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Chapter 35: BNS Chapter 35 - Many affairs

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In the shower, Alan was washing the unconscious Night Princess, whose body he had placed in a bathtub filled with water. Her sudden loss of consciousness was all too sudden for him. 

First it began with her mane, which had become normal and stopped exuding magic. After that, the mare herself went into a deep slumber. Alan tried, of course, to awaken her, but alas, he failed.

That's why Alan took her to the shower to wash her off himself. While washing, Alan didn't notice another person sneak into the shower who suddenly pressed against Alan's back, making him shudder in surprise, making a sound of surprise:

"Whoa!"

Alan turned around to see that it was Maude, soiled in dust and earth, already stripped out of her clothes. Sighing, Alan smiled, and said, "Damn, you snuck up on me so stealthily, I almost shit myself."

With an odd look at him, Maude asked monotonously:

"When did you get so skittish?"

Outraged, Alan replied:

"What do you mean, skittish? Anyone would be surprised if someone with the stealth skills of a Ninja would sneak up on them."

Bowing her head slightly, Maude smiled slightly and said:

"I told you I could be stealthy," then the mare pulled the stallion away from Luna's tub, and turning him fully on herself, pulled him into a deep kiss.

Surprised for a second, Alan immediately stabilized his position, and deepened the kiss with the mare. Slowly, Maud piled on top of him, settling her ass on his bulge, beginning to rub his crotch with it. This immediately made Alan stiffen, and, embracing the mare's body with his hoof, he created a magical hand on his other hoof and began to massage her firm buttocks.

Breaking away from her lips, Alan asked, "I take it you can't stand it anymore, can you?"

Maude merely nodded, and replied monotonously:

"Yes. Also, you don't have to worry about anything. I already took the pill."

"Great," with a satisfied grin, Alan immediately pointed his fighter at the mare's wet slit, and penetrated her in one motion.

From such a thing, a contented moan escaped Maude's lips:

"Ah-ah-ah..."

Without waiting a second, Maud immediately began to move up and down, riding her favorite stallion like a lustful bunny. On her emotionless face, a lecherous smile began to rise again as she looked into her stallion's eyes. Seeing this, Alan couldn't help but smirk, then slapped her buttock with his magic hand.

"Haa... Yeah..." Maude moaned, looking more satisfied than before.

Alan wrapped his arms around her croup, and with a predatory grin began to thrust the mare onto his hard shaft. Maude moaned as he did so, and she spoke:

"Fuck, yes! More, don't stop! Poke me through and through!"

A dozen minutes later, Maude's eyes rolled back and her tongue began to slurp. Rolling her over onto her back, Alan hovered over her, and raising her legs to head level, began to penetrate her to new depths. Causing even happier cries from his beloved:

"Haaaaah! YEAHHHHHH! ALAN, I ADORE YOU!!! MORE-E-e-e-ooo!"

At one point, Alan began massaging the mare's clit with his hands, causing her brain to fall as if into space for a moment, in which she felt a cosmic orgasm. Immediately after the mare, Alan cummed inside her as well. If it hadn't been for his last run with Luna, he probably would have lasted longer.

Rolling in beside the mare, Alan put his hoof around her and said:

"Yeah, you were right, I missed it too. We should do this more often."

Recovering her breath, Maude only clung tighter to her lover, and leaned back into his fur and said quietly, "Yes... If we had no other business, I wouldn't let you out of bed at all."

What he heard made Alan flinch. He hadn't expected his beloved's lust to be so intense. Looking at her in surprise, he asked:

"Don't tell me you still want to go on?"

Maud looked up into his eyes, and with a slight smile she replied monotonously:

"Right now, no. But in a dozen minutes I'll be ready to continue. Nevertheless, I suppose it's time to get the princess out of the tub. Otherwise she might get sick."

Widening his eyes at the osonation, Alan quickly jumped up, "Damn, I completely forgot about her!"

After finishing washing the princess, Alan quickly got her out of the tub, and together with Maude they carried her into the bedroom. After making sure Luna was okay, Alan breathed a sigh of relief and returned to the couch with Maude.

"So, were you able to get the materials we need to make the bracelets?"

Nodding, Maude replied:

"Yes. Not a few. But there's a problem, obtaining them on your own will be extremely difficult. Given that we will be moving to another house in the future, this cave could be converted into a crystal mining mine."

Pulling his hoof to his chin, Alan thought for a while:

«Well, she's right. We need to attract a lot of cadres for our work. And preferably someone we can trust. I think we'll need to pay Princess Twilight a visit so she can help work things out with Princess Celestia, so we can get to work building our company with Maud.»

Turning to Maude, Alan said:

"Agreed. Then I'll stop by Twilight's tomorrow to contact Celestia," then Alan remembered Luna, and grinned, "or we can just ask Luna for help. Either way, she's also the ruler of Equestria. Except I'm not sure if she's responsible for the circulation of magical devices."

Throwing a glance at the sleeping princess, Maud said:

"I think she'll be fine. Even if she can't give us a decision on her own, she can certainly influence her sister's decision. She'll do anything to make her stallion happy. Just like me."

At the end of the sentence Maud looked at Alan with such an amorous look that the stallion couldn't help himself, and in tears he pulled her into another deep and sensual kiss. Releasing the filly from the grip of his lips, Alan answered her:

"Remember, Maude. This is not one-sided love. I'm also willing to do whatever it takes to keep my loved ones happy. Even go through the skulls of our detractors," he said the last sentence in a firm and resolute tone.

His voice and those words sent a wave of shivers through the mare's body and filled her heart with an unimaginable amount of awe and love. To other ponies his words might have sounded extremely suspicious and cruel, but to her it was a true display of love and strength. These are the qualities she expects from her stallion. Her stallion should be the force that could protect his mares from any problems. In turn, his mares should be just as good.

After talking some more, Alan and Maude joined Luna on the bed, and went off to the realm of dreams.

The next day, Alan woke up to find his mares lying peacefully staring at his face, and he couldn't help but start a kissing session with them, which lasted a good fifteen minutes.

After that, they began to clean up, wash their faces, and then have breakfast. Finally, having finished their morning routine, Alan looked at Luna and told her about his intention to create a company to produce his magical bracelets. After some explanation of his ideas, as well as a more detailed demonstration of its functionality. Luna seemed both impressed and alarmed.

Looking at Alan, she said:

"You know, your and Maude's invention could be a big help to all of Equestria. Except that giving access to such things to anyone who wants it... That could lead to some undesirable consequences. I promise to talk it over with my sister today when I return to Canterlot. When we decide exactly how we will regulate the sale of your bracelets, we will issue you a permit with a set of personal requirements and rules."

Finding her words reasonable, Alan nodded, "Good, then I rely on you, Luna."

With a warm smile on her stallion, Luna stood up, and filling her horn with magic, said:

"All right, if you have no further questions, then I'm return to Canterlot. I have a ton of work to do so I can get back to riding that incredible cock as soon as possible."

Flashing one last smile, the Diarch princess disappeared in a flash of magic. Alan glanced after her and shook his head with a chuckle, "Well, then I must get on with my promises. And I guess I'll start by meeting with the CMC."

After kissing Maude before her next dive into the caves, Alan left the cave to go in search of the team of friendly fillies.

Walking through the streets of Ponyville, Alan wondered where he could find the taggers. He knew from recollection from the cartoon series itself that the mares hung out quite often in their tree house, which stood near the Apple farm. So he thought that perhaps he should visit the place after a short walk and a look around Ponyville. It is quite possible that he would run into them on the way.

Passing by the Sugar Corner, Alan decided to pop inside to say hello to Pinky, and at the same time get some sweets for the girls.

As he opened the door, Alan heard a bell strike on the door, attracting the attention of the chubby mare behind the counter. Seeing Alan, the woman smiled, and said:

"Ah, welcome to the sugarcube corner," here she took a closer look at the stallion, "Oh, you must be Alan, mustn't you?"

Walking up to her, Alan nodded with a smile, "Right, I guess she's already told you about me?"

"Ah, you have no idea. She seemed so happy lately. All she talked about was you!" the woman looked extremely pleased as she talked about it, "oh, by the way, my name is Mrs. Cake, nice to meet you!"

Alan noded, "Likewise, Miss Cake. As you already know, my name is Alan, or just Al to my friends."

Finished with the greeting, Alan asked:

"So, if it's not too much trouble, can I see Pinky?"

Looking a little embarrassed, Mrs. Cake replied:

"Oh, that's going to be a little difficult, dear. Pinky is, as she put it, 'in the moment,' so she asked me not to distract her until she was finished," the mare laughed a little, remembering Pinky's words, "she's getting ready to show me her new recipe, which she says will be the most incredible dessert she's ever made. And since all of Pinky's baked goods are incredibly delicious, I'm looking forward to this novelty."

Realizing that his favorite pink marshmallow was busy at the moment, Alan didn't distract her and only bought some sweets, then said:

"Tell Pinky that Alan stopped by, and give her an air kiss from me," saying this with a slight smirk, Alan put the pastries in a small bag on his side, then left the sugarcube corner.

Mrs. Cake, who remained inside, covered her mouth with a hoof in surprise, holding back a small smile with a blush, then said quietly:

"Oh, did our little Pinkie get a suitor?" remembering again Alan's unusual appearance, she added, "and what a one. Ah, beautiful youth."

If she had only known that this stud had made it to such "older" ladies as Mayor Meyer, and Luna, she would certainly have fainted.

In the meantime, Alan continued walking through the streets of Ponyville, scrutinizing his surroundings in case he encountered any little cutie mark crusaders. And so, as he passed Rarity's boutique, Alan noticed little Belle coming out of it, saying a loud goodbye to her sister.

As soon as the filly spotted Alan, she gasped and happily ran up to him, "Alan! You're finally here, we've been waiting for you!" Belle hugged Alan, saying this.

After stroking her head, Alan smiled warmly at her and answered:

"Sorry kiddo, there's been a lot going on lately, so I haven't had time to meet you. But now I'm temporarily free of all business and ready to get busy with your lovely group solving my Cutie Mark."

As soon as he said that, Sweetie Belle immediately brightened up and asked:

"Wow, really! That's great, I was just on my way to our Treehouse, let's go, hurry!"

Saying this, the filly pulled Alan with her, toward the Apple farm. Once there, Alan saw a small cabin built around a tree trunk at a low height. And right away Alan heard voices coming from inside, easily recognizable as Scootaloo and Apple Bloom.

With a contented look, Sweetie climbed up a kind of staircase ramp. And as she opened the door, she cheerfully greeted:

"Good morning!"

Turning around and seeing her friend, the girls happily replied:

"Morning!"

"Morning, Sweetie!"

As they bumped into each other's hooves, Sweetie Belle grinned, and said:

"Guess who I brought?" seeing the confused faces of her friends, she proudly held her head up, and shouted, "Come on in!"

After her words, Alan walked into their cabin, and as soon as fillies saw him, they rejoiced, and came running at him with hugs, and shouting:

"Alan!"

"You're finally here!"

Hugging the energetic fillies, Alan said:

"Yep, I'm finally free, and ready to give you all my time. Well, except tonight, I have a meditation lesson scheduled with Twilight."

Nodding happily, the mares immediately retreated to different parts of their lodge, and quickly prepared a clipboard with a mini presentation. There was a clumsy sketch of his Cutimark, as well as a list of ideas from the fillies themselves.

Pointing to the sheet with her pointer, Scootaloo spoke first:

"So, while you were gone, we analyzed the appearance of your Cutimark, and cross-referenced all your recent actions and words, recognized through all the ponies you've encountered, and based on that, wrote down some guesses as to what your cutie mark might mean."

"Wow," Alan was impressed with such a meticulous approach from such a small filly, "I didn't know you were so responsible about your work."

"You bet we do, it's our vocation, after all!" Sweetie Belle smugly declared.

With an odd look at her, Scootaloo added, "Please don't forget that I'm the one who did most of the work!"

Sweetie was a little embarrassed, but she answered nonetheless:

"Well, yes, but your enthusiasm was contagious enough to make us work harder in the second half as well," she remembered something and cheered up even more, "and when we heard how highly Alan was praised by the ponies, we worked as hard as you did!"

"Your truth," Scootaloo shrugged.

At that moment Apple Bloom came to the sheet, "Anyway, after parsing the individual elements of your mark, we've written down what we think are our three best guesses," watching Alan's thoughtful reaction, she added, "of course, we don't fully understand some aspects of your sign, so there could be a lot more options, but for now, it's a good idea to look at these three first, and then build on them from there."

Nodding, Alan replied with a slight smile:

"Okay, sounds like a plan. Where do we start?"

All three filly gathered in a sort of circle and began quietly discussing something, and after a few seconds, they split up, after which Scootaloo pointed to the second item on the sheet. "Let's start with this one!"

Looking at the second item, Alan read it aloud:

"Eloquence? Do you think my cutie mark means my ability to speak beautifully?" Alan was a little embarrassed, since before coming to Equestria, he used swear words quite often, which he later tries to get rid of so as not to say anything unnecessary in the presence of ponies.

"Aha!" All three mares nodded.

After that, Sweetie Belle said:

"Every time we've asked the ponies you know "what Alan's like," we've gotten an almost identical answer every time - 'He's a great conversationalist' or 'his company is fun,' so we decided to test that.

After thinking for a while, Alan realized that his attempt to be discreet and polite was extremely effective in leaving a pleasant impression. «Too bad that in the past world that didn't work as often as I would have liked.» Alan shook his head.

"Well, we can try, though I'm not sure that common courtesy would constitute talent. But, what was Discord not joking about?"

Laughing at his choice of words, fillies merely nodded, and began to argue about how best to test the item.

Listening to them, Alan thought to himself, after which he realized he had no idea which result should be considered a success and which a failure. Looking embarrassed at the mares, Alan asked:

"Um, girls..."

The fillies looked away from the argument to look at Alan, who asked:

"I think this particular point is going to have one problem. How do you know if eloquence is successful? I mean, anyone can politely address a pony. Basically, even if you're not a nice person, you can pretend to be a good-natured passerby. I think the evaluation of eloquence might be too subjective. Especially if the talking pony turns out to be a good actor with liar syndrome."

"Um..." the fillies went into a slight stupor at Alan's words.

Once again they gathered in a circle and discussed something, before separating and nodding at each other with a stern expression on their faces. Apple Bloom crossed out the second point about eloquence and pointed to the first point, and said:

"So! Since the second point wasn't finished enough, we decided to start with the first point. It was invented on the basis of the heart symbol in your sign. We think you have the ability to be a kind of Cupid. Since a lot of the ponies we talked to about you seemed pretty distracted."

At this point Sweetie Belle took the floor:

"That's right, I'd even say they seemed to be in love. So maybe you awakened their rosy pore and they were able to find their soul mate!"

Satisfied with their inference, Bloom and Belle nodded at each other with a smile. Seeing this, Scootaloo only rolled her eyes, and said:

"For the record, I don't think so. It's unlikely that feelings will blossom just from someone else's presence."

Nodding, Alan replied:

"I agree. I haven't talked to the people of Ponyville enough to affect anyone's love life," then suddenly, after thinking about something, Alan asked, "By the way, all those ponies who looked distracted and in love... Were they mares by any chance?"

On reflection, the fillies remembered that they were mares indeed, and looking at Alan, Sweetie Belle replied:

"Now that you ask. I guess that's the way it is. All the ponies who seemed to be in love were exclusively mares..."

Here, all three filly took another look at Alan, and realized something:

«He's incredibly handsome!»

Seeing the realization catch up with them, Alan smiled a little crookedly, and said:

"Well, as you've figured out on your own, I think it was just about my looks. These words may seem a little smug, but I'm sure I look pretty good. Good enough to attract a mare or two."

"Yes... you do..." Sweetie Belle didn't even notice herself saying it, which made her a little embarrassed, and she shook her head and said, "I mean, then the first option falls away, and flows seamlessly into the third."

After crossing out the first item, they pointed with a pointer to the third. In doing so, they looked a little unsure. Watching Belle and Bloom hesitate a little, Scootaloo rolled her eyes again, and she snatched the pointer and pointed to the third item on the sheet. Looking at it, Alan read it out loud again:

"Romantic?" this item seemed a little closer to the truth to Alan, though there were still certain doubts.

Nodding, Scootaloo replied:

"Yes. We weren't entirely sure about it, as this kind of skill is rather unusual, but real nonetheless. Apple Bloom's brother literally met a pony with a similar talent in the town of Sugar Belle."

"I see. Then how do you propose to test this point?"

Glancing among themselves, the mares nodded to each other, and replied:

"We'll get you a date!"

Looking at them with some confusion and doubt, Alan thought to himself:

"How could exploring my Cutie Mark with fillies lead to a date with a mare? Even the thought makes me a little uncomfortable.» With a sigh, Alan could only agree with their suggestion.

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Silent_Dude Silent_Dude

Here's a new chapter.

Truth be told, I wanted to describe in it how Alan and the CMC try out a lot of options, but then I realized that I didn't like the way the chapter was going because everything was too rushed and there were few CMC interactions. That's why I had to rewrite it, and bring it to this version.

Now, who do you think Alan will have a date with?

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