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overall I give this story a 8/10 only because there were a few places where you didn't exactly use the right wording, but nobody is perfect. also the world background needed just a little bit more...... take from that what you will. I really don't know how else to put it. if not for those 2 reasons I would have given a 10/10. so congratulations on impressing me.
Boyz I believe the FBI got him, an we are next. Nobody panic...... ..........,..............................................................Lov your work.
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Amazing keep up the great work ...........................................................................................................ZA WARDO
Não sabia que dava para avaliar duas vezes. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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As my man giguk once said; '' must resist the hmmmggghhh " That is all I have to say. ......................................................
muy buena entretenida buena ortografia un cap por dia minimo por ahora linea de tiempo seguida sin confusion los personajes ban a la imaginacion de lector y es bueno falta explicar mas del mundo (contienes? reinos cercanos o fuertes? cuantro es la media de años de vida?etc)
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This is quite good, definitely! ㅤ Just need some improvement in the writing quality. ㅤ Note (for those peasants from police or its equivalents organizations) : SCRAM!!
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It's so good, but too bad you stopped.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------😞😞😞😞😞😞😞
overall I give this story a 8/10 only because there were a few places where you didn't exactly use the right wording, but nobody is perfect. also the world background needed just a little bit more...... take from that what you will. I really don't know how else to put it. if not for those 2 reasons I would have given a 10/10. so congratulations on impressing me.
Boyz I believe the FBI got him, an we are next. Nobody panic...... ..........,..............................................................Lov your work.
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Amazing keep up the great work ...........................................................................................................ZA WARDO
Não sabia que dava para avaliar duas vezes. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Reveal Spoiler As my man giguk once said; '' must resist the hmmmggghhh " That is all I have to say. ......................................................
muy buena entretenida buena ortografia un cap por dia minimo por ahora linea de tiempo seguida sin confusion los personajes ban a la imaginacion de lector y es bueno falta explicar mas del mundo (contienes? reinos cercanos o fuertes? cuantro es la media de años de vida?etc)
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This is quite good, definitely! ㅤ Just need some improvement in the writing quality. ㅤ Note (for those peasants from police or its equivalents organizations) : SCRAM!!
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It's so good, but too bad you stopped.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------😞😞😞😞😞😞😞