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New chapter I need a new chapter. Your story is great but the English is confusing I understand it's not your language and you maybe just editting but even so improve. MORE CHAPTERS!!!!
The writing is so bad that after reading the entire first chapter, I still have no idea what's supposed to be happening... idk if it's just a terrible translation or if it's actually poorly written...
I like the story btw, only the grammar is the problem but it's fine I'm use to reading raws I only hope that author continue this story it's interesting because it talks about league of legends cause I also play it, but where is the romance???
The grammer needs some serious editing even the edited version looks really rough and sometimes hard to understand.. . . .. ....... .. .. .... ... .
Mostly 😅This kind of book is on many raw novel sites like trxs. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Unbearable to read, i think this still need to be edited by someone who is really good in english or be translated from raw by a pro translator, its not much different than reading mtl its just slightly better.
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Good book in my opinion ........................................................................................................................
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mano gostei muito do seu trabalho comecei a ler era 19:00 horas e terminei 00:00 kkk espero que você continue .............................. .....
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I enjoy what you find so far I hope to see it continue. I understand how he could fully put to use that name bloodfallen. He's already got a beast physique All he needs to do is upgraded until it says immortal at the end. because in a lot of fiction vamps have a beast connection of a kind or another.
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
****er you call this a story every chapter contains 80% inner monologue and information about fairy tail and 20% action scene oh my god do you think in the whole world you're the only person who have watched fairy tail that you need to explain every fucking thing we are not as dumb as you even just having a little bit of common sense a person can already understand what's happening
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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New chapter I need a new chapter. Your story is great but the English is confusing I understand it's not your language and you maybe just editting but even so improve. MORE CHAPTERS!!!!
The writing is so bad that after reading the entire first chapter, I still have no idea what's supposed to be happening... idk if it's just a terrible translation or if it's actually poorly written...
I like the story btw, only the grammar is the problem but it's fine I'm use to reading raws I only hope that author continue this story it's interesting because it talks about league of legends cause I also play it, but where is the romance???
The grammer needs some serious editing even the edited version looks really rough and sometimes hard to understand.. . . .. ....... .. .. .... ... .
Mostly 😅This kind of book is on many raw novel sites like trxs. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Unbearable to read, i think this still need to be edited by someone who is really good in english or be translated from raw by a pro translator, its not much different than reading mtl its just slightly better.
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Good book in my opinion ........................................................................................................................
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Im very dissapointed......................😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
mano gostei muito do seu trabalho comecei a ler era 19:00 horas e terminei 00:00 kkk espero que você continue .............................. .....
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I enjoy what you find so far I hope to see it continue. I understand how he could fully put to use that name bloodfallen. He's already got a beast physique All he needs to do is upgraded until it says immortal at the end. because in a lot of fiction vamps have a beast connection of a kind or another.
Reveal Spoilerthe story is good but the mc is stupid[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
****er you call this a story every chapter contains 80% inner monologue and information about fairy tail and 20% action scene oh my god do you think in the whole world you're the only person who have watched fairy tail that you need to explain every fucking thing we are not as dumb as you even just having a little bit of common sense a person can already understand what's happening
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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histoire incomprehensible comme la grammaire