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This story is really well crafted and written. The pacing is superb and the quality of the story is top class throughout. Keep up the good work!
Hey, shameless author review here I really hope that you like my work, I will be uploading at least 3/4 times per week. I hope you all like how my story is progressing; I have a lot planned ahead and I can’t wait to see all your reactions. Thank you everyone for the continued support, I feel so honoured to be able to receive such positive feedback from everyone :)
Ivy is a very protagonist I am willing to follow in her story. I am already hooked to see how the author unfolds the future events with her. The chapters are few therefore I hope to see more chapters released as soon as possible to satisfy my craving for a beautiful story.....
So, this novel's undoubtedly top-tier. Some paragraphs look a bit long and scary, but they're all extremely well-crafted and you can definitely see the work and effort put into them. I kinda expected the quality to drop a bit after the first two chaps, as most authors go super saiyan at first then chill out for the ensuing chaps, but not here. Pick any paragraph and the quality stays same. I especially loved the part where Cyris' mother is described. Very uwu. Story telling will prob need a few chaps more to become clear, but so far, things are really good. The characters are awesome and the world background is gripping. Hope you continue this story and good luck!
This is a real high quality work of fiction. The pacing is terrific, grabbing the reader right from the very beginning with some non-linear storytelling to put the reader right in the middle of the action and then going back to bring them up to speed on the backstory later. And from there, the story moves at a great pace with each progressing chapter developing the story nicely. Excellent world building has me fascinated in the strange new realm the protagonist finds herself in. And the cast of characters is very strong. Both the male and female leads seem like two complex individuals with multiple layers to unravel. The male lead is especially interesting how he can be kind and friendly to the protagonist but then turn totally ruthless against the peacekeeper forces attacking his people. And I am eager to see where the story goes after the male lead has seen his mother slaughtered and his home town under attack from the mysterious masked peacekeepers. Excellent start to the story. Strongly recommended!
Let me praise the author's hard work for her craft. It was so mesmerizing when I will compare my work to her. I am even ashamed to let her see my work 😂. Goodwill and prosperity to your craft and may you achieve its perfection someday. Kudos and Peace ✌️
Nice beginning! Feels like an apocalyptic world, haven't read one of those on Webnovel, that too with a romance! Excited to see more about how Ivy explores the new world! Good job till so far!
Wow. From the first paragraph, I noticed the writing style was really good! There were errors here and there, but other than that this story is really interesting and the writing prose is really good! Keep up the good work, author!
It's always so intresting, seeing first person books. You, don't see them much in this enviroment of writing, so finding one is always a breath of fresh air. I'm curious to see where you go with this, as first person books have different challenges to Third person. Let's see what you've got.
What an amazing read. I see a lot of potential. Please, keep up the good work. I hope you release everyday because I can't wait for the next chapter. [img=recommend]
Awesome start for a book, just few chapters in and I'm already very immersed in the story. I hope you could continue updating this wonderful novel. good luck
This story is really well crafted and written. The pacing is superb and the quality of the story is top class throughout. Keep up the good work!
Hey, shameless author review here I really hope that you like my work, I will be uploading at least 3/4 times per week. I hope you all like how my story is progressing; I have a lot planned ahead and I can’t wait to see all your reactions. Thank you everyone for the continued support, I feel so honoured to be able to receive such positive feedback from everyone :)
Ivy is a very protagonist I am willing to follow in her story. I am already hooked to see how the author unfolds the future events with her. The chapters are few therefore I hope to see more chapters released as soon as possible to satisfy my craving for a beautiful story.....
So, this novel's undoubtedly top-tier. Some paragraphs look a bit long and scary, but they're all extremely well-crafted and you can definitely see the work and effort put into them. I kinda expected the quality to drop a bit after the first two chaps, as most authors go super saiyan at first then chill out for the ensuing chaps, but not here. Pick any paragraph and the quality stays same. I especially loved the part where Cyris' mother is described. Very uwu. Story telling will prob need a few chaps more to become clear, but so far, things are really good. The characters are awesome and the world background is gripping. Hope you continue this story and good luck!
This is a real high quality work of fiction. The pacing is terrific, grabbing the reader right from the very beginning with some non-linear storytelling to put the reader right in the middle of the action and then going back to bring them up to speed on the backstory later. And from there, the story moves at a great pace with each progressing chapter developing the story nicely. Excellent world building has me fascinated in the strange new realm the protagonist finds herself in. And the cast of characters is very strong. Both the male and female leads seem like two complex individuals with multiple layers to unravel. The male lead is especially interesting how he can be kind and friendly to the protagonist but then turn totally ruthless against the peacekeeper forces attacking his people. And I am eager to see where the story goes after the male lead has seen his mother slaughtered and his home town under attack from the mysterious masked peacekeepers. Excellent start to the story. Strongly recommended!
Let me praise the author's hard work for her craft. It was so mesmerizing when I will compare my work to her. I am even ashamed to let her see my work 😂. Goodwill and prosperity to your craft and may you achieve its perfection someday. Kudos and Peace ✌️
Nice beginning! Feels like an apocalyptic world, haven't read one of those on Webnovel, that too with a romance! Excited to see more about how Ivy explores the new world! Good job till so far!
Wow. From the first paragraph, I noticed the writing style was really good! There were errors here and there, but other than that this story is really interesting and the writing prose is really good! Keep up the good work, author!
It's always so intresting, seeing first person books. You, don't see them much in this enviroment of writing, so finding one is always a breath of fresh air. I'm curious to see where you go with this, as first person books have different challenges to Third person. Let's see what you've got.
What an amazing read. I see a lot of potential. Please, keep up the good work. I hope you release everyday because I can't wait for the next chapter. [img=recommend]
Awesome start for a book, just few chapters in and I'm already very immersed in the story. I hope you could continue updating this wonderful novel. good luck