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An amazing start. It made me feel like I am on a cruise, enjoying the warm weather. 😊 The mystery is building up and waiting to be unveiled. I love that we get to find out how FL's life was before things changed. The storytelling is impeccable and I can't wait to see what other adventures are in the store for Jasmine.
please continue this story , it's really good and I'd hat to not know what happens [img=update]
I am in love with this story and the vivid tapestry of the characters that you have diligently created. One cannot help but to share their feelings and experiences with them as the story continues to grow and unfold.
Howdy, hope all is well. can't wait to read more chapters. missing the characters 😢 ughhhh the wait. lol But I know in good time, we'll hear from you
tags say #firstlove well for her it is!! lol I'm feeling so bitter right now. ugh literally in my feelings right now. wet lashes and all[img=faceslap][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Already intrigued by the progress of the story. Many mysteries within the first chapters but they are being revealed and I can't wait to see more of it
I read the current available chapters (3) without reading the synopsis. I usually review after reading 5 chapters but I do want this novel to have its rating so I'm posting this now. I really appreciate how there's enough introduction before the FL's life changed. It's not too much but it's not too little either. It's also not an info dump cramped into a brief summary of her life. I feel like I really got to know her. She's a quiet one—a thinker with a creative flair. I expect it to also come into play when she's in this 'new' world. The author is also good at building things up about the FL's character and the upcoming main story. It stirred my curiosity. It held my attention. It flowed well too. Overall, a gripping narrative so we can expect the same caliber when we move on to our anticipated parts promised by the synopsis.
I think I am just in love with every book that is written by you. The first three chapters have introduced the story with a bang. Good work and good luck.
From the summary and synopsis and preview, I am a little scared of this book. It sounds like the male lead imprisoned the female lead in his home in the name of love? I hope there is no rape and major misunderstandings, still deciding if I will give it a try
Another good book by Avalorian. Too bad we only have 3 chapters. I hope the story updates soon and get more chapters to read and review. Thank you author [img=recommend]
Why I can't vote with power stone and send gift? Story is good.... Hoping for many more updates to be updated soon please . ...............
Congrats on ur 5th book. I love all ur other books bt I dnt like fantasy. I might not read dis one bt I wish u all de best. Pls update the other ones more often Pls and thanx
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Good luck in Spirity, dear author. All the best Hands crossed for this great work to make it up the ranks and will support as much as I can
The writing style is unique and definitely an interesting novel! Your writing ability is slowly captivating the reader's heart and attention. This is one of the greatest novels I've ever read. Keep up the good work, Author.
Reveal Spoiler An amazing start. It made me feel like I am on a cruise, enjoying the warm weather. 😊 The mystery is building up and waiting to be unveiled. I love that we get to find out how FL's life was before things changed. The storytelling is impeccable and I can't wait to see what other adventures are in the store for Jasmine.
please continue this story , it's really good and I'd hat to not know what happens [img=update]
I am in love with this story and the vivid tapestry of the characters that you have diligently created. One cannot help but to share their feelings and experiences with them as the story continues to grow and unfold.
Howdy, hope all is well. can't wait to read more chapters. missing the characters 😢 ughhhh the wait. lol But I know in good time, we'll hear from you
tags say #firstlove well for her it is!! lol I'm feeling so bitter right now. ugh literally in my feelings right now. wet lashes and all[img=faceslap][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Already intrigued by the progress of the story. Many mysteries within the first chapters but they are being revealed and I can't wait to see more of it
I read the current available chapters (3) without reading the synopsis. I usually review after reading 5 chapters but I do want this novel to have its rating so I'm posting this now. I really appreciate how there's enough introduction before the FL's life changed. It's not too much but it's not too little either. It's also not an info dump cramped into a brief summary of her life. I feel like I really got to know her. She's a quiet one—a thinker with a creative flair. I expect it to also come into play when she's in this 'new' world. The author is also good at building things up about the FL's character and the upcoming main story. It stirred my curiosity. It held my attention. It flowed well too. Overall, a gripping narrative so we can expect the same caliber when we move on to our anticipated parts promised by the synopsis.
I think I am just in love with every book that is written by you. The first three chapters have introduced the story with a bang. Good work and good luck.
From the summary and synopsis and preview, I am a little scared of this book. It sounds like the male lead imprisoned the female lead in his home in the name of love? I hope there is no rape and major misunderstandings, still deciding if I will give it a try
Another good book by Avalorian. Too bad we only have 3 chapters. I hope the story updates soon and get more chapters to read and review. Thank you author [img=recommend]
Why I can't vote with power stone and send gift? Story is good.... Hoping for many more updates to be updated soon please . ...............
Congrats on ur 5th book. I love all ur other books bt I dnt like fantasy. I might not read dis one bt I wish u all de best. Pls update the other ones more often Pls and thanx
Reveal Spoiler Good luck in Spirity, dear author. All the best Hands crossed for this great work to make it up the ranks and will support as much as I can
The writing style is unique and definitely an interesting novel! Your writing ability is slowly captivating the reader's heart and attention. This is one of the greatest novels I've ever read. Keep up the good work, Author.
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