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I really really enjoy this book! It's different in that the FL and original ML do NOT get back together! The family interactions are so cute and heart warming. I'd like more stories like this!
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I love this book❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
this is the first book I read where the abusive ml did not get the fl BUT if u make the book to end to that, this book have lost its uniqueness
A good sample of Contemporary Romance. There are some minor grammar failures but writing an emotional story like this in English is the hardest one. Congratulations to the author.
The title right up from the start was intriguing. And let me say, every chapter written never failed to amuse me. It was very well written, words and events happening on the story was well described as well. Though a few touch ups from here and there but over all, the book shows potential![img=recommend]
A work of art. The graphic descriptions used by the author made this work picturesque. Very vivid. We were given a heads up about the work, even though it's already good. When it's retouched it'll be a thousand times better. Good job author.
I LOVE THE TITLE! This is such a captivating story. Each chapter makes you want to read more. The quality is excellent and the words flow beautifully. Credits to the author for having such a natural talent for writing. Highly recommended [img=recommend]
A beautiful and powerful beginning. One of the things I liked about it is that the synopsis carried the plot and the author owned it well. Beautiful Introduction to our protagonists and a tremendous job on the overall available chapters.
I love how the story from the beginning was suspense filled... Jasmine is a strong lady...your story is a whispering encouragement to people having a tough time "pick your dreams back up*
Wow, this is amazing. The author really know how to draw a reader in the novel with her words. The description of scenes, characters, events and emotions are so beautifully crafted that it keeps one hook. Every turning page just keeps you wanting for more. Good job author.
This book is wonderful, the descriptive writing makes it njoyable to read and imagine, the characters are well defined, (I want big brothers in my life too =_="), the plot is nicely written. Good job author.
This story if full of feelings... and you really want to know how Jasmine will actually find the strength to face the man who harassed her until she wanted to die. I loved it.
How should I describe this? When I read the first chapter, I could felt the character's emotion . Her despairs and her cries touched me deeply. You can imagined the hard life she had going through. The story is intriguing. I recommended this book. Good job, author.
The description is on point. I have to say that the synopsis really pulled me in. I haven't regretted what I've read so far. The writer has a unique way of drawing you in a with her words. So much that I feel the female lead's pain. 👍
Hello Humeyra! I've read the 1st Chapter and two thumbs up for you![img=recommend] It was such a good opening for the story, the first part was quite heavy of course because it was about suicide but as the narration goes it became lighter and warmer. The story was intriguing, because imagining how Jasmine was living her life in the present versus imagining how she used to be in the past was a total opposite sides. I love the way you narrate your story, the flow of your narration was smooth and easy to understand. And as what you have said, this story was not yet edited so it's understandable that some sentence didn't start with a capital letters. all in all it was a great chapter to start the story and to catch the attention of the readers. Keep up the good work! Looking forward for the next chapters.
This is quite a lovely story where I can feel the emotions of the main character slowing through the time she spends with the different situations and with the different people she is with, It really warmed my heart with the very first chapter.
It was suicidal and good, and just the right amount of drama and heartbreak to make the readers feel. such a wonderful story! I loved it, really!
Amazing I really like the characters names, Your words are so good, and the idea is really amazing, A great book and an amazing author, keep the good work.
the novel just keeps getting fascinating and engaging, I love the concept of the novel! it's very very well written. The author always has my heart! Keep up the good work, author!
Reading from the synopsis I can tell that this book is female lead character...great synopsis! I can already divulge in the book and can imagine what that girl been through....loved it...it's gonna be very interesting reading...good work author and best of luck
This novel is amazing and it is definitely worth a read! I read the synopsis and it was soooo intriguing that I couldn't control but read and read on! Absolutely great work author! Keep writing!
This story is really great and interesting! I absolutely loved the way the whole thing flows, the storyline is beautiful and the plot is great, the characters are lovely!
The story is promising. It gives you a homologous feeling of warmth along with a coinciding bitter feeling of lost trust or betrayal. I like the FL's character, her viewpoint and her development. The chapters are not much, but it gives you a story of self-love and recovery. For someone with only fictional crushes, I sometimes wonder what "true-love" feels like. Overall, it is a good read and I would recommend it much!!
I read only a few chapters and that was enough for me to fall in love with this novel. It is interesting, wonderful and beautifully written novel. I can see how much effort the writer put into this lovely novel.
I honestly loved everything about this story, it had heart and soul and when you read it you will feel quite a mix of emotions due to the struggles and excitements within the story. I loved it a lot, good job author👍.
This is amazing and I love everything about this book but all I have to say is that the word choice is good but it is overly used but I am sure that this book will be the most successful one on WebNovel. I really love fantasy Novels and this is one of my most favorite. Love everything that this contains, I hope you win the spirity awards!!
Hello my dearest readers and viewers. Author over here shamelessly giving myself a five star. This book was inspired by a close friend's university experience with her first love. it's got a mix of romance, regret, betrayal and simply learning to live after a terrible experience. Whenever I hear someone say that they dont believe in real love, i feel that those words come from deep inside. Either the person had an ugly experience or someone close to them had something similar. Love is a beautiful thing but the most beautiful version of love is loving oneself before loving another. your reviews, comments and votes are my motivation. Help me through this journey by your gracious encouragement. Thank you in advance and hope you will enjoy this book.
i like this story very much as it has something i want in every book that is strong girl but i hope that end up with someone whio deserve her
I really really enjoy this book! It's different in that the FL and original ML do NOT get back together! The family interactions are so cute and heart warming. I'd like more stories like this!
Reveal Spoiler I love this book❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
this is the first book I read where the abusive ml did not get the fl BUT if u make the book to end to that, this book have lost its uniqueness
A good sample of Contemporary Romance. There are some minor grammar failures but writing an emotional story like this in English is the hardest one. Congratulations to the author.
The title right up from the start was intriguing. And let me say, every chapter written never failed to amuse me. It was very well written, words and events happening on the story was well described as well. Though a few touch ups from here and there but over all, the book shows potential![img=recommend]
A work of art. The graphic descriptions used by the author made this work picturesque. Very vivid. We were given a heads up about the work, even though it's already good. When it's retouched it'll be a thousand times better. Good job author.
I LOVE THE TITLE! This is such a captivating story. Each chapter makes you want to read more. The quality is excellent and the words flow beautifully. Credits to the author for having such a natural talent for writing. Highly recommended [img=recommend]
A beautiful and powerful beginning. One of the things I liked about it is that the synopsis carried the plot and the author owned it well. Beautiful Introduction to our protagonists and a tremendous job on the overall available chapters.
I love how the story from the beginning was suspense filled... Jasmine is a strong lady...your story is a whispering encouragement to people having a tough time "pick your dreams back up*
Wow, this is amazing. The author really know how to draw a reader in the novel with her words. The description of scenes, characters, events and emotions are so beautifully crafted that it keeps one hook. Every turning page just keeps you wanting for more. Good job author.
This book is wonderful, the descriptive writing makes it njoyable to read and imagine, the characters are well defined, (I want big brothers in my life too =_="), the plot is nicely written. Good job author.
This story if full of feelings... and you really want to know how Jasmine will actually find the strength to face the man who harassed her until she wanted to die. I loved it.
How should I describe this? When I read the first chapter, I could felt the character's emotion . Her despairs and her cries touched me deeply. You can imagined the hard life she had going through. The story is intriguing. I recommended this book. Good job, author.
The description is on point. I have to say that the synopsis really pulled me in. I haven't regretted what I've read so far. The writer has a unique way of drawing you in a with her words. So much that I feel the female lead's pain. 👍
Hello Humeyra! I've read the 1st Chapter and two thumbs up for you![img=recommend] It was such a good opening for the story, the first part was quite heavy of course because it was about suicide but as the narration goes it became lighter and warmer. The story was intriguing, because imagining how Jasmine was living her life in the present versus imagining how she used to be in the past was a total opposite sides. I love the way you narrate your story, the flow of your narration was smooth and easy to understand. And as what you have said, this story was not yet edited so it's understandable that some sentence didn't start with a capital letters. all in all it was a great chapter to start the story and to catch the attention of the readers. Keep up the good work! Looking forward for the next chapters.
This is quite a lovely story where I can feel the emotions of the main character slowing through the time she spends with the different situations and with the different people she is with, It really warmed my heart with the very first chapter.
It was suicidal and good, and just the right amount of drama and heartbreak to make the readers feel. such a wonderful story! I loved it, really!
Amazing I really like the characters names, Your words are so good, and the idea is really amazing, A great book and an amazing author, keep the good work.
the novel just keeps getting fascinating and engaging, I love the concept of the novel! it's very very well written. The author always has my heart! Keep up the good work, author!
Reading from the synopsis I can tell that this book is female lead character...great synopsis! I can already divulge in the book and can imagine what that girl been through....loved it...it's gonna be very interesting reading...good work author and best of luck
This novel is amazing and it is definitely worth a read! I read the synopsis and it was soooo intriguing that I couldn't control but read and read on! Absolutely great work author! Keep writing!
This story is really great and interesting! I absolutely loved the way the whole thing flows, the storyline is beautiful and the plot is great, the characters are lovely!
The story is promising. It gives you a homologous feeling of warmth along with a coinciding bitter feeling of lost trust or betrayal. I like the FL's character, her viewpoint and her development. The chapters are not much, but it gives you a story of self-love and recovery. For someone with only fictional crushes, I sometimes wonder what "true-love" feels like. Overall, it is a good read and I would recommend it much!!
I read only a few chapters and that was enough for me to fall in love with this novel. It is interesting, wonderful and beautifully written novel. I can see how much effort the writer put into this lovely novel.
I honestly loved everything about this story, it had heart and soul and when you read it you will feel quite a mix of emotions due to the struggles and excitements within the story. I loved it a lot, good job author👍.
This is amazing and I love everything about this book but all I have to say is that the word choice is good but it is overly used but I am sure that this book will be the most successful one on WebNovel. I really love fantasy Novels and this is one of my most favorite. Love everything that this contains, I hope you win the spirity awards!!
Hello my dearest readers and viewers. Author over here shamelessly giving myself a five star. This book was inspired by a close friend's university experience with her first love. it's got a mix of romance, regret, betrayal and simply learning to live after a terrible experience. Whenever I hear someone say that they dont believe in real love, i feel that those words come from deep inside. Either the person had an ugly experience or someone close to them had something similar. Love is a beautiful thing but the most beautiful version of love is loving oneself before loving another. your reviews, comments and votes are my motivation. Help me through this journey by your gracious encouragement. Thank you in advance and hope you will enjoy this book.
i like this story very much as it has something i want in every book that is strong girl but i hope that end up with someone whio deserve her