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MORE UPDATES PLEAAE I NEED NORE I NEED NORE MORE MORE I WABT HIM REVEAL HIS TRU IDENTYTI AND DESTROY ALL VILLIANS OF SPIDERMAN, I SERIUSLY WANT HIM KILL BLACK CAT
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where is the author at it's been like half a year since he updated the novel/book............................................................................................................................................................................ update soon pls
again good to see chapters. Hope no forgiving and he kicking all of the heroes(especially the major ones). . .Hope no forgiving and he kicking all of the heroes(especially the major ones).
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great novel but it just take to long to update...................................................................................................
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Nice. Really liking the updates are kinda regular again. Nice. Really liking the updates are kinda regular again.Nice. Really liking the updates are kinda regular again.
Reveal Spoiler I am loving this story. I hope he injure those heroes(even the main ones) permanently. I am loving this story. I hope he injure those heroes(even the main ones) permanently
COME ON MAN WHERE IS THE BIG REVEAL COMING AND THE MORE EPIC FIGHT SCENES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
αα±α¬ααΊαΈαααΊ ααΌαα―ααΊαααΊ ααΌααΊααΌααΊαααΊαααΊαααΊααα―αα±α¬ααΊαΈαααΊisjkfkkkbvvbekepflkdjfjtbrkdovjsndkfkrnrjfofksnfngkcodjtbtkdjcjdngldisjcjfngg(dyodgkhcdylxix(dyooxdd?#??eyosod(eyo'096#9%#^):)5:^(::9^.^.kgzzidgohxogycphdllgdi(gdyydydufp''fdfuiitd)(xoxypdphxlhxph)xod (atu now ri sorry)
This is a really good story. I am just hoping peter injures other main heroes soon. This is a really good story. I am just hoping peter injures other main heroes soon.This is a really good story. I am just hoping peter injures other main heroes soon.
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Needs The Evil Tag For Those People That Like CLICHE Naive Or What Ever People Call Them Now.Heros Mc's (Me) So That We Know That The Mc'S Is Evil,Ruthless,Merciless And Whatever Others Tags People Put On Those.
no need to spare them. Cripple all the heroes. Repeated words for 140 limit. no need to spare them. Cripple all the heroes.no need to spare them. Cripple all the heros.
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good story but i think you should add more to the tags like Anti hero, Evil MC, ruthless MC and gore maybe a few more.,.......................
One of the best ben 10 and marvel fanfiction I read, keep up the good work . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. .. . . . . . . . . . . . .
Please update more. Also can't wait to see otherΒ΄s reaction to peter. Please update more. Also can't wait to see otherΒ΄s reaction to peter.Please update more. Also can't wait to see otherΒ΄s reaction to peter.
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You killed the bikers for no apparent reason . ..... ................................................................. ........................
first chapter need some editing..the story is good..I look forward for more chapters..[img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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great novel keep up the great work...............................................................................................................................
wait mc has omnitrix nice.Finally i want to read some omnitrix fanfic thx i will read fast as i can.
An interesting and entertaining story...though the grammar isn't great and it hasn't been updated in a year...still holding out some hope though.
MORE UPDATES PLEAAE I NEED NORE I NEED NORE MORE MORE I WABT HIM REVEAL HIS TRU IDENTYTI AND DESTROY ALL VILLIANS OF SPIDERMAN, I SERIUSLY WANT HIM KILL BLACK CAT
Reveal Spoiler where is the author at it's been like half a year since he updated the novel/book............................................................................................................................................................................ update soon pls
again good to see chapters. Hope no forgiving and he kicking all of the heroes(especially the major ones). . .Hope no forgiving and he kicking all of the heroes(especially the major ones).
Reveal Spoiler great novel but it just take to long to update...................................................................................................
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Nice. Really liking the updates are kinda regular again. Nice. Really liking the updates are kinda regular again.Nice. Really liking the updates are kinda regular again.
Reveal Spoiler I am loving this story. I hope he injure those heroes(even the main ones) permanently. I am loving this story. I hope he injure those heroes(even the main ones) permanently
COME ON MAN WHERE IS THE BIG REVEAL COMING AND THE MORE EPIC FIGHT SCENES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
αα±α¬ααΊαΈαααΊ ααΌαα―ααΊαααΊ ααΌααΊααΌααΊαααΊαααΊαααΊααα―αα±α¬ααΊαΈαααΊisjkfkkkbvvbekepflkdjfjtbrkdovjsndkfkrnrjfofksnfngkcodjtbtkdjcjdngldisjcjfngg(dyodgkhcdylxix(dyooxdd?#??eyosod(eyo'096#9%#^):)5:^(::9^.^.kgzzidgohxogycphdllgdi(gdyydydufp''fdfuiitd)(xoxypdphxlhxph)xod (atu now ri sorry)
This is a really good story. I am just hoping peter injures other main heroes soon. This is a really good story. I am just hoping peter injures other main heroes soon.This is a really good story. I am just hoping peter injures other main heroes soon.
Reveal Spoiler Needs The Evil Tag For Those People That Like CLICHE Naive Or What Ever People Call Them Now.Heros Mc's (Me) So That We Know That The Mc'S Is Evil,Ruthless,Merciless And Whatever Others Tags People Put On Those.
no need to spare them. Cripple all the heroes. Repeated words for 140 limit. no need to spare them. Cripple all the heroes.no need to spare them. Cripple all the heros.
Reveal Spoiler good story but i think you should add more to the tags like Anti hero, Evil MC, ruthless MC and gore maybe a few more.,.......................
One of the best ben 10 and marvel fanfiction I read, keep up the good work . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. .. . . . . . . . . . . . .
Please update more. Also can't wait to see otherΒ΄s reaction to peter. Please update more. Also can't wait to see otherΒ΄s reaction to peter.Please update more. Also can't wait to see otherΒ΄s reaction to peter.
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awesome story love awesome new just uploaded faster..................................................................................................
You killed the bikers for no apparent reason . ..... ................................................................. ........................
first chapter need some editing..the story is good..I look forward for more chapters..[img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
harem r bad no good harem r bad no good harem r bad no good harem r bad no good harem r bad no good harem r bad no good harem r bad no good harem r bad no good harem r bad no good
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great novel keep up the great work...............................................................................................................................
wait mc has omnitrix nice.Finally i want to read some omnitrix fanfic thx i will read fast as i can.
An interesting and entertaining story...though the grammar isn't great and it hasn't been updated in a year...still holding out some hope though.