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1 best stroy for oc fanfic hp world, 5 stars for inovating. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
overall a fun read. there are some grammar issues but nothing that causes the story to be unreadable
It’s a good history, Quinn and the other characters are good, and almost all of this is awesome, in my opinion the late part, starts to become a bit lacking, but the overall is good, hopping to see some epilogue chapters soon.
4/5 estuvo entretenida la historia menos los arcos del color/pecado y no me gustó el harem .....................................................................................................................................................................
I’m on chap 108 and i have no plans of stopping. Honestly the only thing i don’t like about this book is the experimenting and vaults stuff. The amount of social interaction is disappointing. Plus the way he talks to Luna is like hes grooming her but thats kinda funny lol.
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i get that every one has their dream of a good story and I'm not this isn't a bad story necessarily but it's just not for me. between the direction of research magic...?? so confused. and the issue with the wand l. I mean come on this is supposed to be a HP inspired story and he treats the wand like poison almost throwing it away and using a fake one. why not just write an original story instead of whatever this is..... anyways not for me but good luck
i dropped it. yea i did. it was great, like I loved it but this bas*ard just has to go and make it a 3some.atleast do that at the beginning to middle phase. like i read up to 350+ chap while supporting Daphne against ivy and he went with a 3 some. just the disappointment I felt ruined my day and I lost interest in a great story.i don't know if i would have taken it better if he confirmed it before but enjoying it till last just to read a utter disappointment of chapter is the worst experience in all the novels I've read.i literally got into a fight with my family in my irritated mood.
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Gran historia, me arrepiento de no haberle dado una oportunidad antes. Gracias.
This was great, some elements like time travel were unnecessary (a certain arc where the author basically spoiled the future that follows the books' timeline), but since it didn't affect the ending nor the experience as whole, it's fine 😚
Best reincarnated Harry Potter world novel 100%!!!, original MC character similar cannon story guide but with substantial changes and characters, finished/read it all, hope to find/read the epilogue, if any one know location please let us know :).
It follows the evolution of the MC and how he deals with the situation he finds himself in and especially the addition of the Hogwarts coffers was very well placed, however I found the ending very sudden and without a suitable epilogue, especially with the MC's romance.
MC cooks up wandless casting as ‘natural magic’ that chumps named as legendary in HP world like Merlin, Hogwarts’ founders, Dumbledore, Grindlewald, Voldemort etc could’nt ever think of. Don’t mind OP MC but has to follow some basic rules of the HP world!
Really enjoyed this book, don't know much if anything about writing skills, but so far this is one of the best books I've read :) thanks a lot.
This book is incredibly lit! You made good progress on the book, I assume that this book can be very popular on this. Keep it up this good writing and I'm sure you'll be successful!
This is a harem story. It will lure you with an expectation of a sensible and believable story amd characters at first and then around chapter 310s it reveal itself of what the author want, even disguising the event happened against mc’s intention, a harem is a harem. I put this out here because there’s no harem tag and I don’t want who that not into this disgusting concept to make many great characters less of themselves in just one chapter. I know that this is webnovel, the epidemy of harem and powerfamtasy type, but not putting harem tag in just grind me so much….and the story was going great to till that point.
Alright, here's my review after reading the first fifteen chapters. I'll adjust my review after reading more. If it hadn't been for the great score, I wouldn't have read this far. The whole legilimency thing at the start is incredibly tedious. There's also the magic core thing that smells a lot like mana limitations, though we'll see. Writing quality is great and update too, since the novel is already done. The only annoying thing is the scene breaks. Just leave a space, this isn't a script.
Good writing, decent story, interesting characters. I'm only in chapter twenty, but up till now it seems great. Loving the MC and the family.
This story was beautiful, it touches my heart and I became very fond of many of its characters. This story has given me feelings that I didn't think a fanfic could give me, I have laughed, I have felt the tension of the moments and it has made me cry when I see that this journey comes to an end. I will always carry this story in my heart. Thank you very much for writing it and for giving me so many beautiful moments. Don't give up, you are an author with a great future. I'll wait for the epilogue to see the definitive closure of this memorable piece.
Overall rating: 4.8 It’s a really well made story that ties in with the HP universe and pushing it within boundaries. To put it in a very tl;dr review would be: Alternate Harry Potter Universe. I genuinely really like the MC, to call this story a ‘generic OP MC storyline’ would be somewhat accurate. But it would be missing out on about 75-80% of the whole story. The MC has a personality that feels very real and fleshed out than majority of other books, a strong love for magic, morals and principles from outside influences that may or may not be his fault. You can see his meticulous style in his planning and thoughts. Because this is a reincarnation he does change the fate of some characters, *ahem* Diggory *ahem*. Plus like I said, this is an AU so some of the HP background changed to fit an overall better story structure. What made it and breaks it for me is like everyone else is the vaults. Don’t get me wrong, I love the premise of these vaults that was made by a 5th entity, these vaults are so well fleshed out that it feel like a complete canonical entry in the books. It just could have been handled better especially the one that made some, or even most people drop this wonder of a book. Another one was the very ‘not-so-sudden’ sudden romance, it was there and most of us saw it but we just didn’t like it. Aside from that the ending was a lot more rushed that I would have liked it but I see the problem and the author had mentioned his reasons. But overall if you power through just those things. You would get a book that, dare I say it, ruin every other HP book that has come out. A near 10/10 book for me. P.S. I know a lot of people hate the fact that the Author makes the MC super OP super early on. I would say this, is a near perfect way to make a character super OP and get away with it. Not the drawbacks, but an additional individual (i.e. Dumbledore) that has sky-high power that even our super-amped up MC can’t beat. They don’t have to be strong in the traditional sense, I would say Dumbledore and Grindelwald are the two perfect examples of this ‘individual’. Let’s take a look at Grindelwald first, yes he’s powerful in the traditional sense but he has an ambitious goal with that powerful charisma that can make others join his cause. Then the one above all, Dumbledore. He has what Grindelwald has and more, his status of defeating two dark lords alongside his political power as a supreme mugwump, apart from that he has the goodwill of the common folk which adds to this ‘individual’ that I explained, no matter what our MC does, Dumbledore could just throw shade at the MC and he’s gonna be a wanted criminal or the ‘next dark lord’
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Start to finish wonderful writing great characters one of the best books I have read ever I have read probably thousands of books I like how Quinn has an academic side of the story because it shows how awesome he truly is and always will be, I will be checking out these books too.
The mc is completely useless.. I was wondering if it's actually true that the more you stay in wizarding world the more your IQ decrease because that's the case with the mc.. there's so much things he could do better from ideas of inventions to magic usage.. he was portray as skilled and stronger than Dumbledore when he was at his age yet when he was face with Voldemort he was nerfed to the point of being completely useless
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Una historia muy interesante esta bastante bien estructurada y se sumerge en campos de la historia que me gustan mucho creo que es algo largo la parte de la bóvedas
probably the best hp fanfic ive ever read. i highly endorse and encourage that you give this a shot. its so well done ive re-read this like 3 times.
The story starts off as something we all might have thought of at some point but later on evolves into this well thought story full of surprises and exciting moments. I think because later on the story Author didn't work with an editor, chapters were full of small typos. But overall the quality of writing and the way chapters were written was impressive. I think Author really is talented for this kind of stuff. Also it was my first time seeing those small notes for each character at the end of chapters and I must say, I really liked that idea and hope similar examples will be used by other Authors as well. It kind of adds an opportunity to recap the whole chapter and laugh about before the next one. Oh and about the relationship part... Yeah... I, personaly, didn't like the way harem was introduced (sin vault curse) but still later on I found it to be something I quite enjoyed reading about. Yeah sure, Author kind of ignored Daphne for the last like 30 or 40 chapters but still I liked it. "I fully support Harem and will oppose any other options. You don't agree? I. will. take. you. on." Signing off, Your friendly neighborhood bully, Brother Noodles.
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This was a good novel. I liked it at first, good premise, interesting characters (although not too much oc), ok worlbuilding (courtesy of Ms. Rowling), and ok power system. But it fell flat right about the end, more specifically, around half blood prince arc. I didn't understand having a 2nd sin arc, I think it was just for him to get 2 girls. Power system and power scaling was all over the place, it was good at first but went bad when vold and dumbly-dor was involved in the fights. Vigilante was also interesting at first, but then there were no solid developments in terms of character and skill. Just a masked kid killing some side characters, boring and immature. It was ok I guess, maybe I just liked the OG version too much and it interested me when mc was doing all sorts of things differently. Future Mc had a dope introduction, but it was suuuch a major spoiler. All the 'skills' mc had kinda had and all the magic without wand bs honestly wasn't too different if he had a wand. Maybe he could have been better actually. All opinions ofcourse, Great work to the author still. I had a blast reading this.
Reveal Spoiler 1 best stroy for oc fanfic hp world, 5 stars for inovating. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
overall a fun read. there are some grammar issues but nothing that causes the story to be unreadable
It’s a good history, Quinn and the other characters are good, and almost all of this is awesome, in my opinion the late part, starts to become a bit lacking, but the overall is good, hopping to see some epilogue chapters soon.
4/5 estuvo entretenida la historia menos los arcos del color/pecado y no me gustó el harem .....................................................................................................................................................................
I’m on chap 108 and i have no plans of stopping. Honestly the only thing i don’t like about this book is the experimenting and vaults stuff. The amount of social interaction is disappointing. Plus the way he talks to Luna is like hes grooming her but thats kinda funny lol.
Reveal Spoiler i get that every one has their dream of a good story and I'm not this isn't a bad story necessarily but it's just not for me. between the direction of research magic...?? so confused. and the issue with the wand l. I mean come on this is supposed to be a HP inspired story and he treats the wand like poison almost throwing it away and using a fake one. why not just write an original story instead of whatever this is..... anyways not for me but good luck
i dropped it. yea i did. it was great, like I loved it but this bas*ard just has to go and make it a 3some.atleast do that at the beginning to middle phase. like i read up to 350+ chap while supporting Daphne against ivy and he went with a 3 some. just the disappointment I felt ruined my day and I lost interest in a great story.i don't know if i would have taken it better if he confirmed it before but enjoying it till last just to read a utter disappointment of chapter is the worst experience in all the novels I've read.i literally got into a fight with my family in my irritated mood.
Reveal Spoiler Gran historia, me arrepiento de no haberle dado una oportunidad antes. Gracias.
This was great, some elements like time travel were unnecessary (a certain arc where the author basically spoiled the future that follows the books' timeline), but since it didn't affect the ending nor the experience as whole, it's fine 😚
Best reincarnated Harry Potter world novel 100%!!!, original MC character similar cannon story guide but with substantial changes and characters, finished/read it all, hope to find/read the epilogue, if any one know location please let us know :).
It follows the evolution of the MC and how he deals with the situation he finds himself in and especially the addition of the Hogwarts coffers was very well placed, however I found the ending very sudden and without a suitable epilogue, especially with the MC's romance.
MC cooks up wandless casting as ‘natural magic’ that chumps named as legendary in HP world like Merlin, Hogwarts’ founders, Dumbledore, Grindlewald, Voldemort etc could’nt ever think of. Don’t mind OP MC but has to follow some basic rules of the HP world!
Really enjoyed this book, don't know much if anything about writing skills, but so far this is one of the best books I've read :) thanks a lot.
This book is incredibly lit! You made good progress on the book, I assume that this book can be very popular on this. Keep it up this good writing and I'm sure you'll be successful!
This is a harem story. It will lure you with an expectation of a sensible and believable story amd characters at first and then around chapter 310s it reveal itself of what the author want, even disguising the event happened against mc’s intention, a harem is a harem. I put this out here because there’s no harem tag and I don’t want who that not into this disgusting concept to make many great characters less of themselves in just one chapter. I know that this is webnovel, the epidemy of harem and powerfamtasy type, but not putting harem tag in just grind me so much….and the story was going great to till that point.
Alright, here's my review after reading the first fifteen chapters. I'll adjust my review after reading more. If it hadn't been for the great score, I wouldn't have read this far. The whole legilimency thing at the start is incredibly tedious. There's also the magic core thing that smells a lot like mana limitations, though we'll see. Writing quality is great and update too, since the novel is already done. The only annoying thing is the scene breaks. Just leave a space, this isn't a script.
Good writing, decent story, interesting characters. I'm only in chapter twenty, but up till now it seems great. Loving the MC and the family.
This story was beautiful, it touches my heart and I became very fond of many of its characters. This story has given me feelings that I didn't think a fanfic could give me, I have laughed, I have felt the tension of the moments and it has made me cry when I see that this journey comes to an end. I will always carry this story in my heart. Thank you very much for writing it and for giving me so many beautiful moments. Don't give up, you are an author with a great future. I'll wait for the epilogue to see the definitive closure of this memorable piece.
Overall rating: 4.8 It’s a really well made story that ties in with the HP universe and pushing it within boundaries. To put it in a very tl;dr review would be: Alternate Harry Potter Universe. I genuinely really like the MC, to call this story a ‘generic OP MC storyline’ would be somewhat accurate. But it would be missing out on about 75-80% of the whole story. The MC has a personality that feels very real and fleshed out than majority of other books, a strong love for magic, morals and principles from outside influences that may or may not be his fault. You can see his meticulous style in his planning and thoughts. Because this is a reincarnation he does change the fate of some characters, *ahem* Diggory *ahem*. Plus like I said, this is an AU so some of the HP background changed to fit an overall better story structure. What made it and breaks it for me is like everyone else is the vaults. Don’t get me wrong, I love the premise of these vaults that was made by a 5th entity, these vaults are so well fleshed out that it feel like a complete canonical entry in the books. It just could have been handled better especially the one that made some, or even most people drop this wonder of a book. Another one was the very ‘not-so-sudden’ sudden romance, it was there and most of us saw it but we just didn’t like it. Aside from that the ending was a lot more rushed that I would have liked it but I see the problem and the author had mentioned his reasons. But overall if you power through just those things. You would get a book that, dare I say it, ruin every other HP book that has come out. A near 10/10 book for me. P.S. I know a lot of people hate the fact that the Author makes the MC super OP super early on. I would say this, is a near perfect way to make a character super OP and get away with it. Not the drawbacks, but an additional individual (i.e. Dumbledore) that has sky-high power that even our super-amped up MC can’t beat. They don’t have to be strong in the traditional sense, I would say Dumbledore and Grindelwald are the two perfect examples of this ‘individual’. Let’s take a look at Grindelwald first, yes he’s powerful in the traditional sense but he has an ambitious goal with that powerful charisma that can make others join his cause. Then the one above all, Dumbledore. He has what Grindelwald has and more, his status of defeating two dark lords alongside his political power as a supreme mugwump, apart from that he has the goodwill of the common folk which adds to this ‘individual’ that I explained, no matter what our MC does, Dumbledore could just throw shade at the MC and he’s gonna be a wanted criminal or the ‘next dark lord’
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Start to finish wonderful writing great characters one of the best books I have read ever I have read probably thousands of books I like how Quinn has an academic side of the story because it shows how awesome he truly is and always will be, I will be checking out these books too.
The mc is completely useless.. I was wondering if it's actually true that the more you stay in wizarding world the more your IQ decrease because that's the case with the mc.. there's so much things he could do better from ideas of inventions to magic usage.. he was portray as skilled and stronger than Dumbledore when he was at his age yet when he was face with Voldemort he was nerfed to the point of being completely useless
Reveal Spoiler Una historia muy interesante esta bastante bien estructurada y se sumerge en campos de la historia que me gustan mucho creo que es algo largo la parte de la bóvedas
probably the best hp fanfic ive ever read. i highly endorse and encourage that you give this a shot. its so well done ive re-read this like 3 times.
The story starts off as something we all might have thought of at some point but later on evolves into this well thought story full of surprises and exciting moments. I think because later on the story Author didn't work with an editor, chapters were full of small typos. But overall the quality of writing and the way chapters were written was impressive. I think Author really is talented for this kind of stuff. Also it was my first time seeing those small notes for each character at the end of chapters and I must say, I really liked that idea and hope similar examples will be used by other Authors as well. It kind of adds an opportunity to recap the whole chapter and laugh about before the next one. Oh and about the relationship part... Yeah... I, personaly, didn't like the way harem was introduced (sin vault curse) but still later on I found it to be something I quite enjoyed reading about. Yeah sure, Author kind of ignored Daphne for the last like 30 or 40 chapters but still I liked it. "I fully support Harem and will oppose any other options. You don't agree? I. will. take. you. on." Signing off, Your friendly neighborhood bully, Brother Noodles.
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This was a good novel. I liked it at first, good premise, interesting characters (although not too much oc), ok worlbuilding (courtesy of Ms. Rowling), and ok power system. But it fell flat right about the end, more specifically, around half blood prince arc. I didn't understand having a 2nd sin arc, I think it was just for him to get 2 girls. Power system and power scaling was all over the place, it was good at first but went bad when vold and dumbly-dor was involved in the fights. Vigilante was also interesting at first, but then there were no solid developments in terms of character and skill. Just a masked kid killing some side characters, boring and immature. It was ok I guess, maybe I just liked the OG version too much and it interested me when mc was doing all sorts of things differently. Future Mc had a dope introduction, but it was suuuch a major spoiler. All the 'skills' mc had kinda had and all the magic without wand bs honestly wasn't too different if he had a wand. Maybe he could have been better actually. All opinions ofcourse, Great work to the author still. I had a blast reading this.
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