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at first glance I felt story somewhat going slower pace but after 50+ chapters I really starting liking it . I loved character like ray and Tyson beside MC and specially chemistry with FMC ❤ keep going 🔥 🔥
The story just wasn't executed nicely. The bad grammar doesn't even help, it just worsen it a lot more. The characters stay true to their characters and has a lot to improve. The main problem about this story is that why doesn't he have skills or elemental affinity. According to the first chapter, he and his father had a pretty close relationship. So, which father will leave their son to their own, without any help if he can give him help without problems? How does that 25% increase even help with those low number of stats? I'd rather ask for all elemental affinities than those garbage increase. This is also showing signs of "saving the damsel in distress" cliche. Scarlett isn't showing firm character and she's the first heroine. Imagine having the guts to always reject any guy but having no will to fight back against her cousin. She also has her family's bias but she can't get help? That's just BS. Even an arrogant young master in xianxia is better than her. At least, they have the guts to fight back or scheme even it's idiotic. Scarlett acting cold and ruthless to the outside and looking like an naive and pitiful girl at home is just???? I don't know how does that even make sense.
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everyone who thinking reading this novel let me tell you should read it. it's highly recommend. I personally liked character developments though it's kinda slow but loved it. here is 5 from me. you deserved It
at first glance I felt story somewhat going slower pace but after 50+ chapters I really starting liking it . I loved character like ray and Tyson beside MC and specially chemistry with FMC ❤ keep going 🔥 🔥
The story just wasn't executed nicely. The bad grammar doesn't even help, it just worsen it a lot more. The characters stay true to their characters and has a lot to improve. The main problem about this story is that why doesn't he have skills or elemental affinity. According to the first chapter, he and his father had a pretty close relationship. So, which father will leave their son to their own, without any help if he can give him help without problems? How does that 25% increase even help with those low number of stats? I'd rather ask for all elemental affinities than those garbage increase. This is also showing signs of "saving the damsel in distress" cliche. Scarlett isn't showing firm character and she's the first heroine. Imagine having the guts to always reject any guy but having no will to fight back against her cousin. She also has her family's bias but she can't get help? That's just BS. Even an arrogant young master in xianxia is better than her. At least, they have the guts to fight back or scheme even it's idiotic. Scarlett acting cold and ruthless to the outside and looking like an naive and pitiful girl at home is just???? I don't know how does that even make sense.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact: kerawood.review@gmail.com
let's see if it's good or not, sounds like it is👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
everyone who thinking reading this novel let me tell you should read it. it's highly recommend. I personally liked character developments though it's kinda slow but loved it. here is 5 from me. you deserved It