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I am loving this story soooooo MUCH!!! The characters are so realistic, the interplay between them and the dynamics of the situations they are in are always surprisingly refreshing and SUPER addictive! I wait everyday for a new chapter to come out so I can read it!!!!
I can't believed that I forgotted to post a review beforeπ This is the kind of story that really can make your day, but beware you day could me happy, sad, worried, excited, warm or cozy .. all this difference is because author can make you feel so many emotions, love or hate characters and a great portraited trama.ππππ€© Y para los lectores de habla hispana, echense un clavado en esta historia les aseguro que se ahogaran entre tantas emociones que no querrΓ‘n dejarla.πππ
I can't think of anything to say to it's overall performance, but it has a great storyline, characters and plot.
A must-read. Don't sleep on this one to experience a great novel. This is the one
i love the book, i want more of it, i hope the author returns to give us more
ahhh this book was soo good, the writing let me feel the modd of the characters and sometimes it was so good that I even cried because I just felt for the characters!! I think this book is a definitely must read because it just envokes your emotions and ,... I just cant describe it. Thanks author for this gooood read π
I am so bummed out. I hope this wasnβt dropped forever or something happened to the writer. Such a good story, it deserves a proper ending.
I reall like this book. This is actually my first comment Iβve ever written. I hope with this you could uploads more chapters to come as well as other books. God job !!!!
A very readable story. Sad in the beginning especially the abusive Alpha. The story develops nicely and I cannot help but look forward to the reconciliation of the lovers and also the closure of Omega's family plots. But the story seems to stop. Hope the author can continue.
PLease author, update this sTory soon! I found this book only few days agi and I think your stOry is awesome. Well written anD the charactherS are deeply built ! 5 stars rate !!!!
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Amei a histΓ³ria atΓ© momento espero que o heath se ferre e Kaiden seja feliz e Damon sofra mais um pouquinho e entenda o quanto ele negligenciou o Kaiden e quanto ele marchou ele.
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This is easily my favorite story on Webnovel. It has been an emotional roller coaster-I actually cried several times. The characters Are very well developed and you immediately feel a connection with them. I also love the authors take on the Omegaverse (i.e. the omega nest). I have been patiently waiting for the next chapter for quite a while and continuously check several times a day to see if there are any updates. My only wish is that our author continues to post chapters more frequently. I canβt wait to see what happens next.
I like your writing so much... Their love and hate relationship really interesting... So I want continue with this further πPlz go on with more updates.. I want to see them together as soon as possible πππππ
Just started reading this book and really love it. I had become one of my top fav book to read β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈππππππππππππ
I absolutely love this roller coaster ride of a story! The characters are well developed and over filled with emotions, you end up crying along side the characters hating, hoping, loving β€ β₯ π So many twists and turns throughout the first volume, I sit and wait on pins and needles for the next chapter. I can't wait to see what the author has planned for the couples and friends. Its a great read definitely worth your time reading.
Ugh, 5 stars. I'm so sad right now, this reminds me of a story I read once. T-T T-T T-T I'm ready for some fluff, and waiting for the babies
I'm really loving this story. One of my favourite omegaverse stories I've read so far. I'm a huge sucker for angst and if u guys are here for some slow burn, angst and a satisfying alpha-omega story, then u are at right place π
Ahh eu ameiii β‘(Σ¦ο½Σ¦ο½‘) . TambΓ©m vΓ‘rios ciscos , caiu nos meus olhos ΰ²₯_ΰ²₯ΰ²₯_ΰ²₯ΰ²₯_ΰ²₯. β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ Estou completamente arrependida de ler rΓ‘pido demais . Terminei em um sΓ³ dia ΰ²₯βΏΰ²₯
you're writing is top tier, but all these lingering secrets and questions not good for my heart. Damon is frustrating me with his lack of intuition and Kaiden need some fangs...
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Great story! I like the world building ,especially the way it explains the pheromone complexities and all that.The fact that omegas also have a choice in bonding is something I always wanted omegaverse stories. Looking forward for your updates,author!
Me too, I just added this book on my library three days ago and it took me two days to finish it. it's awesome, really awesome. Update more chapters regularly please. It will be really niceπ
I look for the story updates everyday! I can't wait for the next chapters! It really is a great story, everyone should give it a try! π₯°π₯°π₯°
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no way so unfair ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ my heart is so broken ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ πππππππππππππππ
On ch. 35 and so far loving and hating this book. Kaidens experiences make me wanna cry. I want to hug him so bad. At this point Damon does not deserve him and i hope they donβt end up together. Iβm hoping Kaiden overcomes his fated pair bond and finds someone who wonβt hurt him like Damon does. Someone who will love him deeply and completely. Just thinking about him and Damon together in any capasity makes my skin itch. Also i really want him to get healing for himself. Poor boy needs it and more. Now as the story goes on will i change my mind? I donβt know. Will Damon reedeem himself? I donβt know. I do like his new friendships and I hope they stay and continue strong. Looking foward to the next chapters
i love itππ. You bring in your readers with your writingβ¨. first chapter and i'm hooked. read it all night and i'm mad because i want more. give us more pleaseπ€π€
In celebration of writing the 10th chapter, I am once again writing a shameless review. This is a story between two characters loving each other at different times, so it is full of angst and frustrations. Although there are fluffy moments in between, the road to healing and redemption is long and arduous. I hope that you, the reader, can accompany them through tears, heartbreak, and enventually joy as you watch these characters grow and become better. Enjoy!
I am loving this story soooooo MUCH!!! The characters are so realistic, the interplay between them and the dynamics of the situations they are in are always surprisingly refreshing and SUPER addictive! I wait everyday for a new chapter to come out so I can read it!!!!
I can't believed that I forgotted to post a review beforeπ This is the kind of story that really can make your day, but beware you day could me happy, sad, worried, excited, warm or cozy .. all this difference is because author can make you feel so many emotions, love or hate characters and a great portraited trama.ππππ€© Y para los lectores de habla hispana, echense un clavado en esta historia les aseguro que se ahogaran entre tantas emociones que no querrΓ‘n dejarla.πππ
I can't think of anything to say to it's overall performance, but it has a great storyline, characters and plot.
A must-read. Don't sleep on this one to experience a great novel. This is the one
i love the book, i want more of it, i hope the author returns to give us more
ahhh this book was soo good, the writing let me feel the modd of the characters and sometimes it was so good that I even cried because I just felt for the characters!! I think this book is a definitely must read because it just envokes your emotions and ,... I just cant describe it. Thanks author for this gooood read π
I am so bummed out. I hope this wasnβt dropped forever or something happened to the writer. Such a good story, it deserves a proper ending.
I reall like this book. This is actually my first comment Iβve ever written. I hope with this you could uploads more chapters to come as well as other books. God job !!!!
A very readable story. Sad in the beginning especially the abusive Alpha. The story develops nicely and I cannot help but look forward to the reconciliation of the lovers and also the closure of Omega's family plots. But the story seems to stop. Hope the author can continue.
PLease author, update this sTory soon! I found this book only few days agi and I think your stOry is awesome. Well written anD the charactherS are deeply built ! 5 stars rate !!!!
in completeπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Amei a histΓ³ria atΓ© momento espero que o heath se ferre e Kaiden seja feliz e Damon sofra mais um pouquinho e entenda o quanto ele negligenciou o Kaiden e quanto ele marchou ele.
Reveal Spoiler This is easily my favorite story on Webnovel. It has been an emotional roller coaster-I actually cried several times. The characters Are very well developed and you immediately feel a connection with them. I also love the authors take on the Omegaverse (i.e. the omega nest). I have been patiently waiting for the next chapter for quite a while and continuously check several times a day to see if there are any updates. My only wish is that our author continues to post chapters more frequently. I canβt wait to see what happens next.
I like your writing so much... Their love and hate relationship really interesting... So I want continue with this further πPlz go on with more updates.. I want to see them together as soon as possible πππππ
Just started reading this book and really love it. I had become one of my top fav book to read β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈππππππππππππ
I absolutely love this roller coaster ride of a story! The characters are well developed and over filled with emotions, you end up crying along side the characters hating, hoping, loving β€ β₯ π So many twists and turns throughout the first volume, I sit and wait on pins and needles for the next chapter. I can't wait to see what the author has planned for the couples and friends. Its a great read definitely worth your time reading.
Ugh, 5 stars. I'm so sad right now, this reminds me of a story I read once. T-T T-T T-T I'm ready for some fluff, and waiting for the babies
I'm really loving this story. One of my favourite omegaverse stories I've read so far. I'm a huge sucker for angst and if u guys are here for some slow burn, angst and a satisfying alpha-omega story, then u are at right place π
Ahh eu ameiii β‘(Σ¦ο½Σ¦ο½‘) . TambΓ©m vΓ‘rios ciscos , caiu nos meus olhos ΰ²₯_ΰ²₯ΰ²₯_ΰ²₯ΰ²₯_ΰ²₯. β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ Estou completamente arrependida de ler rΓ‘pido demais . Terminei em um sΓ³ dia ΰ²₯βΏΰ²₯
you're writing is top tier, but all these lingering secrets and questions not good for my heart. Damon is frustrating me with his lack of intuition and Kaiden need some fangs...
Reveal Spoiler β¨ππ©ππ©ππ©β¨ πΆπππππππΆ ππππππππ π€πΆπΊπΆπ΅π’πΆπΈ Party Time! ππ±π±π±π±π π±πππ©ππ± π±ππππ©π± π±π©ππππ± π±ππ©πππ± ππ±π±π±π±π ππ °π °πππππ π °πππ °πππ °π π °π °π °π °ππ °π °π ° π °πππ °πππ °π π °πππ °ππππ
Great story! I like the world building ,especially the way it explains the pheromone complexities and all that.The fact that omegas also have a choice in bonding is something I always wanted omegaverse stories. Looking forward for your updates,author!
Me too, I just added this book on my library three days ago and it took me two days to finish it. it's awesome, really awesome. Update more chapters regularly please. It will be really niceπ
I look for the story updates everyday! I can't wait for the next chapters! It really is a great story, everyone should give it a try! π₯°π₯°π₯°
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππlove This book keep it up
no way so unfair ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ my heart is so broken ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ πππππππππππππππ
On ch. 35 and so far loving and hating this book. Kaidens experiences make me wanna cry. I want to hug him so bad. At this point Damon does not deserve him and i hope they donβt end up together. Iβm hoping Kaiden overcomes his fated pair bond and finds someone who wonβt hurt him like Damon does. Someone who will love him deeply and completely. Just thinking about him and Damon together in any capasity makes my skin itch. Also i really want him to get healing for himself. Poor boy needs it and more. Now as the story goes on will i change my mind? I donβt know. Will Damon reedeem himself? I donβt know. I do like his new friendships and I hope they stay and continue strong. Looking foward to the next chapters
i love itππ. You bring in your readers with your writingβ¨. first chapter and i'm hooked. read it all night and i'm mad because i want more. give us more pleaseπ€π€
In celebration of writing the 10th chapter, I am once again writing a shameless review. This is a story between two characters loving each other at different times, so it is full of angst and frustrations. Although there are fluffy moments in between, the road to healing and redemption is long and arduous. I hope that you, the reader, can accompany them through tears, heartbreak, and enventually joy as you watch these characters grow and become better. Enjoy!