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I tried and I mean i honestly tried to like this...but I cant to edgy to cringy no one talks like this no matter how fake you may say this story is its not possible.
Very Good Adventure, had fun reading although it was more comedy than anything else it was exactly why i liked the story, because it was comedy based on a good story
I wouldn't give this one such a low score if not for the sheer amount of edgy jokes. I didn't read further than chapter 7 because i don't think author leveld up in his writing skills. Like, half of the chapters are meme references, black man white man jokes, and the main character's idiotic thought process.
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Its da best ..................................................................................................................................................
your fic is one of the few that I have read to the end so I want to say thank you for this beautiful story I like the ultimate skill in the end
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It was honestly a fun read. It was a typical op self insert fantasy that was really fun to follow along. Great stuff Much wow
Uhm, yeah, that was great... it really is... uhmmm... yeah...I really dont know what to say...uhmm yeahh... But honestly, it was fun, I was able to 'kick out some of my stress' and some sh***y people pestering my mind...š
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Yeah it is good, I read it till its end and I can say that this entertained me more than Chinese novels. Also imma put this here ā¦. . . . . .
I am gonna miss this book I first read it when its still 12 chaps. And wow... never thought I would see the end of this novel. btw thanks for the comedy, it always make me laugh although I hate the ecchi scenes. oh and the jeffs too. I almost forgot abuot the jeffs.
I'm sad that it's over, it was a great story in my opinion I wish you would of continued instead of summarizing a lot in the end but its still great and a very enjoyable fic to read I hope you have a good day and start writing another book soon my friend.
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yo qick question is this harem? plz say no, harem is disgusting, dont know why mc always say stuff like "your the only one" then he gose and says same to some one else?!! so what you said is a lie?? anyways if this is a harem plz tell me so I dont waste my time.
Crack fic? Yes. Comedic? Mostly. Is it genius? ABSOLUTELY. So it turns out you need a hundred and forty characters and spaces don't count on mobile soo yeah...
I really enjoy this crackfic. The short summary of this fic is the MC is somewhat a relatable procrastinator but he has his moment. He jokes around a lot in this new life of his but can still be respectable and serious in the right situation. I really want something like "Procrastinator Diary" or something that shows his daily life outside of the plot but I shouldn't get my hopes up.
Who is the romantic interest of the mc in this novel?....................................................................................................:................
if you have already watched TTIGRAS then dont read it because its same no difference only difference is mc forced comedy and teenage romance of mc and fml, well if you nothing to read then it is readable.
guess who's back, back again. My bruda I knoe de wae of de tensura fanfik, Ive been restricted from commenting for the past couple months and I ain't think reading without enjoying the comments would make the story as enjoyable so I stopped and now I'm back, for the rating tho, its a 4.9... as much as I don't like when people complain "oh story is a harem must be trash" and then completely attack a story I gotta say that the non harem got me sad, if mikoto was main girl and it was a harem that the boy still loved like arifureta, this would be comparable to my favorite novels
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I love this novel but the dude kills me with cliffhangers [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
idgas idgaf of it's tensura and it's getting this far I'm giving you all my stones I haven't even read this yet and I'm already interested because of my addiction to the world + #noharem bro I'm in
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overall this fanfic is not really the interesting. hundred chapters in this meatbun joke is getting old. its so generic im sure if i go any further im going to fall asleep. this fic is amazing as a bedtime story to get kids sleeping actually. next up the tone of the story feels really forced at times, overall this story really is just nothing special a complete waste of my time. it feels like all the jokes were written by preschoolers. so repetitive you would think fortnite kids came up with. since this is a crackfic jokes basically make or break the story. and the jokes here dont just ruin but demolish the story, and it def does not help that most of these jokes get overused the entire story. meat bun/susuga____/etc. if you think there is a single funny joke in this story you would be dead wrong. most of them are references since author has no originality. speaking of originality in this fanfic there is really none to speak of. mc just follows cannon and flaunts cannon info like a retard. also women hit men funny haha right guys???. TLDR: haha meatfun funny right? hhahaah meatbun why are you guys not laughing? isnt funny that i use this joke over and over? dont worry im sure by the 1000th time i add more meatbun jokes to the story you will laugh!
I tried and I mean i honestly tried to like this...but I cant to edgy to cringy no one talks like this no matter how fake you may say this story is its not possible.
Very Good Adventure, had fun reading although it was more comedy than anything else it was exactly why i liked the story, because it was comedy based on a good story
I wouldn't give this one such a low score if not for the sheer amount of edgy jokes. I didn't read further than chapter 7 because i don't think author leveld up in his writing skills. Like, half of the chapters are meme references, black man white man jokes, and the main character's idiotic thought process.
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Its da best ..................................................................................................................................................
your fic is one of the few that I have read to the end so I want to say thank you for this beautiful story I like the ultimate skill in the end
Reveal Spoiler It was honestly a fun read. It was a typical op self insert fantasy that was really fun to follow along. Great stuff Much wow
Uhm, yeah, that was great... it really is... uhmmm... yeah...I really dont know what to say...uhmm yeahh... But honestly, it was fun, I was able to 'kick out some of my stress' and some sh***y people pestering my mind...š
How come this has such a good rating even if almost all Top Reviewsare unde 4 star at least ??????? š¤¢š¤®š¤¢š¤®š¤¢š¤®š¤®š¤¢š¤®š¤®š¤š¤®š¤¢š¤®š¤š¤®š¤¢š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤®š¤š¤®š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤š¤®š¤®š¤š¤®šØ
Yeah it is good, I read it till its end and I can say that this entertained me more than Chinese novels. Also imma put this here ā¦. . . . . .
I am gonna miss this book I first read it when its still 12 chaps. And wow... never thought I would see the end of this novel. btw thanks for the comedy, it always make me laugh although I hate the ecchi scenes. oh and the jeffs too. I almost forgot abuot the jeffs.
I'm sad that it's over, it was a great story in my opinion I wish you would of continued instead of summarizing a lot in the end but its still great and a very enjoyable fic to read I hope you have a good day and start writing another book soon my friend.
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GIVE ME ALL YOURT ENERGY AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
yo qick question is this harem? plz say no, harem is disgusting, dont know why mc always say stuff like "your the only one" then he gose and says same to some one else?!! so what you said is a lie?? anyways if this is a harem plz tell me so I dont waste my time.
Crack fic? Yes. Comedic? Mostly. Is it genius? ABSOLUTELY. So it turns out you need a hundred and forty characters and spaces don't count on mobile soo yeah...
I really enjoy this crackfic. The short summary of this fic is the MC is somewhat a relatable procrastinator but he has his moment. He jokes around a lot in this new life of his but can still be respectable and serious in the right situation. I really want something like "Procrastinator Diary" or something that shows his daily life outside of the plot but I shouldn't get my hopes up.
Who is the romantic interest of the mc in this novel?....................................................................................................:................
if you have already watched TTIGRAS then dont read it because its same no difference only difference is mc forced comedy and teenage romance of mc and fml, well if you nothing to read then it is readable.
guess who's back, back again. My bruda I knoe de wae of de tensura fanfik, Ive been restricted from commenting for the past couple months and I ain't think reading without enjoying the comments would make the story as enjoyable so I stopped and now I'm back, for the rating tho, its a 4.9... as much as I don't like when people complain "oh story is a harem must be trash" and then completely attack a story I gotta say that the non harem got me sad, if mikoto was main girl and it was a harem that the boy still loved like arifureta, this would be comparable to my favorite novels
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I love this novel but the dude kills me with cliffhangers [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
idgas idgaf of it's tensura and it's getting this far I'm giving you all my stones I haven't even read this yet and I'm already interested because of my addiction to the world + #noharem bro I'm in
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overall this fanfic is not really the interesting. hundred chapters in this meatbun joke is getting old. its so generic im sure if i go any further im going to fall asleep. this fic is amazing as a bedtime story to get kids sleeping actually. next up the tone of the story feels really forced at times, overall this story really is just nothing special a complete waste of my time. it feels like all the jokes were written by preschoolers. so repetitive you would think fortnite kids came up with. since this is a crackfic jokes basically make or break the story. and the jokes here dont just ruin but demolish the story, and it def does not help that most of these jokes get overused the entire story. meat bun/susuga____/etc. if you think there is a single funny joke in this story you would be dead wrong. most of them are references since author has no originality. speaking of originality in this fanfic there is really none to speak of. mc just follows cannon and flaunts cannon info like a retard. also women hit men funny haha right guys???. TLDR: haha meatfun funny right? hhahaah meatbun why are you guys not laughing? isnt funny that i use this joke over and over? dont worry im sure by the 1000th time i add more meatbun jokes to the story you will laugh!