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An interesting story that had good potential. Unfortunately it seems to have been dropped? Writing quality is good. I'd like you to point out are millions of years seems excessive. Thousands would make more sense.
I love this webnovel! I Invayne is one of my top five authors on the site and never disappoints with their characters. I really hope they pick this back up and continue Yue's story.
to be honest this is not a review i just want to know if this novel is dropped. But still i can just recommend this novel to everyone who like adventure and magic novels.
A great Novel worth reading. The character design is great. The characters have unique emotions and backrounds which make the characters feel alive. The world has a lot of potential and what we have seen so far is really good. The Story itself moves at a comfortable speed and ,as far as the story is right now, without plotholes. Really good Novel. Really enjoy reading it. Chapters have a good size. Keep up the good work! :D
I love the combination of kingdombuilding and fantasy. I am exited to read more, and with how Invayne updates everyday, I can always have my perfect daily-dose of this exact well balanced mix. As long as this keeps going, I will be happy everyday. Thank you for this nice novel Invayne, and keep up the great work [img=update][img=recommend]
Shameless review from an invayne fan 😜 so far this book is fantastic and Invaynes writing is some of the best you will find on this platform you should read all of their books not just this one
Beautiful descriptions, amazing pacing, and a funny and charasmatic main character. Amazing read and ready to see where the story progresses.
this story is so underappreciated,there so much cuteness here and the FL is so strong not only that after having the system god dang is she op now
i will say so far i am enjoying this relling of yue its alot better than before in my opinion very intriguing. thank you very much. also love how your giving us protagonists we dont get very often.
Shameless author review time! Read it! I swear you will like it! And if you don't, I will sit on a rock! Joking aside give it a read. It has action, romance, face slapping, magic, and lots lots more!
An interesting story that had good potential. Unfortunately it seems to have been dropped? Writing quality is good. I'd like you to point out are millions of years seems excessive. Thousands would make more sense.
I love this webnovel! I Invayne is one of my top five authors on the site and never disappoints with their characters. I really hope they pick this back up and continue Yue's story.
to be honest this is not a review i just want to know if this novel is dropped. But still i can just recommend this novel to everyone who like adventure and magic novels.
A great Novel worth reading. The character design is great. The characters have unique emotions and backrounds which make the characters feel alive. The world has a lot of potential and what we have seen so far is really good. The Story itself moves at a comfortable speed and ,as far as the story is right now, without plotholes. Really good Novel. Really enjoy reading it. Chapters have a good size. Keep up the good work! :D
I love the combination of kingdombuilding and fantasy. I am exited to read more, and with how Invayne updates everyday, I can always have my perfect daily-dose of this exact well balanced mix. As long as this keeps going, I will be happy everyday. Thank you for this nice novel Invayne, and keep up the great work [img=update][img=recommend]
Shameless review from an invayne fan 😜 so far this book is fantastic and Invaynes writing is some of the best you will find on this platform you should read all of their books not just this one
Beautiful descriptions, amazing pacing, and a funny and charasmatic main character. Amazing read and ready to see where the story progresses.
this story is so underappreciated,there so much cuteness here and the FL is so strong not only that after having the system god dang is she op now
i will say so far i am enjoying this relling of yue its alot better than before in my opinion very intriguing. thank you very much. also love how your giving us protagonists we dont get very often.
Shameless author review time! Read it! I swear you will like it! And if you don't, I will sit on a rock! Joking aside give it a read. It has action, romance, face slapping, magic, and lots lots more!