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honestly i'm enjoying this kind of fanfic where mc is a butler i just hope i don't have a fetish in butlers, however i like to read different fanfics i hope you don't drop this fanfic
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is this dropped because if so ill remove it from my library it will save me a lot of trouble? if not then I'm definitely keeping it there.9.2/10.
So far it is beautifully written and well thought out. every chapter draws in the reader allowing for immersion into the story and leaving them begging for more and I can't wait to see where it goes from here
꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!
I never expected this to be one of my DxD fanfic to ever read. Introduction of characters isn’t tense, Character progression is also good, grammar is the best. I’m very intrigued on how you’ll introduce both tsugumi and sora to the supernatural world, as well as what faction would they belong.
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Well I can't really write much of a review on 4 chapters alone. But I do hope that you don't drop this book any time soon, so far it seems very interesting. Your english is good. Continue with the great work!
High School DXD - I AM GAME Keep Going and Best Of Luck ..... High School DXD - I AM GAME Keep Going and Best Of Luck ..... High School DXD - I AM GAME Keep Going and Best Of Luck ..... High School DXD - I AM GAME Keep Going and Best Of Luck .....
It one of my favorite autor si i put 5 before i read *******×******************************************************************************************************************×***********************************************************************************************************
this is a good start of a story keep it up__________________________________________________________________________________________________
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honestly i'm enjoying this kind of fanfic where mc is a butler i just hope i don't have a fetish in butlers, however i like to read different fanfics i hope you don't drop this fanfic
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is this dropped because if so ill remove it from my library it will save me a lot of trouble? if not then I'm definitely keeping it there.9.2/10.
So far it is beautifully written and well thought out. every chapter draws in the reader allowing for immersion into the story and leaving them begging for more and I can't wait to see where it goes from here
꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!
I never expected this to be one of my DxD fanfic to ever read. Introduction of characters isn’t tense, Character progression is also good, grammar is the best. I’m very intrigued on how you’ll introduce both tsugumi and sora to the supernatural world, as well as what faction would they belong.
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Well I can't really write much of a review on 4 chapters alone. But I do hope that you don't drop this book any time soon, so far it seems very interesting. Your english is good. Continue with the great work!
High School DXD - I AM GAME Keep Going and Best Of Luck ..... High School DXD - I AM GAME Keep Going and Best Of Luck ..... High School DXD - I AM GAME Keep Going and Best Of Luck ..... High School DXD - I AM GAME Keep Going and Best Of Luck .....
It one of my favorite autor si i put 5 before i read *******×******************************************************************************************************************×***********************************************************************************************************
this is a good start of a story keep it up__________________________________________________________________________________________________
100/10