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Write a reviewI could read a few chapters. So simple story telling method. I like it. Character designing is great. Story development is so good. I think, you can make a great fiction. I wish you all the best.
What a beautiful and innocent love story, like an early morning dew drop clinging to the grass. Style of writing is just beautiful and gentle and shows the love with which the author has created her characters, who btw are intriguing to say the least. Grammar- I did not see any error, very clean. Story pacing is great and aligns with the mood of the story. Great job, author. I hope you do really well in the spirity and I look forward to reading more of this.
This is an intriguing story. I like the opening a lot; it’s got building drama instead of that ‘in your face’ opening you see on here often. I LOVE all things Fae, so I’m interested to see where this goes. I did see a few past and tense mixups, and a few sentence structure errors, but the story easily overwhelms them. Keep up the good work author!❤️
The plot of the story feels very fluff-I think that's what they call it, and has a great character development (although I have not read enough chapters to see it, I expect that the author creatively shapes the character throughout the succeeding story lines. The only thing that I'd like to point at is the [FLASHBACK] and [END OF FLASHBACK SCENE]. I understand the author's point, however, it would be better if the scenes naturally flow in the dialogues or the way that the novel describes these past memories. Once you can apply this, I think the novel will be more outstanding and concrete. Other than that, I really like the romance plot of this story! Kudos for the author!
Mmm, a really good slow-burn romance novel with incredibly detailed characters and superb dialogue. The novel does a very, very, very good job at extracting your emotions out of you. This novel has a ton of gravitas, and must be savored appropriately. Great work, author! Definitely keep going!
Unique style... I'd say the author tells this love story as if she's holding a dandelion... Yeah, got it? A dandelion! I mean, the feelings are the star of this novel, and they are about to explode in the wind, and at the same time, everything is so light, so delicate! It's a very intriguing story, I'm sure you will love it because perhaps not because of the theme, but the experience of how the writer tells it. Add to it the mysterious spirits and gods, and you have the recipe for this promising and hauntingly beautiful romance. Good luck, author!
This is a relaxing read! The characters feel very realistic, mainly in their interactions with one another--this is mainly true for me when talking about Sora, who I've definitely seen others who act like that. Something I found myself interested in was the world, such as the restaurant in the sky--as scary as it sounds, it is fascinating. Unique settings like that help give this romance story a spot of its own in the library of any avid romance reader--so give it a shot!
The story is quite unique. 🤗 Its so easy to get invested into it. I am so excited to know the twists, the why's. 💛 Storyline is good. Characters are designed well. Author knows how to end a chapter well with impactful scenes/statements. Areas for improvement, there are instances of tense switch between past and present (Im also guilty of this). Also, very subtly, there are instances of POV change in the narration, to 1st POV from third. Just choose one, and be careful of the switches. 🙂 Overall, it is a novel that truly offers something new to the platform. I'm thrilled. Keep on writing, author. All the best.
I really am very picky reader and I can't get interested in novels which people fi d amazing but take my advice and read this one you're going to be a big fan of it
Every romance author has my love, my summer dreams may come true here, kidding aside. Your writing is very concise and your perspective of the world is amazing, your characters are charismatic and beautiful, you have everything to achieve success.
Overall, it's an engaging story. The tenses are a bit mixed up, but that does not take away from the overall understanding of the story. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Try it, It just might be your cup of tea.
Thank you author for the spring breeze that wiped away the darkness that resided from my heart, I read a lot of heavy novels and I read this and felt a breather. This story is a must-read. Thank you miss author for your shameless review, but I allow it, It's kawaii. Enough of my rambling, I recommend this book if you want a leisurely reading time. Keep up the good work author! Kudos to you! Here's a hug from me.
This right here is a true original. ♥ ♥ This book definitely has potential. I'm a fan of mysticisms so it's little wonder this one peaked my interest. Dear author thank you for this book. 😍😍The plot is refreshing, and fresh enough to leave an impact. Definitely staying in my library [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp] Love the story. The plot is absolutely unique. I got more than I signed up for. I am hooked and holding on for the ride.
...this novel is a must-read. the storyline is fresh and i’ve never heard of anything like it. i hope the gods have wonderful plans for dandy and the rest of characters, as they grow in the story. very good job, miss writer!
Overall, it's an engaging story. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. ❤❤ I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.
And here I thought it will be bland but I am impressed! I saw nicely done third-person narration and it was a good choice! I am very immersed in the dialogues and the characters were lifelike and realistic. It was easy to be attached to them as I read them. The plot was outstanding and was cut above the rest! The pacing was neither slow nor fast. It was just right. I can easily see its success in the future! All in all, I am sure this novel will become great someday. Even on tv screens if picked by Tencent! 😉
This is good writing, though there are few problems, it can be solved. you could understand the tone of the story from the very first chapter. The characters all looked quite distinctive, I reckon you could make them even more individualist. it's a good book. I've read three chapter and will be reading the rest later,
Just the right amount of creativity!!! Such a unique yet adorable character. This novel is exactly the one I am looking forward to reading. I hope the author will write as many chapters as she can.... Good luck, Author!!!
Read this book if you like: Compelling characters, whimsical stories, and tales that have great insight into human emotions. Atmospheric, magical, and riveting. Read it now!
if you're interested in nature and fantasy and some cool Japanese mythology, this book is just the right one for you... i don't think I've ever encountered a flower girl this cute [img=recommend] so start reading now!
I really love her~ Can I take Dandy home? She's so cute and precious~ I can see her like a small child~ Like Thumbelina~ Please don't bully my baby Dandy~
Why!! Why do you take me into a rollercoaster of emotion? please don't do that... my heart cannot take it.. T_T I'll be waiting for the next ride (update~)
Shameless Review from me~ I just want to thank everyone who dropped by and read this story. Your reviews mean so much. Really~ Anyway, This novel was so supposed to be super light light hearted. Not too much on the killings and such. Its like a breathing ground from reading all of the heavy stories out there... that's the purpose of this novel...and I hope that it just did the job.. Im very much welcome to constructive criticism. but please be a little gentle as my heart cannot take too much... anyway Im rambling too much here.... Hope you'd stay until the end of the novel... Sankyu ~ Ja matta~
I could read a few chapters. So simple story telling method. I like it. Character designing is great. Story development is so good. I think, you can make a great fiction. I wish you all the best.
What a beautiful and innocent love story, like an early morning dew drop clinging to the grass. Style of writing is just beautiful and gentle and shows the love with which the author has created her characters, who btw are intriguing to say the least. Grammar- I did not see any error, very clean. Story pacing is great and aligns with the mood of the story. Great job, author. I hope you do really well in the spirity and I look forward to reading more of this.
This is an intriguing story. I like the opening a lot; it’s got building drama instead of that ‘in your face’ opening you see on here often. I LOVE all things Fae, so I’m interested to see where this goes. I did see a few past and tense mixups, and a few sentence structure errors, but the story easily overwhelms them. Keep up the good work author!❤️
The plot of the story feels very fluff-I think that's what they call it, and has a great character development (although I have not read enough chapters to see it, I expect that the author creatively shapes the character throughout the succeeding story lines. The only thing that I'd like to point at is the [FLASHBACK] and [END OF FLASHBACK SCENE]. I understand the author's point, however, it would be better if the scenes naturally flow in the dialogues or the way that the novel describes these past memories. Once you can apply this, I think the novel will be more outstanding and concrete. Other than that, I really like the romance plot of this story! Kudos for the author!
Mmm, a really good slow-burn romance novel with incredibly detailed characters and superb dialogue. The novel does a very, very, very good job at extracting your emotions out of you. This novel has a ton of gravitas, and must be savored appropriately. Great work, author! Definitely keep going!
Unique style... I'd say the author tells this love story as if she's holding a dandelion... Yeah, got it? A dandelion! I mean, the feelings are the star of this novel, and they are about to explode in the wind, and at the same time, everything is so light, so delicate! It's a very intriguing story, I'm sure you will love it because perhaps not because of the theme, but the experience of how the writer tells it. Add to it the mysterious spirits and gods, and you have the recipe for this promising and hauntingly beautiful romance. Good luck, author!
This is a relaxing read! The characters feel very realistic, mainly in their interactions with one another--this is mainly true for me when talking about Sora, who I've definitely seen others who act like that. Something I found myself interested in was the world, such as the restaurant in the sky--as scary as it sounds, it is fascinating. Unique settings like that help give this romance story a spot of its own in the library of any avid romance reader--so give it a shot!
The story is quite unique. 🤗 Its so easy to get invested into it. I am so excited to know the twists, the why's. 💛 Storyline is good. Characters are designed well. Author knows how to end a chapter well with impactful scenes/statements. Areas for improvement, there are instances of tense switch between past and present (Im also guilty of this). Also, very subtly, there are instances of POV change in the narration, to 1st POV from third. Just choose one, and be careful of the switches. 🙂 Overall, it is a novel that truly offers something new to the platform. I'm thrilled. Keep on writing, author. All the best.
I really am very picky reader and I can't get interested in novels which people fi d amazing but take my advice and read this one you're going to be a big fan of it
Every romance author has my love, my summer dreams may come true here, kidding aside. Your writing is very concise and your perspective of the world is amazing, your characters are charismatic and beautiful, you have everything to achieve success.
Overall, it's an engaging story. The tenses are a bit mixed up, but that does not take away from the overall understanding of the story. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Try it, It just might be your cup of tea.
Thank you author for the spring breeze that wiped away the darkness that resided from my heart, I read a lot of heavy novels and I read this and felt a breather. This story is a must-read. Thank you miss author for your shameless review, but I allow it, It's kawaii. Enough of my rambling, I recommend this book if you want a leisurely reading time. Keep up the good work author! Kudos to you! Here's a hug from me.
This right here is a true original. ♥ ♥ This book definitely has potential. I'm a fan of mysticisms so it's little wonder this one peaked my interest. Dear author thank you for this book. 😍😍The plot is refreshing, and fresh enough to leave an impact. Definitely staying in my library [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp] Love the story. The plot is absolutely unique. I got more than I signed up for. I am hooked and holding on for the ride.
...this novel is a must-read. the storyline is fresh and i’ve never heard of anything like it. i hope the gods have wonderful plans for dandy and the rest of characters, as they grow in the story. very good job, miss writer!
Overall, it's an engaging story. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. ❤❤ I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.
And here I thought it will be bland but I am impressed! I saw nicely done third-person narration and it was a good choice! I am very immersed in the dialogues and the characters were lifelike and realistic. It was easy to be attached to them as I read them. The plot was outstanding and was cut above the rest! The pacing was neither slow nor fast. It was just right. I can easily see its success in the future! All in all, I am sure this novel will become great someday. Even on tv screens if picked by Tencent! 😉
This is good writing, though there are few problems, it can be solved. you could understand the tone of the story from the very first chapter. The characters all looked quite distinctive, I reckon you could make them even more individualist. it's a good book. I've read three chapter and will be reading the rest later,
Just the right amount of creativity!!! Such a unique yet adorable character. This novel is exactly the one I am looking forward to reading. I hope the author will write as many chapters as she can.... Good luck, Author!!!
Read this book if you like: Compelling characters, whimsical stories, and tales that have great insight into human emotions. Atmospheric, magical, and riveting. Read it now!
if you're interested in nature and fantasy and some cool Japanese mythology, this book is just the right one for you... i don't think I've ever encountered a flower girl this cute [img=recommend] so start reading now!
I really love her~ Can I take Dandy home? She's so cute and precious~ I can see her like a small child~ Like Thumbelina~ Please don't bully my baby Dandy~
Why!! Why do you take me into a rollercoaster of emotion? please don't do that... my heart cannot take it.. T_T I'll be waiting for the next ride (update~)
Shameless Review from me~ I just want to thank everyone who dropped by and read this story. Your reviews mean so much. Really~ Anyway, This novel was so supposed to be super light light hearted. Not too much on the killings and such. Its like a breathing ground from reading all of the heavy stories out there... that's the purpose of this novel...and I hope that it just did the job.. Im very much welcome to constructive criticism. but please be a little gentle as my heart cannot take too much... anyway Im rambling too much here.... Hope you'd stay until the end of the novel... Sankyu ~ Ja matta~