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Average story. Everything is Force. Relationship, Romance, Wedding. and we have Beta male. sigh.
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I'm So so MAD! fucking MC so So Sooooooo stupid what's the Use of shop function when you don't buy antidote???????? it's already at chapter 40+ and the fucking poison was not removed why are you so stupid? if I'm there I'll fucking kill the MC on the spot
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Maybe the story got better after 30 chapters, but I couldn't keep reading. The whole world hates MC for no reason, yet MC somehow doesn't notice it for 15 years. His decisions are super weird. Instead of buying a potion to cure himself of poison, he buys 2 space storages. like WTF is going on?
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I really like the novel. start of the novel was quite bad but its get better and better as the novel progresses. I really hope author doesn't drop the novel.
can you include the privilege option to your work? I would like to read the other chapters because I feel that getting 1 chapter per day is slow and I hate waiting.
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The book is good and I can see that this author is inexperienced but kudos to you for at least starting something and hope you keep up the good work 🤩🤩🤩🤩
The story is good and I can see that author is trying to balance the fantasy and reality and I appreciate the hard work. But I think, that the story is a little slow but that is covered up by the view presented by the author. I would say,good work author and keep it up. ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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I love this novel. development of mc is very good. Though I don't like his name. most characters have western names who lives in eastern world. mc has indian name which I like. but then he chooses Japanese name. I think if you had chosen Japanese names first, which shows that his mind is stuck in the anime world, nd then chose a villainous name like ravan, or shakuni, or kans. it would have been amazing. raj is a fine name too. but orochi name just doesn't feel right. I remember reading 1 novel which also had the concept of mc using stats in cultivation world, but it failed in the story department. but this one is pretty good. it takes time and the development is realistic. I specially love the indian references. are you gujarati too like me?? And I appreciate the effort you put in for the lore behind monsters. But I would like to say that you move on from the first arc soon. bcz i feel like we have spent too much time here. it is time for mc to explore. also, don't make the loli girl harem member. and if you do, then don't make it loli. she feels like a child to me. if she matures then I don't have a problem. keep up the good work. I'm supporting you with power stones. I would give at least 1 power stone to you everyday.
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Average story. Everything is Force. Relationship, Romance, Wedding. and we have Beta male. sigh.
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I'm So so MAD! fucking MC so So Sooooooo stupid what's the Use of shop function when you don't buy antidote???????? it's already at chapter 40+ and the fucking poison was not removed why are you so stupid? if I'm there I'll fucking kill the MC on the spot
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Maybe the story got better after 30 chapters, but I couldn't keep reading. The whole world hates MC for no reason, yet MC somehow doesn't notice it for 15 years. His decisions are super weird. Instead of buying a potion to cure himself of poison, he buys 2 space storages. like WTF is going on?
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I really like the novel. start of the novel was quite bad but its get better and better as the novel progresses. I really hope author doesn't drop the novel.
can you include the privilege option to your work? I would like to read the other chapters because I feel that getting 1 chapter per day is slow and I hate waiting.
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The book is good and I can see that this author is inexperienced but kudos to you for at least starting something and hope you keep up the good work 🤩🤩🤩🤩
The story is good and I can see that author is trying to balance the fantasy and reality and I appreciate the hard work. But I think, that the story is a little slow but that is covered up by the view presented by the author. I would say,good work author and keep it up. ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Good Work Author! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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I love this novel. development of mc is very good. Though I don't like his name. most characters have western names who lives in eastern world. mc has indian name which I like. but then he chooses Japanese name. I think if you had chosen Japanese names first, which shows that his mind is stuck in the anime world, nd then chose a villainous name like ravan, or shakuni, or kans. it would have been amazing. raj is a fine name too. but orochi name just doesn't feel right. I remember reading 1 novel which also had the concept of mc using stats in cultivation world, but it failed in the story department. but this one is pretty good. it takes time and the development is realistic. I specially love the indian references. are you gujarati too like me?? And I appreciate the effort you put in for the lore behind monsters. But I would like to say that you move on from the first arc soon. bcz i feel like we have spent too much time here. it is time for mc to explore. also, don't make the loli girl harem member. and if you do, then don't make it loli. she feels like a child to me. if she matures then I don't have a problem. keep up the good work. I'm supporting you with power stones. I would give at least 1 power stone to you everyday.
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