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I would like to see the creation of a Polish empire from Germany to Siberia including Constantinople and the Holy Lands. Thank you for your excellent story author !
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I love the story, very funny. I still hope that the influence of the MC on the future of the world will be important, especially when it will control Poland and will therefore be able to implement its strategy more easily
Amazing novel stable release rate ? 7 chapters/week ? Jfdjjdkdkdkddkkdfkfkfkfkfkfkfkkfkffkkffkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkkfkfkffkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkkffkfkfk
I love your "subtle" criticisms of communism, I guess there is no one better than a historian to understand how dangerous it is. You are a historian aren't you? you know a lot of things...... Well about the story I don't have much to say, all I know about Poland or Lithuania is the name, but still this story got me, that must mean you are doing great. By the way, I died laughing with your joke about the Jews in the barn and you winning an Oscar, I know a little group that would be very angry. Thanks for the chapters
I remember seeing this novel a loooong time ago but I never decided to read it because at the time it did not have many chapters and I didn't think I would enjoy the Historical aspect of it. When I saw that the entire story was rewritten (by complete accident) I figured if he was so dedicated to put in so much effort I might as well read a few chapters. Well that same day I read half the novel! The next day I hit 100%! The only reason I gave it a 4/5 on stability of updates is because I don't actually know how often he updates as I finished it in 2 days but since then he released 2 new chapters so I thinks its fine.
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Good story.. but is written in english imperfect. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp]
I respect artistic freedom and I can understand some of the sentiments and things that has been written in this novel. I don't need to agree with everything. I love the novel and I love the stability of the update but please, make this story an actual reality instead of being a simulation from a VR company like another one of the novel who has Poland as the country did.
Most things are good with the story but you should really try to write the conversations the characters have with eachother better, They are just bland and robotic like the people don't have any kind of soul and emotions
Mc alpha!!! Logical Harem. Shamelessly ambitious guy. I would love it if he knocked up as many women as possible to pass on his genes all over Europe.
Everything is so perfect, so well put together. I just wish the update rate would increase but otherwise everything is good the character is smart the characters are realistic.
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Romance, adventure and uplift with Tatars, Polish prisoners and sacks filled with hands in background- story about wild men in Wild East. If You search these things, You can bet heavy money, that You can find these things here. Because I searched these things and found them here.
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Hey, even if you don't believe it, your stories are very good (from my point of view), I'm already reading the 3 and I love them, I also like your theme of traveling to the past and opposing the protagonist and that he has many lovers (I don't like ntr) you just need to do one from Greece, Rome (Julius Caesar's era), Egypt (Cleopatra's era), Macedonia, etc. Keep it up, don't give up
No entiendo algo, esta nueva historia cambia algo al de la anterior, por que yo iba a la oar con la otra, entonces seria tedioso volver a leer lo mismo (y pongo 5 estrellas por que me gusto mucho la anterior historia)
it's refreshing to read story like that, it's getting boring to read things with some kind of sjw has mc who run everywhere
Sigh... now i have the urge to continue my commonwealth EU4 save game , its been like 3 months ago i abandoned it or smth i dunno , now im on inca world conquest playthrough. Welp another playthrough abandoned again . alright here i come world conquest commonwealth
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Five stars just because you attempted to bring forth the Commonwealth as the background of the novel. As someone who did the same, I can only wish you luck and hope yours will harness more attention and popularity as to let the worldwide community know a bit more about this nearly forgotten part of the history
I know you don't like to be told what to do (referencing to the author) But some Hussars would be really cool..... And if you could add some Naval Combat or late Line Infantry tactics and some extensive use of grenades
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Historically the Hussars weren't the only force on the battlefield at vienna, the polish king John III Sobieski brought most of Poland's army including Infantry and other cavalry but the Hussars did play a vital role. By the way would love to see Hussars included in the story
yeah,I would like to see the Hussars too, I heard that the Hussars were Poland's elite force and that they kicked Ottomans ass in Vienna single handedly
Great world building and character creation,I know cause I tried to write once. And I would really like to see the Hussars soon, very soon..
Love your work man and keep writing.........................................................................................................
love the book. it's very hard to find it from commonwealth though. could you add a link to the original novel. I sure there a lot of people who want to read this as well.
After reading this I got an urgent need to play TW Empire, and this time I played as Poland. Although they don't have much good units but the winged hussars are amazing, Hope you include some Hussars in cca soon
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I would like to see the creation of a Polish empire from Germany to Siberia including Constantinople and the Holy Lands. Thank you for your excellent story author !
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I love the story, very funny. I still hope that the influence of the MC on the future of the world will be important, especially when it will control Poland and will therefore be able to implement its strategy more easily
Amazing novel stable release rate ? 7 chapters/week ? Jfdjjdkdkdkddkkdfkfkfkfkfkfkfkkfkffkkffkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkkfkfkffkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkkffkfkfk
I love your "subtle" criticisms of communism, I guess there is no one better than a historian to understand how dangerous it is. You are a historian aren't you? you know a lot of things...... Well about the story I don't have much to say, all I know about Poland or Lithuania is the name, but still this story got me, that must mean you are doing great. By the way, I died laughing with your joke about the Jews in the barn and you winning an Oscar, I know a little group that would be very angry. Thanks for the chapters
I remember seeing this novel a loooong time ago but I never decided to read it because at the time it did not have many chapters and I didn't think I would enjoy the Historical aspect of it. When I saw that the entire story was rewritten (by complete accident) I figured if he was so dedicated to put in so much effort I might as well read a few chapters. Well that same day I read half the novel! The next day I hit 100%! The only reason I gave it a 4/5 on stability of updates is because I don't actually know how often he updates as I finished it in 2 days but since then he released 2 new chapters so I thinks its fine.
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Reveal Spoiler Good story.. but is written in english imperfect. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp]
I respect artistic freedom and I can understand some of the sentiments and things that has been written in this novel. I don't need to agree with everything. I love the novel and I love the stability of the update but please, make this story an actual reality instead of being a simulation from a VR company like another one of the novel who has Poland as the country did.
Most things are good with the story but you should really try to write the conversations the characters have with eachother better, They are just bland and robotic like the people don't have any kind of soul and emotions
Mc alpha!!! Logical Harem. Shamelessly ambitious guy. I would love it if he knocked up as many women as possible to pass on his genes all over Europe.
Everything is so perfect, so well put together. I just wish the update rate would increase but otherwise everything is good the character is smart the characters are realistic.
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Romance, adventure and uplift with Tatars, Polish prisoners and sacks filled with hands in background- story about wild men in Wild East. If You search these things, You can bet heavy money, that You can find these things here. Because I searched these things and found them here.
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Hey, even if you don't believe it, your stories are very good (from my point of view), I'm already reading the 3 and I love them, I also like your theme of traveling to the past and opposing the protagonist and that he has many lovers (I don't like ntr) you just need to do one from Greece, Rome (Julius Caesar's era), Egypt (Cleopatra's era), Macedonia, etc. Keep it up, don't give up
No entiendo algo, esta nueva historia cambia algo al de la anterior, por que yo iba a la oar con la otra, entonces seria tedioso volver a leer lo mismo (y pongo 5 estrellas por que me gusto mucho la anterior historia)
it's refreshing to read story like that, it's getting boring to read things with some kind of sjw has mc who run everywhere
Sigh... now i have the urge to continue my commonwealth EU4 save game , its been like 3 months ago i abandoned it or smth i dunno , now im on inca world conquest playthrough. Welp another playthrough abandoned again . alright here i come world conquest commonwealth
Reveal Spoiler Five stars just because you attempted to bring forth the Commonwealth as the background of the novel. As someone who did the same, I can only wish you luck and hope yours will harness more attention and popularity as to let the worldwide community know a bit more about this nearly forgotten part of the history
I know you don't like to be told what to do (referencing to the author) But some Hussars would be really cool..... And if you could add some Naval Combat or late Line Infantry tactics and some extensive use of grenades
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Historically the Hussars weren't the only force on the battlefield at vienna, the polish king John III Sobieski brought most of Poland's army including Infantry and other cavalry but the Hussars did play a vital role. By the way would love to see Hussars included in the story
yeah,I would like to see the Hussars too, I heard that the Hussars were Poland's elite force and that they kicked Ottomans ass in Vienna single handedly
Great world building and character creation,I know cause I tried to write once. And I would really like to see the Hussars soon, very soon..
Love your work man and keep writing.........................................................................................................
love the book. it's very hard to find it from commonwealth though. could you add a link to the original novel. I sure there a lot of people who want to read this as well.
After reading this I got an urgent need to play TW Empire, and this time I played as Poland. Although they don't have much good units but the winged hussars are amazing, Hope you include some Hussars in cca soon
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