Overlord Harem System

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IsekaiAnimes

just for having the idea and creating a Story, I will support you author!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Mel_Aniv

Wow, the concept was amazing! I am deeply moved by my imaginative thoughts. I hope the author will update the initial chaps as they tend to be typo-heavy chap. As the other review swappers have said. Start your paragraphs with capital letters and end with periods or commas, question marks or exclamation. Comma if an active convo or period if it was the end of convo. Don't forget to also put (") quotation marks in the dialogues. Typos needed to be edited as soon as possible. 😉 Good luck with the spirity contest! I hope to see yours there!

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IsekaiAnimes

Thanks for the chapters~~! Very good Author. Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood Cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

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jaktennison

This story development is quite good for novice writer If he can write like he is doing and improve it little bit it might become bit better what it is. Anyway It's just starting who knows it might come better with time.

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TianaWrites

I just started the ride and I must say that I am loving it honestly.

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AStrAl_Soul

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Kamijou_kaito

don't!!!!! stop!!!!! releasing!!!!! because!!!! it's!!!!! good!!!!![[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

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Kamijou_kaito

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Akash_Ahmad_9398

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A_Stevenson

All characters other than mc stolen from anime/manga, story is a compilation of po*n system novel on this site and some other cliche system concepts. On top of that, the english is severely broken. Should probably use grammar checker instead of just google translate. To summerize: practically no effort or originality involved.

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Kamijou_kaito

keep up the good work author and don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

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LawWillOblivionK

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ghjgyugf

the story was interesting, I loved the MC the fun was accurately poured into the story but there were grammatical and punctuation errors which I guess author has improved in further chapters Great work author

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heyitsmejovi

This novel is well written! The author creative ideas is excellent! Intersting synopsis and also exciting. Looking forward for more nice chapters, author!

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Proteety_Promi

The topic is totally unique. We don't usually find stories like this. But it's good and entertaining. Good luck, author! Keep up the good work!

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Cold_Ai

I don't know how to write a review, but here's a 5 star.🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪

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Draigofenixe

La novela va muy bien, sigue ala MC paso a paso , no es completamente OP pero sigue entrenando y se gana sus relaciones lentamente, al menos no piensa con la cabeza de abajo todo el tiempo, en fin una interesante novela.

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mrant12

Love the writing skill behind this book. Fantastic world building and description of events! Not something I met everyday. Job well done, fellow author!

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Bunny_Junnie

This is going to be a nice story! Some little tips: You should start your every paragraphs with capital letter. You should mark your every dialogues with "this" punctuation. I found no other mistakes and I feel great while reading it! Keep it up dear author! I cheer you!

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Abysalyounglord

I have already uploaded this work in fanfic section and future updates will be there so go below and click on 'Harem Overlord System(Re-written)". Thank for the support...