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This a really good novel Have a lot of potential ___________________________________________________________________________________________________
I will say the moment that the main protagonist started to reject equality was the moment I got interested in this story. Also if it helps, try to read your work to someone or say it outloud to yourself because there a few grammar mistakes. The mistakes do not effect the overall rating of the book for me. Thus I hope you update this novel and The mysterious black magician novel too because thos will be great to read more often. Thank you for writing these novels.
I really like the story so far i think it has a really good background good plot and has alot of potential to become a really good story i just need more chapters man lol
This a really good novel Have a lot of potential ___________________________________________________________________________________________________
I will say the moment that the main protagonist started to reject equality was the moment I got interested in this story. Also if it helps, try to read your work to someone or say it outloud to yourself because there a few grammar mistakes. The mistakes do not effect the overall rating of the book for me. Thus I hope you update this novel and The mysterious black magician novel too because thos will be great to read more often. Thank you for writing these novels.
I really like the story so far i think it has a really good background good plot and has alot of potential to become a really good story i just need more chapters man lol