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The is a promising story with a lot of drama and suspense. Writer has done a good job, I just wish it was added as an additional volume to the original story instead of continuing as a separate story because you need to know all the background really to understand the story. There are numerous grammar and vocabulary mistakes and some chapters a perfect but some others ehhhhh but overall a good read.
Yes I am.. but the discontinuation of the story for a long time is leading to lack of interest in the story. Please I urge the writer to continue and complete the story
Why all the repetitions, 3 chapters were repeated consecutively, it is bad, if you dont av any other story then forget about it. Hans should stop the pretense nd talk to his wife, apologise for all the wrong doings.
Well the synopsis seems interesting but when I started reading it was quite confusing and what was happening was unclear I couldn't understand dispute reading it multiple times. It could use editing. ▶️My review is based on the 10 chapters in the beginning. Thanks for the hard work author but I won't be continuing this book I give it another shot in the future
I just started reading, it's very interesting. I think I fell in love with this story. Thanks author, I like this. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Hello Nova. Your novels are amazing. I always read your works. I enjoy your writing. This story is amazing. I like your writing style. Easy to understand. Good luck
Hello everyone. I love this novel. It's beautiful, and have a good details. The characters are also interesting. Love it [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
The story could flow more smokthly like there are these times when I don’t understand and it feels kinda rocky. I like the plot but I really hope the mc won’t go back to her ex. Some relationships just need to end and I don’t see people recognizing it enough with how we see the mc getting back together with her ex. Sure sometimes its fine but not always. He should not always be justified. What he did in the beginning is attempted marital rape. She did not want it and it hurt but he ignored it. I don’t know about her but I would not stand for it. I probably wouldv’e dumped a guy like that long back. I feel like she would be happier without him. And I want to see that. She having a new beginning for herself. His actions are not justifiable. Misunderstandings or not the damage has been done. He hurt her. And now he’s decieving her and the kid to get her back!? Its like he’s shrinking responsibility for the past. I never finished the prequal cause I wasn’t happy with the relationship so I don’t know all of how they were and the oh but he can be really nice or whatever. It does not make her treatment Okay.
woow Achiera and Hans. It must be interesting to read. The way you write this story makes the reader immersed in the atmosphere of the story. You're always awesome Nova!
it's awesome👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻...the starting is so much fun🥰🥰🥰🥰...all in all....just loved it😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
awesome ,but I hate the bullying🤢🤢😥😥😥😢😢😢 in the name of jealous . It's interesting,emotional and also teaches couple to bear patient 🙏🙏🙏🙏
The is a promising story with a lot of drama and suspense. Writer has done a good job, I just wish it was added as an additional volume to the original story instead of continuing as a separate story because you need to know all the background really to understand the story. There are numerous grammar and vocabulary mistakes and some chapters a perfect but some others ehhhhh but overall a good read.
Yes I am.. but the discontinuation of the story for a long time is leading to lack of interest in the story. Please I urge the writer to continue and complete the story
Why all the repetitions, 3 chapters were repeated consecutively, it is bad, if you dont av any other story then forget about it. Hans should stop the pretense nd talk to his wife, apologise for all the wrong doings.
Well the synopsis seems interesting but when I started reading it was quite confusing and what was happening was unclear I couldn't understand dispute reading it multiple times. It could use editing. ▶️My review is based on the 10 chapters in the beginning. Thanks for the hard work author but I won't be continuing this book I give it another shot in the future
I just started reading, it's very interesting. I think I fell in love with this story. Thanks author, I like this. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Hello Nova. Your novels are amazing. I always read your works. I enjoy your writing. This story is amazing. I like your writing style. Easy to understand. Good luck
Hello everyone. I love this novel. It's beautiful, and have a good details. The characters are also interesting. Love it [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
The story could flow more smokthly like there are these times when I don’t understand and it feels kinda rocky. I like the plot but I really hope the mc won’t go back to her ex. Some relationships just need to end and I don’t see people recognizing it enough with how we see the mc getting back together with her ex. Sure sometimes its fine but not always. He should not always be justified. What he did in the beginning is attempted marital rape. She did not want it and it hurt but he ignored it. I don’t know about her but I would not stand for it. I probably wouldv’e dumped a guy like that long back. I feel like she would be happier without him. And I want to see that. She having a new beginning for herself. His actions are not justifiable. Misunderstandings or not the damage has been done. He hurt her. And now he’s decieving her and the kid to get her back!? Its like he’s shrinking responsibility for the past. I never finished the prequal cause I wasn’t happy with the relationship so I don’t know all of how they were and the oh but he can be really nice or whatever. It does not make her treatment Okay.
woow Achiera and Hans. It must be interesting to read. The way you write this story makes the reader immersed in the atmosphere of the story. You're always awesome Nova!
it's awesome👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻...the starting is so much fun🥰🥰🥰🥰...all in all....just loved it😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
awesome ,but I hate the bullying🤢🤢😥😥😥😢😢😢 in the name of jealous . It's interesting,emotional and also teaches couple to bear patient 🙏🙏🙏🙏