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NOVEL MANTAP, NOVEL BAGUS, NOVEL MEGAH, NOVEL MEWAH TAPI MURAH, NOVEL YANG MENGHILANGKAN DEPRESI, NOVEL PENGHIBUR, TETAP SEMANGAT AKAN KAMI TUNGGU LANJUTANNYA THOR..........
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Author, I don't know how you're going to build the ship, because I'm still on chapter 10 (I'm a new reader), but I wanted to suggest a fruit that I thought of, that you could feed to Bell's ship (it's an invented fruit), it flame Transform Transform No Mi, based on Transforms, the fruit can follow two paths: The first being that the ship can transform into a Transforms; The second is that the ship has the power to transform into any vehicle, from cars to planes or even spacecraft (now if you want to be simpler, the ship can only transform into other types of ships, but in this case I thought of the name of the fruit, instead of Transform Transform No Mi would be Ship Ship No Mi).
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has to be some of the funniest stuff I have ever read🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
honestly haven't laughed so hard in a while, thanks a lot Author-san you've made my day. please don't end it too fast though, your reaching the climax pretty fast with Bellamy being so overpowered.
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So far, chapter 22, the story is great. Although the writing is only above average with some mistakes, the creativity of the author and explanation of the powers are fantastic. Also the the author doesn’t use the main cast of one piece which is a plus in my opinion. He explores characters that i wasn’t familiar with and creates new ones that are very interesting.
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For a story of self insert into one Piece world, it is quite good. Refreshing as it breaks the canon storyline. The story pace is fast, so I am worried when it reach past the current Canon, the story would deviate too far in the world background.
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Spoilers may be found below. This is essentially a crack fiction and wish fulfilment. There is no goal that the protagonist has. No foreshadowing for an enemy that could oppose him. But let’s move to the proper review. Be warned though, there are only 10 chapters as of this moment so my entire review is based off them. . . . Writing Quality: 2 1. This is written like a report. When I was reading it, I felt like I told someone to report to me the events that took place and make it humorous. Which really doesn’t go well together. There has not been a single proper dialogue in the novel. . . . Updating Stability: 4 2. There are only 10 chapters as of this moment within 3 days. It is entirely possible that the author will not be able to keep updating this quickly. . . . Story Development: 2 Character Design: 2 3. To be honest, this 2 is more out of me being unable to give 1 star to someone to has put in so much effort into writing. (It is very hard to write a story, especially with such worlds.) As of this moment, there is no story. It is detailing the journey of a man transmigrated into Bellamy, who happens to be the Grandson of Vice-Admiral Tsuyu (This wasn’t stated in canon so it’s AU.) There were multiple storylines that could have been turned into arcs but it wasn’t to be. He gained a lot of strength in a very short time. As a reader, I was unable to gain any fulfilment out of his growth. There was simply no struggle. No reason to be strong. He just decided, for no reason whatsoever, to become strong. And get a Harem. Ugh... harem. I can understand 2-3 women but more than that is just overdoing it. Then it just becomes a Waifu Catalogue. It’s like being Ash But horny instead of adventurous. “Gotta Catch ‘Em All!!!” Also, tbh I didn’t really note any age given of the man who transmigrated but there was almost nothing whatsoever. It is as if the person who transmigrated was a trash of society who only watched one piece and a few other anime. There has been absolutely no discussion of his friends, anything he would miss. He transmigrated and was all, “Alright!!! Yeah!!!!” I felt like I was reading about a baby psychopath in the making. The other characters are also not very touched upon. They act very much like extensions of his will then their own people. . . . Just realised I already talked about character design earlier. World Background: 4 This is the one piece world and although, the author hasn’t captured the essence of the world, I mean he hasn’t really given his own take on the world. He has drastically increased the competence of the researchers living there but that doesn’t really hold any meaning. Where is the overpowering sense of mystery as to what is the ‘one piece’. The truth behind ‘Devil fruits’? The history of the fabled ‘Void Century’. . . . Well, that was my review. I think this is the nicest review I have ever written. Huh. Interesting. . To the Author: Keep writing and I look to forward to seeing where you take this story. Will you drop it? Will it go on an undefined time of ‘hiatus’. Or will it continue. Also, is the thing about Bellamy being a reverse of Luffy true? To other readers, I hope this review helped.
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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Love the idea of someone being reborn as Bellamy but it takes a weird turn with the future crewmates having devil fruits that are “OP” or they were so powerful that the world government will be after them once they find out.... idk seems like it was just forced into the story and now the side characters have OP devil fruits while the mc is just there with his spring fruit..... and being an actual child but somehow knows haki..... had potential to be a great fanfic but the author rushed his progress and made the crews DF something dumb. Rating may change but how it is going now it will most likely be rated lower... hoping this gets better
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Just here to say that this is a very enjoyable and well written book, I didn't notice any grammar mistakes or misspellings. Because of there is only 4 chapters I cant say much about the story development or stability of updates but the mc has been (in my opinion) quite well fleshed out for the short time the author has had and I've got a feel for his character. I hope this author keeps updating and if he does I'll make sure to give my power stones as well.
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Author, I don't know how you're going to build the ship, because I'm still on chapter 10 (I'm a new reader), but I wanted to suggest a fruit that I thought of, that you could feed to Bell's ship (it's an invented fruit), it flame Transform Transform No Mi, based on Transforms, the fruit can follow two paths: The first being that the ship can transform into a Transforms; The second is that the ship has the power to transform into any vehicle, from cars to planes or even spacecraft (now if you want to be simpler, the ship can only transform into other types of ships, but in this case I thought of the name of the fruit, instead of Transform Transform No Mi would be Ship Ship No Mi).
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has to be some of the funniest stuff I have ever read🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
honestly haven't laughed so hard in a while, thanks a lot Author-san you've made my day. please don't end it too fast though, your reaching the climax pretty fast with Bellamy being so overpowered.
love it hope you continue love it hope you continue love it hope you continue love it hope you continue love it hope you continue love it hope you continue
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So far, chapter 22, the story is great. Although the writing is only above average with some mistakes, the creativity of the author and explanation of the powers are fantastic. Also the the author doesn’t use the main cast of one piece which is a plus in my opinion. He explores characters that i wasn’t familiar with and creates new ones that are very interesting.
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For a story of self insert into one Piece world, it is quite good. Refreshing as it breaks the canon storyline. The story pace is fast, so I am worried when it reach past the current Canon, the story would deviate too far in the world background.
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Spoilers may be found below. This is essentially a crack fiction and wish fulfilment. There is no goal that the protagonist has. No foreshadowing for an enemy that could oppose him. But let’s move to the proper review. Be warned though, there are only 10 chapters as of this moment so my entire review is based off them. . . . Writing Quality: 2 1. This is written like a report. When I was reading it, I felt like I told someone to report to me the events that took place and make it humorous. Which really doesn’t go well together. There has not been a single proper dialogue in the novel. . . . Updating Stability: 4 2. There are only 10 chapters as of this moment within 3 days. It is entirely possible that the author will not be able to keep updating this quickly. . . . Story Development: 2 Character Design: 2 3. To be honest, this 2 is more out of me being unable to give 1 star to someone to has put in so much effort into writing. (It is very hard to write a story, especially with such worlds.) As of this moment, there is no story. It is detailing the journey of a man transmigrated into Bellamy, who happens to be the Grandson of Vice-Admiral Tsuyu (This wasn’t stated in canon so it’s AU.) There were multiple storylines that could have been turned into arcs but it wasn’t to be. He gained a lot of strength in a very short time. As a reader, I was unable to gain any fulfilment out of his growth. There was simply no struggle. No reason to be strong. He just decided, for no reason whatsoever, to become strong. And get a Harem. Ugh... harem. I can understand 2-3 women but more than that is just overdoing it. Then it just becomes a Waifu Catalogue. It’s like being Ash But horny instead of adventurous. “Gotta Catch ‘Em All!!!” Also, tbh I didn’t really note any age given of the man who transmigrated but there was almost nothing whatsoever. It is as if the person who transmigrated was a trash of society who only watched one piece and a few other anime. There has been absolutely no discussion of his friends, anything he would miss. He transmigrated and was all, “Alright!!! Yeah!!!!” I felt like I was reading about a baby psychopath in the making. The other characters are also not very touched upon. They act very much like extensions of his will then their own people. . . . Just realised I already talked about character design earlier. World Background: 4 This is the one piece world and although, the author hasn’t captured the essence of the world, I mean he hasn’t really given his own take on the world. He has drastically increased the competence of the researchers living there but that doesn’t really hold any meaning. Where is the overpowering sense of mystery as to what is the ‘one piece’. The truth behind ‘Devil fruits’? The history of the fabled ‘Void Century’. . . . Well, that was my review. I think this is the nicest review I have ever written. Huh. Interesting. . To the Author: Keep writing and I look to forward to seeing where you take this story. Will you drop it? Will it go on an undefined time of ‘hiatus’. Or will it continue. Also, is the thing about Bellamy being a reverse of Luffy true? To other readers, I hope this review helped.
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1. is this ntr 2. whether he will care for and look after the women in his harem 3. Is this a big harem 1. is this ntr 2. whether he will care for and look after the women in his harem 3. Is this a big harem
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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Love the idea of someone being reborn as Bellamy but it takes a weird turn with the future crewmates having devil fruits that are “OP” or they were so powerful that the world government will be after them once they find out.... idk seems like it was just forced into the story and now the side characters have OP devil fruits while the mc is just there with his spring fruit..... and being an actual child but somehow knows haki..... had potential to be a great fanfic but the author rushed his progress and made the crews DF something dumb. Rating may change but how it is going now it will most likely be rated lower... hoping this gets better
interesing history. *************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Just here to say that this is a very enjoyable and well written book, I didn't notice any grammar mistakes or misspellings. Because of there is only 4 chapters I cant say much about the story development or stability of updates but the mc has been (in my opinion) quite well fleshed out for the short time the author has had and I've got a feel for his character. I hope this author keeps updating and if he does I'll make sure to give my power stones as well.
awesome story.