and such but believing that he just planted by some nano tracker in his blood by someone and agreed to become guard/pawn just so stupid. like is he doesn't have common sense usually people will probably attack since he's alone anyway and the fact he already said he's a support just makes it worst, is he afraid of his background? I just can't comprehend it. I will try read more and probably stop when I seen any very stupid decision like this one and hopefully there's none
the main character like bears Auto 5 stars from me it does have a slight feel of another novel on here that has surpassed 3000 chapters but I still like it
Reveal Spoiler yea i deropped book as soon as he was no longer mute what is the point of making him mute in the first place there was no point just a grab for more attention.
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Later in chapter 13, the MC will become a slave or a subordinate, even though he has the power to become a ruler. Should have been able to explain this is not why I gave *1 ? .It's useless if the writing is good, the setting is cool, etc., if the plot is sloppy, bad.
Reveal Spoiler some of the readers probably have brain damage cuz they spam the comments with stupid questions. like, DIdโt h3 Hav3 A bRok3n l3G. when in the previous chapter that he got healed cuz of a level up
Alright , I read the book til the cap 14-15 and those chapters killed me like why would the Mc let himself get stuck by a lie ? Like it was a good book by that point, the fact that he lost the handicap of being mute killed it a llitle bit but those chapters killed me, I will read a few chapters more but if there isn't a good explanation I will need to drop the novel
Reveal Spoiler Honestly, hard to place this one. I've read 7 chapters and in that span, the MC has gone from unable to speak (a pretty cool handicap) to able to speak. MC got a great power which he wants to keep secret for good reasons, but then a chapter later thinks poorly of other characters who got a similar ability and kept it secret. MC wants to be powerful, but also wants to leave his destiny to fate instead of trying to get stronger on his own. MC wants to be careful, but then does risky stuff and almost dies several times for no reason. If the author would choose something and stick with it, this *could* have been an interesting novel. This wishy washy stuff doesn't work for me, unfortunately.
Honestly. I enjoyed the beginning but then there are some critical things that don't make sense at all. His power level is inconsistent and literally don't know anything about how strong he is compared to others. World building also doesn't make sense as well. Ascension isn't described properly so clueless regarding that. Basically Mc is as strong as the author wants him to be at any given point so you always have no clue how strong he is.
I liked the start but the story goes downhill as it proceeds. The ML has snake code but he does not have any quality or show any quality. He is always led by his nose by other people. Snakes are cunning, lazy sharp and cruel and they do not possess any of the qualities even after the snake code changed his body. Moreover, the author just confusingly mixed technology and codes. I was at first very interested but after reading till chapter 50, my interest was lost! The whole novel introduces new ideas suddenly in some chapters to carry forward and the character of ML is poor, coward, cautious and extremely weak and have no knowledge about the world.
I think the story is pretty good and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
the idea could be interesting but the novel is poorly constructed, full of inconsistencies and grammatical errors and above all plot holes. the protagonist is an idiot
I read up to chapter 14, story was fine, there was quite a bit of grammatical mistakes, and between chapter 13-14 a character completely changes personality without warning, and forces the main character "ie plot" to do his bidding. Overall, not that optimistic towards the story.
So whereโd the cover come from? I mean the novelโs cover. Also- good novel, could use some work on story development, but great. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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So can you give me spicy codes?...............................................................................................................
เฎ เฎตเฎฐเฎคเฏ เฎเฎณเฏเฎณเฎเฏเฎเฏเฎเฎณเฏ ar esweaty เฎฎเฏเฎดเฎเฏเฎเฎพเฎฒเฏเฎเฎณเฏ เฎชเฎฒเฎตเฏเฎฉเฎฎเฎพเฎฉ เฎเฏเฎเฎณเฏ เฎเฎฉเฎฎเฎพเฎฉ เฎ เฎฎเฏเฎฎเฎพเฎเฏเฎเฎณเฏ เฎธเฏเฎชเฎพเฎเฏเฎเฏเฎเฎฟ เฎ เฎตเฎฐเฎคเฏ bervous เฎเฎฉเฎพเฎฒเฏ เฎจเฎพเฎฉเฏ เฎ เฎตเฎฐเฏ เฎ เฎฎเฏเฎคเฎฟเฎฏเฎพเฎ เฎคเฏเฎฐเฎฟเฎเฎฟเฎฑเฎคเฏ เฎฎเฎฑเฏเฎฑเฏเฎฎเฏ เฎเฏเฎฃเฏเฎเฏเฎเฎณเฏ เฎตเฏเฎ เฎคเฎฏเฎพเฎฐเฎพเฎ เฎเฎณเฏเฎณเฎคเฏ. เฎฎเฏเฎคเฏเฎค เฎเฏเฎเฏเฎเฎฎเฏ เฎฎเฎฟเฎเฎตเฏเฎฎเฏ เฎเฎคเฏเฎคเฎฎเฎพเฎ เฎเฏเฎฒเฏเฎเฎฟเฎฑเฎคเฏ
Dropped within first 15 chapters. MC is blackmailed by a person saying he is from A terrorist grouping and will turn him in if he doesnโt follow his commands. The thing is MC is not so why would he just go along with it. An example would be a random person on the street walks up too you and says your a terrorist give me all your money or I will report you. Are you just going to give it too him? No you tell him to F off.